
Douluo: Wuhun Bow and Arrow, but Invincible in Close Combat
斗罗:武魂弓箭,却近战无敌
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 314k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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118Chapters
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I really like this kind of Douluo fan who works hard alone. There is really no need to force myself to become the so-called master of torture. Regarding the recent plot, I would like to give some suggestions. The first is that novels are written for people to read. After the great opportunity comes, it must be shown, either on the panel, or by going out to fight the Soul King and Soul Emperor in the Soul Fighting Field. Ye Fan had to find someone to fight with as soon as he reached the Holy Body. Why? You have to make readers happy. If you just write about huge improvements, how big is this and that? Readers need intuitive representation. From the current point of view, the protagonist is invincible at the same level. If he doesn't show it after he improves, he is still invincible. It doesn't feel satisfying.
Aren't bows and arrows all about pursuing ultimate destruction? Why do all the bells and whistles? Don't want to see it at all. It's not like the novel about cultivating immortals deals with Yin Yang and Five Elements.
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After reading it, I feel that the main character's route is earth, fire, water, and wind, followed by metal, wood, water, fire, and earth. The four elements are used to open up the five elements. Later, the five elements are used to open up yin and yang. The four elements are used as the basis, the five elements are the rules, and the yin and yang are used as the balance 😰😰😰
A lot of data is messed up. After writing the first and last data, there is another data, age, grade, time. Is it really messed up? Was it written by AI? Or do you mean that you don't even read it after you finish writing it?
The protagonist who traveled through time didn't even know Tang San?