There Are Too Many Loser Heroines, but All of Them Have Narration

Let me give you some advice. Is this subject suitable for writing on 🦔Cat?

It's very difficult to make a fan of the heroine of the Lost Dog The original male protagonist is required, and the original male protagonist is very good Coupled with the setting of the Lost Dog, it is not suitable to make a conventional time-traveling male protagonist.

After reading a few chapters, the concept is okay, the characters are OOC, and there are too many bad vernaculars. Even if you replace warm water with Lu Mingfei, it doesn't feel out of place. I feel like I need to learn more in the Lost Dog fan forum.

Looking at the author's introduction, you can feel how ambitious the author is. But it's so difficult to write well. The group portrait itself is a test of the author's writing skills. If the group portrait is cheated, it will be even more difficult to write, because this will cause a chain reaction. If it is purely original, it can be saved by patching, but it will be difficult for fans with popular impressions to patch it. The more patches are applied, the more problems may occur. I can only say that I hope the author's writing power is as strong as his ambition. I look forward to this novel becoming more and more exciting. If it's not cut after 3 months, I'll catch up.

It's already written as a fan, so heroine Jiashu doesn't have any objections, right?

It's a pity that this subject matter was not well received at the starting point, but try your best

As title

I haven't read the original work, but judging from what zz wrote, I really don't see any romance between the male protagonist and the female character. Until the 30th chapter, it can only be seen that the female character forcibly communicates with the male protagonist for the rewards given by the narrator and then sells some meat to tease the protagonist. Even the rewards given seem to be more female than male. I didn't see how the female character was attracted to the protagonist and fell in love with the male protagonist, and the protagonist's own charm was not reflected. He would only be gentle and then be used by the female character. Even if he resisted, he would not be a complete idiot. Maybe it's because falling in love is in the later stages, but it's really too slow. Zz You can first write about events that better reflect the charm of the male protagonist, or add more scenes to a female character who is more likely to be in love with the protagonist. Otherwise, the protagonist would be just a tool man until now.

Have you eaten fungi? What a change!

Looking forward to a first hand😁

There are too many shortcomings, mainly because the characters are inconsistent. For example, the protagonist has too many dirty words in his heart. The other thing is that the narration is a bit too wall-to-wall, and there is no sense of ease in writing the narration.

It's so uncomfortable😭

😭😭😭 I also voted for you monthly, and no one said that your writing is not good. Now eight volumes are enough for you to write Write it for me, bastard

Isn't the male protagonist just a shameless ntr yellow guy?

It's really not suitable to post here.

It's quite rare, so I'll save it for now. I really recommend writing in Porcupine.

Is the author Japanese? It feels awkward to listen to the book

Although there is no sense of being a time traveler, the design of funny mission rewards with narrations for both male and female protagonists solves this problem very well. The cameos of funny characters in the article are also just right. The plot of the story is steadily advancing. Secondly, it feels like a Japanese light novel fused with a domestic system and a cool article. It is easy, smooth and happy to read. Haha. If you are just a fan of light novels, you are not too interested. I am too tired after being out of society for a few years. It is better to read the author's writing style to relieve stress 😅 Come on author, update quickly, subscribe to follow up +1~~

What about the previous chapters? Why does it start at chapter 29?

What is the name of the new book written by the author? ? ?

The author's Lost Dog fanfic setting is very suitable for publishing on Qidian. 🦔🐱 I have used it too, but it is more comfortable to read such light novel fan narrations on Qidian. Unfortunately, not many people have discovered it. Fortunately, I found it in the homepage introduction 😍

It's not Gomen, write it quickly 😭

Update quickly, update quickly, even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like you do

Come on

Not a brother, don't be disgusting, holy shit