Lord of the Mysteries: But the Demoness Pathway

Is there any protagonist who can be a witch, mother, moon path, charm, appearance, and maternal at the same time 😌

Talent: There are no quotation marks in the dialogue and no corresponding names. AI cannot think of such a thing 🙂

Stop writing. What is this writing? Is the author a woman? The character of this protagonist is really awkward

The writing is too messy, and the writing is very blunt in many places.

Uh, I don't know how to evaluate it, but it was definitely not written by AI.

Has the writing in the back of this book improved? The way punctuation marks cost money in the first few chapters is almost exhausting to me.

Now that he's called Altair, the main character's appearance can be directly based on that of Jun Ji.

"Moon" path: Mythical creature form: a humanoid creature carrying an illusory moon, with bright red eyes and bat wings, as if it embodies the concept of beauty. Potion recipe Sequence 9: Pharmacist Main materials: Adult Pegasus horn, 3 grams of crown jellyfish venom crystals; Supplementary materials: 100 ml of adult Pegasus blood, 7 crown jellyfish tentacles, 10 grams of arsenic powder, 10 grams of black hyacinth root. Appearance of the potion: When exposed to light, it will decompose into an attractive liquid of seven colors, but the taste is extremely bitter; Appearance of the extraordinary properties: A transparent horn-shaped object radiating with colorful light. Sequence 8: Beast Tamer Main materials: The medulla crystal of the Elf Spring, the fruit of the King's Sword Flower; Auxiliary materials: 100 ml of spring water from the Elf Spring, 1 flower of the King's Sword Flower, 10 drops of juice extracted from wild eggplant, and 10 grams of animal corpse oil. Appearance of the magic potion: rose red, shaped like wine, with a sour taste that will attract all mosquitoes around it; Appearance of Extraordinary Properties: a bamboo-shaped thing exuding a dangerous red color. Sequence 7: Vampire Main material: The blood essence corresponding to the vampire in Sequence 7. The main materials in subsequent sequences can be replaced by the "legacy" of the vampire or artificial vampire in the corresponding sequence (other main materials are more difficult to collect because they are quickly sucked by vampires or artificial vampires) The ghost forces have been harvested - the heart of the blood-thirsty beast, the wings of the red-headed bat) Supplementary materials: 100 ml of the blood of the blood-thirsty beast, 3 teeth of the red-headed bat (these two can be equally replaced with the corresponding parts of the vampire or artificial vampire), 10 downs of the long-eared rabbit, and 10 drops of sweet-scented osmanthus hydrosol. Appearance of the potion: a cup of bright red "blood" filled with vitality, with a fishy taste; Extraordinary properties Appearance: fist-sized, bright red, like a heart, expanding and contracting slightly, the surface is translucent, and there is faint liquid flowing inside. Sequence 6: Potion Professor Main materials: The brain of the troll sage, the wings of the dark bat (in addition, the "legacy" of the vampire or artificial vampire corresponding to the sequence); Auxiliary materials: 100 ml of the blood of the troll sage, 7 downs of the dark bat (these two can be equally replaced with the corresponding parts of the vampire or artificial vampire), 10 drops of essential oil made from June Snow, a medicine invented by myself. Appearance of the potion: It is like a red moon falling into a glass of clear water, with the darkest color in the middle and lighter colors toward the outside, which is very irritating; Extraordinary properties Appearance: A blood-red gem that emits light like a moonlight. Sequence 5: Crimson Scholar Main materials: Chongyue Demon's blood crystal, Elder Bat's wings (in addition, the "heritage" of the vampire or artificial vampire corresponding to the sequence); Auxiliary materials: Chongyue Demon's heart, Elder Bat's eyes (these two can be equally replaced Replace it with the corresponding part of a vampire or artificial vampire), 100 ml of water that has been illuminated by the blood moon seven times (at least a quarter of an hour each time), and 10 drops of pure dew made from crimson praise (a kind of flower); Ritual: Under the light of the full moon, collect enough metals, gems, and the blood of extraordinary creatures that represent different moon states. Appearance of the potion: a stagnant, almost solidified crimson liquid, tasteless, and will fall into a contradictory state of calmness and psychedelic; Appearance of extraordinary properties: like a simple crown made of crimson feathers. Sequence 4: Witch King Main materials: The consciousness core of the Elf Spring, the dust aggregate of the witchcraft dark spirit (in addition, the "legacy" of the vampire or artificial vampire corresponding to the sequence); Auxiliary materials: The golden spring water of the Elf Spring 1 00 ml (100 ml of blood of vampires or artificial vampires corresponding to the sequence), 10 grams of contaminants from witchcraft and dark spirits (10 hairs or three nails of vampires or artificial vampires corresponding to the sequence), 10 drops of moonflower essential oil, 1 embryo of dark creatures; Yi Formula: Really obtain the recognition of the "moon" (note: some "moons" are always dangerous, some "moons" are dangerous at certain moments, and some "moons" are in your own heart) Appearance of the potion: a golden and red liquid wrapped in rich darkness. After taking it, your body and mind will be in trouble. The pain of complete tearing is revealed; Extraordinary characteristics Appearance: It is like a gem made of rich blood. It is the size of a fist and is emitting a crimson light, like a miniature red moon. Sequence 3: Summoning Master Main material: Vampire Marquis. The extraordinary characteristics of the Marquis may be the "legacy" of the artificial vampire of the corresponding sequence; Supplementary materials: 100 ml of the blood of the Vampire Marquis or the artificial vampire of the corresponding sequence, 1 item that has been infected by the gray mist breath of "Origin Castle", the finger of the Vampire Marquis or the artificial vampire of the corresponding sequence A 3-piece, one of your own "Moon Paper Man"; Ritual: Find a piece of special information in the depths of the spiritual world that is closely related to your past, present, and future, and deeply entwined with the "Moon", and then hold a ceremony to define it as your own for various occult purposes. "True name" (if you choose the wrong one and find an incorrect one, you will become a slave of "the moon") Appearance of the potion: a light red liquid that seems to reflect the illusory spiritual world and is filled with various rich colors; Appearance of extraordinary characteristics: a dark red that is unreal and unreal. Column crystal. Sequence 2: Creator Main material: The extraordinary characteristics of the vampire duke or the "legacy" of the artificial vampire of the corresponding sequence; Auxiliary material: 1 amulet made by the mother (if the mother has passed away, it can be obtained by Fantasy product or historical projection instead, of course, the conceptual mother and the mother in a broad sense can also meet the conditions), 10 hairs of the blood descendants created by the self, 100 ml of the blood of the vampire duke or the corresponding artificial vampire, and 1 oak seed; Ritual: transfer oneself Divide it into five parts, destroy and seal it in different places, and then take the magic potion from the part of the body that contains the heart before complete death (Note: There are two main difficulties in this ritual, one is how to ensure that oneself does not die immediately in that state, and the other is how to take the magic potion in a sealed state). Appearance of the potion: clear, clean liquid with blood-colored bubbles floating around; Extraordinary properties Appearance: similar in appearance to a uterus, covered with a blood-stained translucent film, filled with red bubbles, each red bubble seems to be pregnant with a life . Sequence 1: God of Beauty Main material: Ornia's extraordinary characteristics or the extraordinary characteristics of other "gods of beauty"; Auxiliary materials: the amniotic fluid that gave birth to oneself (if not preserved, imaginary, simulated or historical ones can be used) projection, etc.), A work of art that is widely recognized as unrivaled, the blood of the Son of God, the newly grown mistletoe; Ritual: Use the "Moon Paper Man" to make a stand-in so that its long-term activities cannot be revealed and can be remembered by a large number of creatures. The more the better, The body itself was lying in a coffin, buried deep in the ground for at least three hundred years, and finally the body took the magic potion. Appearance of the potion: the blood-stained liquid stretched into an illusory, extremely beautiful and vague human shape; Appearance of extraordinary characteristics: a mass that seemed to be made up of the concept of beauty, hiding countless figures. Crimson. Sequence 0: Moon Main material: The uniqueness of "Moon" + three copies of "Beauty God" characteristics; Auxiliary material: The blood of the Son of the Old or the Son of Sephiroth; Ritual: Find a way to enter the star realm, divination According to the concept representing "moon" or engraved with one's true name within this concept (note: the concept of "moon" is not exclusive to the barrier) Appearance of the potion: the illusory liquid surface reflecting the most beautiful red moon; Unique appearance: a crimson moon.

For example, in this paragraph, many necessary commas are missing

There are too many typos and the dialogue reads very strangely.