Starting from Wu Qin Xi, a Human Martial God Appears!

The writing is good, but it looks like it's a group time travel. There's more than just the protagonist and a time traveler? I don't understand what story the author wants to write 🙂

It was expected to be a big hit at the beginning, but later the suspected time traveler fellow and Ms. Zhao stopped working. It was still the same set of beauties giving opportunities.

The front is okay, but the back is nothing. You have a world where there are evil spirits in martial arts. What you write about is Sun Dasheng, and what is the legacy of another time-traveling saint?

There is nothing wrong with the writing, but the writing is too detailed, the pace is too slow, and the feeling is not high. The battle of wits and courage in a novice village takes too long, and it is difficult to make people interested in reading.

My impressions after watching this, it's the best! The protagonist's self-righteousness is secondary, the author's self-righteousness in creation is too obvious! To elaborate, first of all, the protagonist was given a plug-in and at the same time squeezed the growth environment to the limit in order to reduce the level, but failed to grasp the balance, and dared to bargain for benefits every time. This was seriously contrary to the background, and seemed to be too good to the protagonist. So you are self-righteous! The main reason is that the background only considers the need to suppress the protagonist, and does not consider the logic that this wealthy family should have to maintain itself! Secondly, some of the dialogues are too detailed, and the communication between the protagonist and his family is too close. It is like standing under the sun. There should be one or several main plots. For example, the struggle between the powerful and powerful gang Chaoyan Monster attracts all the attention, and the protagonist takes the opportunity to raise horses for the needs of his family, slowly doing so, and profiting privately. Now, raising horses has turned the protagonist into the main plot. The harsh background is designed and developed within the rules at the same time. This has become the biggest anomaly. From the author's point of view, the harsh background is to limit the growth of the protagonist, but from the perspective of a rich family in the book, the designer of the rules is nominally for control! Now the balance and logic of each angle are inconsistent, which makes the book's stamina weak! Humble opinion!

Is this martial arts or cultivation? It's a mess.

Group wear, and at different times, best wishes

It feels like the Daqian established before is like Zhu Yuanzhang from history traveling into this world

Looking at the introduction, I want to save the world and change the world.