Hogwarts: the Curse Thought I Was Weak, so I Spent the Whole Night Cultivating

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However, is this suppressing the protagonist's strength? Or what? Although each breakthrough of the curse will bring certain insights and breakthroughs to the protagonist, once the curse is "closed", the protagonist becomes an ordinary little wizard again. One thing is, can you return the Magical Breakthrough Insight to the protagonist, so that the protagonist can also release the mutant curse on his own, instead of having to rely on the mutant curse to release it on his own? It's a bit like a person who can only pull the trigger and retract a gun, but not make a gun. When you are communicating with Hermione and ask about the mutation curse, you can't open your mouth and close your eyes, right?

Forget it, just shout in front of Snape

The curse talks a lot, and the protagonist should follow in the footsteps of the curse and say it out loud. Furthermore, although the spells are all issued by the protagonist, I really don't think the protagonist is very strong. The curse is too humanistic and makes the protagonist look like a puppet

See the latest chapter. I feel like this prefect villain is too smart. The Malfoy family is trying to please him and it is rumored that he is the son of Voldemort. How dare he continue to offend the pig's feet? . How could a family heir be affected by mixed emotions? If he is really affected, then he is not worthy of being the heir. Otherwise, if he becomes the head of the family later and his competitors set up a trap and he falls into it, won't the family be doomed? How could such a thing become an heir? . So these few pictures are still too clever. Don't pretend to be cool just for the sake of showing off. Otherwise, how will you write next? If you don't collapse, you will be a eunuch. The setting is good and the writing is okay. The plot is really bad, and there are traces of intelligence in every aspect.

I cut it. Can I cancel my subscription?

What can I say, the interaction between the magic spell and the protagonist is indeed quite interesting, but the interaction between the protagonist and other people cannot be seen with your brain. It is purely taken for granted, which is too brainless and crazy. It feels like the author just forced the characters to be smarter for the sake of the conflict in the plot to cause conflict and arouse disgust. Personally, I think it is more interesting to interact and explore the magic spells with the protagonist than to create cool spots without any brainless pretense. It is more reasonable to wait for the protagonist to accumulate a wave of precipitation and then create a big cool spot.

According to the author's writing, Snape was as powerful as a seventh-grade graduate when he first entered school 🤭

After seeing the protagonist being hit by magic, he broke through the magic by biting the tip of his tongue and couldn't hold back anymore. Will the blood on the tip of his tongue be acclimatized? They are both used in the East and the West. Although I remember that this seemed to be a petrification spell, it was too weird...

When I saw the second set of the Silver Blood Council, I immediately lost my mood and felt very out of place.

QQ is fully booked now. Tell me how you feel. This book is Skill Awakening Self-Awareness ➕Hogwarts. Updates can be up to 10,000 words a day, so the volume is large and the management is full. The writing can also be at an average level. Disadvantages, the plot design is very dull. The routine is too old. Too repetitive. Basically, the villain makes a face-off, the protagonist fights back without killing, beats the younger one and then cripples the older one, the protagonist resists and cripples the older one, then invites the older one, and finally the protagonist kills the villain's whole family. Too many repetitions. There is no longer any sense of refreshment and aesthetic fatigue. If there is no new breakthrough, I think I will just keep reading books or lose them because they are boring. Also, the author's description of Hogwarts is too shallow, and he only scratches the surface of Hogwarts, and the characters in the plot are seriously mentally retarded. Severe templating. The same thing. There is no corresponding image of the character in the original work. Some tamper with the original image. Such as Harry Potter and Weasley. The image has been tarnished in the past. The style of the four colleges, all three are stupid and selfish students. The combat power has collapsed seriously. The protagonist is already as good as Snape in his first year. It can be opened 50-50. The only ones above him were Dumbledore, Grindelwald, and Voldemort. These few limited ceilings. I have been reading for 12 years, and this book is likely to end suddenly or forcefully in the repetitive routine.

It feels a bit strange... In the original novel, "Mudblood" is a very bad insult, and any young wizard from the academy (even Slytherin) will be punished with solitary confinement if he utters it. However, in this novel, the author uses this word as a mantra.

This Silver-blood Council was not destroyed by the Dark Lord.

What should I say? It's beautiful. But don't read this as a Harry Potter fanfic. If you read it as an ordinary novel, it is a very good novel. Because the character design of the original work is really not well grasped.

Such abstract novels are not common anymore, and it is as refreshing as Harry Scarface. It's just that the recent plot is really unreasonable, not passionate enough, and the level is too low. Strength and tone do not match. When Zhe Tian's group shouts, they can really beat Shen Donghuang. The reason why the old great sage whose life is short is so scary. Let everyone remember it deeply. That's because those old saints are all hard-working people. I mean it, I'm really capable

To be honest, so far, I think the author's writing is good, but is the author's malice towards the original protagonist group too great? I dare not say anything else about the original band, but their most basic moral bottom line is there. How could Ron be so ignorant of right and wrong that he has such great malice towards his savior? The protagonist even reminded him verbally, and he complained that the protagonist didn't stop him to the end. What's the difference between this and someone else saving his life, but he still resented the savior for coming late? It's just that I was malicious because of a misunderstanding, but I'm not ungrateful to this extent no matter what.

It's quite interesting, but that prefect has always been a Mudblood, so it would be weird not to get hit by the old Bat-hammer 🤔

This novel is like reading Battle Through the Sky, which kind of mindless beauty,,, it's great

I have read more than 120 chapters, ugh😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨The first half was okay, it was funny, awkward, and the experience was quite novel. Looking at the obviously embarrassing foot-picking made me want to stop. But later on, they started to deliberately vilify Harry, Ron, Percy, and Charlie (I didn't like the original Percy either) and started to dumb down Dumbledore and Nicolés Flamel (Dumbledore should teach him a lesson). It became more and more corrupt. The second creation was so crazy. It just used a character name and directly applied it to the character of the fast food fantasy novel. The character characteristics described in the original work were gone. Is HP's IP really just an IP? What is originally interesting is the violent conflict between the madness of the activation spell and the setting of the original work, as well as the changes brought to the world by the new elements of the time traveler. Now, except for the character names, there is no interest from the original work and new elements. There is no exploration of the magical direction of magic. There is no thought or action on the development of magical society and Muggle society. It is even unclear what the protagonist wants to do. The protagonist is just going crazy for the sake of going crazy. If you want to see this, why bother reading HP fanfics? Harry and Ron are just ordinary little wizards (in the extraordinary world). Harry may be reckless and impulsive, and he can be an ordinary Auror in the future (no matter how you say it, he is better than ordinary wizards who can't cast the Iron Armor Curse), but he never lacks the courage to fight for the top. The experience of being bullied since childhood actually cultivated compassion for others; Ron may indeed have low self-esteem and sensitivity due to reasons such as having many children in the family, but coming from such a family environment, he has never lacked the spirit of tolerance and sacrifice. He may look like a weakling in every aspect, and he may just be a bystander when he grows up, but how can a kid who can play wizard chess so well really have no brains at all? The twenty-eight pure-blood families are indeed in decline, but mediocrity does not mean that they are brainless wild boars; Lucius should not be so active and explicit when he has no idea about the protagonist, and after he has figured it out, he cannot show his fear of the strong; and the setting of the Silver-blood Council does not advance the plot, and it is a failure... The original description is that these protagonists have their own advantages and disadvantages, just like you and me around us. If you put aside the identity label of the protagonist, he is just an ordinary child like you and me. If you have some talent in a certain area, you may be able to achieve some success if you develop it. If you don't develop it, you will become a magical social beast, but it should not become a collection of negative emotions. Although he is a character in a novel, he must first be a "person". The same sentence. Originally, the setting of the magic activation was quite interesting. It caused madness, disenchantment, and awkwardness. It conflicted with the sluggish magical world of the original work, and then created a wave of fun. But later I discovered that there was no running water, and slowly the waves turned into smelly waves...