Douluo: Master of Dreams

The foundation is very good, but the author himself had better read it from the beginning😅

What's going on. It was well written before. Why is the writing of the subsequent battle plot a bit slow? If you don't know how to write battle plots, you can go through it in a few strokes. No need to describe it deliberately. Moreover, the protagonist always writes that he frequently gets greedy because of his external soul bone. It's just weird. There may be greed and malice in that initial moment. But it will definitely disappear instantly. You need to understand the value of getting a child from old age. And villains are human too. They also have feelings for their loved ones. Don't discriminate against villains. The villain may even value family ties more. Because that is the only light in their hearts. Otherwise, it is in various major novels. Why do you offend the old one by beating the younger one every time? Because they care. It is basically impossible to have a heroic figure in Love Continent who does not recognize his relatives 🔨

It is recommended that the author create less original heroines. Because the original lacks a sense of substitution. After all, there are so many love brains in Loveland. There's no need to go through the thankless effort of being original. Because the original characters are not as naturally popular as the original female characters. Still a cat with big breasts. Bibi Dong. Qian Renxue. Only a female character like Dugu Yan in the original novel can have a sense of immersion 🔨

Suppressing grades is like being the most talented person in the class and only getting a passing grade in the exam

Don't be such an angry young man. The nobles of Douluo are the big and small soul master families. Even modern times cannot achieve equality for everyone. There are also distinctions between superior and inferior. What's more, this world with fantasy power. Just be nice to the people around you. Neither relatives nor friends. There is no need to massacre nobles in the name of the common people. And people all have bad qualities. You are nice to them for no reason. They will take it for granted. Thankless effort. At most, you can easily establish a stable order after becoming a god. Just give him a way to survive. This is the bigger the fist. A world of greater power. Rather than the bigger the fist. A world with greater responsibility🙂

The subject matter is good, but the level of the protagonist is too high. The target is Tang San, who also has skills. Tang San is not well-fed and well-clothed. The protagonist has no worries about food and clothing, and there is no shortage of resources in the early stage. He is 12 years old and still at the same level as Tang San. Tang San usually has to go to blacksmithing and does not practice seriously. It highlights that the protagonist works hard to practice but is more useless than Tang San.

This is the world view of Love Continent. This is not the worldview of a mortal cultivating immortality. He is an Aboriginal. Not the Six Paths Supreme Saint among mortals. In the original work, the only one who takes action against the heirs is Buddha, the Tang clan killer who traveled through time 🔨

Advanced Configuration of Mental Power Soul If you combine Ice Silkworm, Illusive Snake, Can Meng, Black Demon, Cyclops, Brain, Mirror Beast, Silver Ying Beast, Behemoth, Medusa, Spirit Eye, Evil Eye, and Elemental Silver Wolf. Select the corresponding soul beast to absorb and obtain the corresponding soul ring. That is to have super mental control ability, able to create endless loops of nightmares and illusions at will. Simulation can make the illusion close to real scenes and characters, and deeply explore people's fearful experiences. At the same time, the damage suffered by the illusion becomes real damage. At the same time, because the Cyclops himself is immune to all mental attacks, if you add similar Due to the mental interference immunity skill of the mental immunity skull, it is directly immune to all mental interference. At the same time, if there is Beamon's mental blockade (blood-sucking madness) point, it directly has super mental defense capabilities. If combined with the Tianmeng Ice Silkworm, it also comes with mental detection sharing, plus the fantasy wisdom skull, and is connected to the mental network. At the same time, It can also cause mental interference to the enemy, and at the same time weaken the enemy's mental power and enhance our mental power by 20%. Moreover, rubbing allows you to 100% copy the opponent's soul skills. Time Freeze can completely lock time within thousands of meters. The Elemental Silver Wolf allows you to directly use mental power to control the seven elements (water, fire, earth, wind, light, dark space, ice and water as one). Later, use mental power to evolve time itself to control the eight elements

The author is too dumb. There are obviously only two or three chapters of the plot. You were actually able to write seven or eight chapters. It's quite outrageous.

You can write a dozen chapters on just one soul hunter. Fighting Soul can even write nearly twenty chapters. There will be ghosts if you don't rush into the street. This kind of plot can obviously be written in two or three chapters. Write a dozen or twenty chapters. I can't talk about water anymore. Just make up the word count

The writing is very good, if you stick to it you will get results.

Has the author been to Douluo Continent? Just scribble! Take it for granted! (The dog's head saves life)

It's good to read the introduction, but I don't want to read it because of the level.

The author gave up? Otherwise, why would it be so watery?

Is this update cut in half?