
Venom Supergirl in Marvel: Teaching the U.S. Military a Lesson from the Start
毒液超女在漫威:开局教美军做人
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The U. S. Military in Marvel is much weaker than the real U. S. Military. The real U. S. Military has a will as strong as iron. After all, no soldier from any country can join the army at his own expense, take out loans for pay, beg for a living, and sell blood to survive.
Suddenly I realized that foreign mortals relied on various means to control heroes, and mutants begged for the acceptance of ordinary people. [These are actually the same thing as the Goblin Saint series] This is the drawback I see so many people talking about mutants. . . It is true that there are mutants who are malignantly mutated, and it is true that they cannot defeat those heroes. But this thing is really nothing worth discussing. After all, as long as the screenwriter thinks he can make money, Cyclops can kill the entire universe. There is no point in being more realistic.
In fact, Venom can make Supergirl play with tentacles
Who would have thought that "teaching how to be a good person" in the title of the book means teaching how to be a good person through talking...
It's a good idea, but it's a pity that it doesn't catch people.
It was said that he was teaching the US military how to behave, but he ended up working for the US military in the beginning, and the male protagonist only appeared in the fifth chapter.
Apology and communication
1. After carefully reading everyone's comments, I found that it was probably after the beginning of the book that the gangster plot line (about 30 to 50 chapters) dissuaded most of the friends who were enthusiastic about the update. After self-examination and reflection, I found that when I wrote it, I was really obsessed with foreshadowing and ignored the emotional and rhythm issues of the plot, which caused many friends to feel that the rhythm was unreasonable and slow when reading. There should be a big gap between the fast-paced plot at the beginning and the slower world view in the follow-up, which has brought negative experiences to many friends. A sincere apology. 2. A little explanation (involving spoilers): Regarding the gang line plot, the main purpose is to show the main human forces on earth, such as the military, SHIELD, Hydra, and the Kingpin gang, their respective attitudes and the game between them after learning about Kara's existence. (The gangster of the Hughes Security Association is just a small player in the meat grinder of power who makes one mistake and is destined to be doomed) What the gangster plot line wants to express: (1) The cooperative but contradictory relationship between the military, General Ross and Kara (Relationship Hao Gram plot line) (2) Hydra Pierce's special attention to Kara, related to the Insight Project (Hydra/Human plot line) (3) Kingpin conquered the Hand and made a deal with the devil (Dimension Demon/Kama Taj plot line), and gained power. Laying hidden dangers (4) The cooperation between Kara and Venom is in the running-in period, and there will be mistakes, but Venom will come to the rescue (5) Kara's code of conduct, her nostalgia and obsession with Krypton (Krypton plot line), and her personality differences with Harley (sisters) Relational plot line) (6) The battle between Kryptonians and magic side forces, Doomsday gene mutation (Doomsday gene growth line) (7) Iron Man is worried that Kara is too powerful. In order to resolve the conflict, Kara decides to make a fight with him. Sorry for the negative reading experience I have brought to my friends. Sometimes, the author's perspective and the reader's perspective will inevitably be quite different due to information gaps. Criticism and correction from friends are needed to help the author reflect on the problem and adjust his thinking. Whether you decide to abandon the book, collect it for later reading, or continue to follow up, please leave a comment and the author will read it carefully. (However, comments that vent pure curses will be ignored and will be deleted) Based on everyone's feedback, the author will also try to make minor modifications to the previous content that will not affect the main plot. If small modifications don't work, the author will also look for opportunities to provide additional explanations in later chapters (to fill in the gaps afterwards). Thank you very much to everyone who left comments, comments, followed updates, and voted for support! (Bow, bend down, squat, take off, Thomas's 360-degree mid-air rotation, three and a half weeks, landing, lunge! Slide and kneel...)
Flaws do not cover up strengths
The time-traveler "Grandpa" Venom brings the "military version" of the fledgling Supergirl... Shouldn't the main plot be framed in the early stage? It's not good to write the branch lines in an extravagant way. The purpose is too low, or it may be because there are too few written ones. But the subject matter is still good, but there may be some problems with the casting. The dual-driver is not easy to write, and the most critical period of superwoman's growth has been skipped. Of course, this may not be a problem. There is a large amount of updates or a large amount of information. Now it is just boiled water and tasteless.
It stretches my crotch a bit
Things are grinding and procrastinating, not to mention the trust issue, the artificial intelligence problem of pulling the crotch, people are not killed, the supporting characters are disgusting, and they all want to have Kara. If I really want to have this kind of plot, I should start with the protagonist. Even if you don't kill this kind of supporting character, you won't kill him with your hands, and you will feel comfortable if you prepare to give Carla away as someone else's property 😅
Not bad, a masterpiece
When will Ziren die? This person's abilities make me physically uncomfortable.
Why do I feel so weak at max level? I can't even resist the friction of the atmosphere.