
Warhammer Established the Thieving Group Starting from the Blood Ravens Chapter
战锤从血鸦战团开始建立偷盗天团
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- Completed
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- 180k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 7mo ago
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- Qidian
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The writing is barely okay But many details are too loose, and sometimes I feel that the protagonist is too idiotic For a person like the Inquisitor, he knows that when facing a demon host, something related to chaos, he will at least bring enough soldiers, or give people this kind of wiping behavior, which will only be a lot more. After all, an inquisitor who can raise a demon host has no ability or connections, how can he raise this thing? And how can you find colleagues to wipe your butt? Isn't this just giving others an excuse? Also, with the conditions of Chaos Astartes backstabbing each other and the logistics not being able to keep up, how could the three warbands have more than 3,000 people, which is almost catching up with the number of people during brother Shuron's rebellion. And if it had that kind of power, how could it all be concentrated on one planet? You must know that Huron occupied 23 fortress worlds and multiple resource worlds at that time. And if you can raise a war gang with such power, how can the Chaos fleet be so small? It is estimated that the protagonist was attacked as soon as he jumped out of the subspace. There are also Ran Dan aliens. What ordinary inquisitors can know, who are the inner circle members who can know these guys, the Grand Master of the Inquisition, and the core members of the High Lords of Terra. So overall the author's writing is okay, but if you read too much, you will find a lot of loopholes. This means that although it seems okay, if you think about it carefully, you will feel that something is wrong.
Fairly good
After seeing the latest 27 chapters, it feels okay but not that exciting. There is no plug-in that can strengthen yourself. The writing is relatively plain, but usually the power system that can be written longer will not collapse too much. The main thing is to test the author's writing skills. The better Warhammer recently, I personally feel that I am the only player. But I feel too invincible and it will be difficult to write later. I don't doubt that this book will be difficult for the author to write later, but it's so lackluster that I probably won't read the rest of it 💀
Becoming an Astartes = consciousness is changed. Astartes are professional biological weapons. Weapons only require loyal execution of orders, no emotion, or only brotherhood and friendship, but these emotions are under loyalty. Loyalty is hardened in genes and souls. When the gene seed containing a trace of the sub-god essence of the primarch, subspace, is combined with the transcendent knowledge by the emperor. When consciousness was implanted into the body through 19 surgeries, the self-awareness of mortals at that moment was changed, and a loyal Astartes space warrior was born. From then on, loyalty is the only belief, unless the trace of sub-god essence in the gene seed awakens. Only this trace of essence awakening can break the loyalty engraved in the genetic soul, like the corruption of wontons.
Why does it feel like a lobster style?
The beginning of the chapter is inexplicable. It feels chaotic.
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Does the Inquisition still have the Adeptus Astartes? This is the first time I've heard of this