Thunderbolt: in the Third Year of His Life, He Reached a Miserable State.

Chapter 3 of Golden Beginning directly dissuades most people, each paragraph is too long, the first chapter is boring ordinary life, the second chapter is the tribulations during the time travel, the third chapter is a low-end boss giving the ordinary protagonist a rubbish plug-in, the fourth chapter is that the time travel protagonist is directly opened by the local natives, and the fifth chapter is now inexplicable and the protagonist has random thoughts. This kind of writing is the way of writing the abuser in the old version. Now I don't see it much anymore.

You, to be honest, are not very attractive. The scientific component is too serious. Although there is technology in the misery, you really don't need to take this path. Just follow the path of the three religions. You can also go to the sidelines, but no one really cares about technology.

Brother, you are too small, it is difficult to get along in Perak. In addition, you have inexplicable ideals, and the boss's level is too low, and the things you give are inexplicable. A boss like that will not pay attention to you at all. It is better to write about the boss's gaze, or other things, just summarize it in one sentence, and then create your own like building blocks. When it comes to plug-ins, don't write about training, emotions, etc. Newbies can't grasp it. The system here has a century-old foundation, and you will be blown away by whatever training you can achieve. There is also a plot that cannot be said. Watch Pili, you must at least understand the Qi Tian Emperor descends to the earth, and there are some big pitfalls, otherwise you will be fooled to death.

That's not how AI works, my friend.

It's funny to see the glass being made. Is it difficult to make glass? They can make guns, robots, Gundams, and androids. The plight is the lack of a foundation for industrialization.

There are too many words in one paragraph, it looks tiring, really.

Why isn't the pig's foot dead? It has been said in the article that he is about to die, he is about to die, but he is not dead. Either you let him die, or else it will be fine. He is not alive or dead, he is just half dead, and the force of force is unclear. He is gone.

The best advantage of novels is that they lower the reading threshold 🙂

The third golden chapter was not written well, and many people were persuaded to quit, otherwise the number of votes would be more 😜😜😜😜

Yes, I was persuaded to quit after the third chapter of Golden Chapter. Many people made me confused after reading it. They didn't know what was said and kept reading 😍😍😍

You haven't decided on your style for this book yet. I hope it will be written in the style of Chapter 6. Attribute all the irrationality of Pili to strange powers and chaotic gods. Then. Use your theory, or the so-called theory of Mohism, to correct, correct, amend, and even inherit and evolve until you shape the kingdom of God on earth. This might be interesting too.

It's really funny when I see people playing Mohism. The author can't even figure out the most basic operating mode of Mohism. Mozi believed that as long as those below unconditionally obey those above, society would not be in turmoil, as long as the people selected at each level were wise. But what is funny is that the scholar-bureaucrats, princes and emperors in the Spring and Autumn Period were hereditary and irreplaceable. Who can guarantee that they are wise? Then Mozi came up with a patchwork of ghosts and gods, saying that bad guys will have their own ghosts and gods to catch them. One time Mozi was seriously ill, and his disciples asked him if it was the ghosts and gods that didn't bless you? He directly defeated Mozi's defense.

Isn't this about Thunderbolt in Misery? It's already been three chapters, I thought I read it wrong

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