Start Pushing the Demon Horizontally from the Through-Arm Fist

It is said to be a time-travel novel, but the main character is written as an aborigine, and there is no sense of the bonuses that a time-traveler should have. His behavior is still at the level of a teenager. The first killing process is completely taken for granted, and those who boast about fairy grass are gone.

Aboriginal! Be careful! Non-crossing flow

Is that sister of yours a biological sister? Why is it written so ambiguously? It's said to be a time-travel novel, but was it a time-travel story for primary school students in the previous life? He completely lacks the stability of a person from two lifetimes, and is about to become a native.

This is so inconsistent...

I've read Chapter 40 and overall it's pretty good. The social environment is written in detail, and the martial arts drama is passable. The biggest drawback is that the hanging writing is very casual, especially the first time when the beads are worn on the chest and the panel is projected on the wall. Later, I wrote and projected it in my mind, and started to roll away the dark blue and add some dots. I also have to relate to modern society from time to time, saying that I played games in college and did not leave the dormitory for a month. The sense of separation is very serious. If you have any emotions, please write them into the social environment where the protagonist lives. Rather than withdrawing from it in order to express the current situation, in the end it will definitely be to write an article for the sake of political support.

Pig's feet is an indigenous... A bit retro

It's very good-looking, refreshing, and has the flavor of "I eat tomatoes". Come on, please update more. I read and listen to books every day before going to bed these days. This is the best Yakuza I've seen this year.

It feels so-so, too bland

230,000 Words, 18 monthly tickets. It's considered average at the starting point. The writing style is relatively solid, there are not many humorous scenes, it is more serious, and the logic is okay. I will score 85 points. Renting room, no heating, one finger meditation, usually working, 8,000 to 10,000 daily updates, 95 points for harsh conditions. It is recommended to balance work and writing, improve writing skills, and improve living conditions if economic conditions allow. If the novel is not good enough, readers can change it. If the novel is not good enough, readers can change it. If the body is tired and something goes wrong, you can only bear the extra money. Come on, 2026, the future is promising.

The protagonist is too cowardly, he just wants to kill him

I will give you ten times as much as I will give you with Tongjiquan 😄

Damn, the author is very powerful. The new book issue has 5,000 or 6,000 words every day? Another tentacle monster? Collected, cool

Come on, don't be watery, just don't be a eunuch.

I feel more like Menglu Shenji, and some details are even better written. I hope the author can find his own position and form a stable style. Then I will have another little god to follow.

The taste of worldliness is revealed. If I keep writing high-quality articles, I think it won't be a big problem. Many fine articles are not as good as this one to tell the truth.

It's a bit less 😭😭😭😭😭

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Good writing and good plot