Dashun Wusheng!

The front is pretty good, but the more you look at it later, the more holy you become. Either you will be offended to death, or you can endure it to the end and secretly retaliate at night. What do you think, you don't have the strength to come forward head-on? To put it bluntly, your neighbor disrupted your plan and just did it without telling you. This is equivalent to putting you on the barbecue grill and coming to save you? It's good if you don't hate him to death. Anyway, I don't know what the protagonist is thinking. Anyway, I just think that he will die if he dies, and I will give you a hot potato.

What's the point of waiting for someone to die before expressing emotions? You are hesitant about doing things, afraid of this and that. Now that you are strong enough, you can't even protect your own little brother. You have practiced martial arts in vain.

No? When evacuating, we planned a route that only three people knew, but as soon as we ran away, all six families came to surround the protagonist, right?

I really can't stand it anymore. I feel like this chapter is a bit intellectual. At this time of life and death, you ask someone for help, but you don't get paid. They have relatives who are still in the city. You are not deeply grateful to them, and you relied on them to save your life before. At this time, they just didn't directly agree to your request, and they started to blame them. It's really a fight between kindness and hatred. The eldest daughter of the Luo family is so good at moral kidnapping, why didn't you use it against the Jiang family, the bodyguard, and the protagonist?

It's a bit contradictory, The first chapter talks about some messy things, It doesn't say how long it has been since the time traveled, it is obvious that there is a golden finger, but there are still two lines of tears.

I am convinced by this kind of novel. Several books start with a younger sister. This one is different. Have a sister.

The author can read "The Martial Saint of the Ten Directions" written by Get Out. He writes about how the protagonist uses poison. You, who is from a drug store, can learn from his use of poison.

Recently I like to read Wu Shengwen. This novel seems to be the better among the Wu Shengwen I have read recently. There is nothing serious about it. Come on, please read more.

Today's novels are all exactly the same! Even the protagonist has the same idea. The protagonist can solve all problems by practicing martial arts, but he doesn't practice. He won't sell his house if others are interested in it. He is the main character and has no hard work. I have already died and still suffer? I had to borrow money from usury to practice martial arts. I borrowed money based on my ability without even thinking about paying it back. When my martial arts skills got better, I would borrow more.

Drug-taking Martial Saint! Cultivation requires taking drugs, and breakthrough requires taking drugs. Without drugs, the entire cultivation system collapses.

Also, any number of bandits you encounter will have the ability to clean up dirt, as well as demons, and anything else that the protagonist can encounter.

I think this book "Da Shun Wu Sheng" is quite interesting. It is one of the more innovative books in the same genre. The plot is not the kind of step-by-step novel routine. Many scenes can be seen that the author is writing seriously, and it is not just an upgrade from a simple novel. The protagonist's thinking is also relatively close to reality. His actions are logical, flesh and blood, and sentimental. He is not the kind of "brainless push all the way" template character, which I like very much. However, the shortcomings are also quite obvious: the upgrade pace is a bit too fast, and the transition from blood training one to blood training twelve is too fast, resulting in a lack of storyline. The map setting is very large and macroscopic, but the urban landscape and environmental details around the protagonist have few memorable points. It is difficult to form a picture in the mind after watching a paragraph. Another point is that the protagonist has less contact with the people around him. It seems that he has been practicing and upgrading alone. He has too little interaction with others, which lacks a sense of worldliness and human touch, which also makes the overall atmosphere a little thin. Overall, I think this book has a good foundation, with highlights and ideas. I hope that there will be more plot advancement and character relationships in the future, and a slower pace of upgrading will make it better.

I still have a problem after seeing the latest chapter. The logic of the protagonist leading from the small incident of Chen Bao to the big incident of the White Horse Gang cannot be established I can't stand Chen Bao and it's too weird to get money. First of all, I can't understand Chen Bao. I understand what you mean. I designed what he did several times, but the feedback from the protagonist is too weak. I can't stand to trouble him, and the money later will be even worse Because you found Ganoderma lucidum based on the medicine collection map left by your father. The design was too simple. And the price is not cheap, which greatly advances the plot The protagonist is now short of money. After he has the status of a martial arts school and will not be deducted by the city gate guards, he can completely pick herbs again, and the pharmacology has improved. I can understand if you don't write. You can't let the protagonist solve the money problem too quickly, and fantasy protagonists are best to use their strength to make money, so you directly introduce the plot of the martial arts school But in this way, the logic of the protagonist in ten chapters will not stand up So you have to make Chen Bao's plot to an extreme point, so that the protagonist has a logical basis when he hears that his senior brother has been entrusted to trouble Chen Bao, and cannot mention that the protagonist's lack of money is one of the driving forces for participating in the incident. Because of the Ganoderma lucidum in your previous plot twist It's too simple to obtain and too easy to copy. The plot design of that paragraph is more focused on character design. It's definitely right to write this in the first three chapters, but there will be problems when it comes to the logic behind it.

Um, the chapter titles are very similar to Bai Teman's writing style, and so is another author. I suspect that you are from the same line. The novels written by the three of you are full of b-flavors. I really can't stand it. First, the world view is described as big and broad, and then it is very empty. A small place pretends to be a big boss. There is a sudden appendix after writing. It is not directed at the author, but just complains about the writing style. I feel very disgusted with the ancient writing style.

As long as the protagonist behaves cowardly, he won't be happy

My own woman can be killed, so what's the point of reading on? Every time I save someone, I have to wait until the person being saved is almost dead before I come out. I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 134. I beat him severely.

I just want to know if the protagonist is the Virgin, who has been on the way to save people. I am really convinced. It can be settled after a period of development, but it must be done at this time.

This book is beautiful, the writing is very good, and the writing has a sense of life and business. The creation of small characters is also very good, each with its own little thoughts. It can be regarded as one of the fodder that I have been following recently.

Judging from the title of the book, the protagonist did not overthrow the imperial court.

I'm new here, may I ask, is this a turtle novel? I won't watch it anymore! Don't like it very much!

This book is very well written, but every time the protagonist kills someone, he doesn't do it in time, and a lot of people have to die before he kills him. Even someone like Luo Biaotou can survive without death.

The protagonist is dead🤭

The most important thing for every breakthrough is whether the height has become taller and whether the person has become stronger 😰

The sense of fragmentation in the early stages of this book is as follows: the level of a skill is described very convincingly, and then at first glance, it is still getting started 😰

The Iron Fist you want🙂

Update more, and I'll give you all the tickets, please add more details

I rarely praise people. The author's writing is good. It feels like he has become a saint in the world of martial arts. The writing style is good and the characters he describes are good. Come on.

A newcomer is writing a novel, and I hope you will take care of it. If there is something wrong in my writing, you can give me some advice. Thank you all.

Douyin saw you, you are so strong, you deserve to be a Jiaojiren 😭

The book "Fantasy" has been released recently. I vomited after reading the books on the list, so I came to take a look here.