Naruto: Starting from Being Suspected by Konoha Senior Officials

Shuimu Xianren Zhuyu is ahead, is the author confident to surpass him?

The writing is not good, and it suffers from a common problem of many fan authors: Danzo's presence is too high. In the original work, Danzo is just a rat in the gutter. In the early stages of the plot, you can't see any trace of him on the surface at all. Although this thing is bad, it doesn't have to have a hand in everything. If nothing else, in the original book, Mizuki was beaten by Naruto until the incident happened and was imprisoned. In your case, Mizuki basically did nothing. He was killed by Danzo before he started committing crimes. In the original work, Mizuki could hold on until the incident happened before going to jail. Are you going to be beaten to death by Danzo before anything happens? I asked the protagonist, did this little gangster violate the rules of heaven? When you come up, you are stared at and killed by the top boss? What kind of anxious king is Danzo who loves justice and justice? The reason for Hiruzen's urgency is that anyone who attacks our Konoha must be punished no matter how small they are? But the problem is that Hiruzen is not in a hurry, but a villain like Danzo is in a hurry? If Danzo was really so eager to write, how did Mizuki succeed in committing the crime in the original novel? How did the plan to collapse Konoha succeed? How did Sasuke defect? Isn't human Sasuke's priority in Danzo's eyes much higher than that of a time traveler like you? Danzo didn't even get stared at and fucked like this, so why did you, the protagonist, suffer so much malice? Normally speaking, based on Danzo's character, he would secretly watch Hiruzen Sarutobi's jokes, hoping that if something went wrong under Hiruzen Sarutobi's rule, he would be able to take over. During the Kyuubi Rebellion and the Konoha Collapse Plan, he didn't even move around to watch the show, let alone trivial matters like Mizuki.

The writing is pretty good. Use the tag classification settings for your book so that more people searching for books can see it.

Replacing the original article, the hardest thing to think about is, for example, after having a wife and children. ..... Did the time traveler turn the water and the trees green, or did the water and wood turn the time traveler green? After all, the time traveler is not Mizuki, but his body is Mizuki... So it is actually better for the time traveler to travel through "Naruto" from the beginning, become Mizuki, and then awaken his memory.