China Entertainment Went from Top Streamer to Capital Boss in 2011

It took me 8 years to decide to write a book, but I ended up writing 100,000 words and still haven't signed a contract. Helpless... Heartbroken

I feel that the writing is okay, but the story is a bit too cliche, and the first three chapters are too poorly written, and there is no sense of immersion. Why don't you come up with an attractive plot to break into it? Your entertainment articles are either rebirth era articles, or strong emotional plots at the beginning, relying on writing some classic works and actresses to attract people. Fortunately, you have none in the first few chapters, and the system does not work. Since you make money by writing online articles, Why not use this point to create plot conflicts and a sense of expectation? This point is used by some old authors. They can write a cool point around the character design and arouse the sense of anticipation (including some familiar points of yours). Take a look at my most popular new book (Entertainment: Your Emperor is Back), old book (that year of China Entertainment) and recent Sanjiang (an honest man in the entertainment industry) to learn the opening routine, you can write better

The writing is incomprehensible, and the plot entry point is too crooked. I wanted to write about the entertainment industry, but the point of rebirth is high school. From rebirth to college entrance examination and then to Yanying, I skipped the plot for several months. It's such a big jump that it's hard for readers to get used to it. The first three chapters are as bland as water, and it's the same as not reading them. It should be a little bit of fun when parents get into a car accident, and I can write a few chapters in detail to set the mood. Saving the regrets of the previous life was originally the main theme of the rebirth novel, but it turned out that I had touched upon it a few times and felt nothing at all. Then the plot of copying the text is also inexplicable, using a lot of pen and ink, just to make money. . You can say that there is no plot at all in the first six chapters. They are all about adding characters and foreshadowing to the protagonist. It's copying books, and it's business planning. In fact, it's just to create a character for the protagonist who is young, rich, and financially savvy. The purpose of this character is just to conquer Naza starting from Chapter 7. In other words, your plot only begins in Chapter 7.

The book is still okay, just mess around with the cover, otherwise people will think it's a human machine.

The planned heroines include Sister Naza Meng, Nai Xiaozhou and Wang Chuancunzi, and the female co-stars are Reba, Chen Dudu, Bailu and Zhang Ruonan. Now the protagonist doesn't want to sign with a company or go through the hard work of auditioning, so he can only focus on development. Sister Meng will not appear in the second half of 2013, so now she is constantly interacting with Nazha. If the heroine likes more people, she will become the heroine in the future.