Warhammer: Sanguinius Heresy

Don't write down specific numerical values ​​when writing essays. GW has learned the lesson and doesn't need to narrate from a narrator's point of view. Instead, he uses the people in the book to talk about the world view to make it easier to read. If the author uses specific numerical values, what kind of ghost scenes will appear like "the legendary monk jumps up to the second floor with a big jump"?

The Holy Rebellion is less famous, but the Leon Rebellion and the Guilliman Rebellion are famous.

To be honest, the biggest failure of this book is the team building with the alliance. Anyway, it gives people a feeling of being inconsistent. And to be honest, doing things like skills in a real world, and they are active skills that need to be used actively, gives people a sense of fragmentation. You might as well give the protagonist a bunch of passive skills, which looks much better.

What the hell, it was already a bad review when it was written using AI, but in the end, the enemy was forced to use the protagonist's bonus aura for free. Now this book is trash.

If it was the Sanguinius Rebellion, wouldn't it be our great Wolf Shepherd who was made into hand-beaten beef balls?🤭

Sorry to disturb everyone [Crossing hands][Crossing hands][Crossing hands] My 40,000-year-old father is about to become a god. However, the four evil gods plotted the plan, and the eldest brother rebelled. He is currently placed on the Golden Throne to save him [Crying][Crying] The regent has notified the psykers who are in arrears, and currently the Forbidden Army I have gone out to find the psykers, but I really feel a deep sense of powerlessness in the face of the Chaos Warriors in the warp. I am really unwilling to accept that I have persisted for so long [crying] [crying] He is so old and forced to lose the ability to move. The master of mankind who has great military achievements has ended up like this. [Hands together] [Hands together] So please help him [Crying] Maybe your kindness is the hope for my father to live. I ask all psychics to come to Terra and dedicate yourself, and you will be rewarded [love] (Reading this passage is regarded as voluntary service to the Emperor, and silent reading counts)

What I saw today, I hope it can give you some inspiration.

Welcome to discuss the plot, because it is a pseudo warp, so if you have any questions or ideas, you can talk about it. Please be rational and don't attack each other. I believe everyone is a good person~

The writing is quite good. The integration of Noxus and Warhammer is very interesting. However, the early numerical values ​​​​are written too clearly, which is a bit inconsistent with Warhammer's world view. However, the author changed it very quickly later.

According to my nearly 10 years of experience, once the author can't afford the title, it's a sign that he is a eunuch.

I thought it was this Sanguinius

An extraterrestrial demon or a reincarnated old man?

Come on, author, not many people write apocrypha, keep at it.

This subject is interesting. Will the protagonist undergo a semi-Astartes transformation in the future?

This is the first time I have seen this pseudo-thread. Can anyone tell me briefly? Full of curiosity.

What is this place of birth? Has the chaos in the apocryphal world been strengthened too much?

Why do loyalists in normal universes become autistic when they hear that they have rebelled in other universes? Their experiences are different. If only they could be more determined and loyal, there is no need to be criticized for nothing and become autistic.

What's going on with you, author? Why did the update suddenly stop and suddenly resume? Even if it's not a book shortage, I can't see the update.

The writing is good, but jumping directly from the apocryphal thread to the official history is too fragmented and uncomfortable to watch 😰

Updates are slower than before and the quality is worse than before

Come on, author, come on, I'll give you everything I can update 😭