Xiuxian: I Have a Soul-Eating Bead

Immortal nobles, the ancestor just practiced Qi to perfection. When he saw the tribe had a rare treasure, he did not consider seizing it and broke through the foundation building himself This logic does not make sense, it is weird

The plot is very strange. It feels like I want to write something one after another, without any cause or effect.

The male protagonist's golden finger can restrain ghosts. This can be put to good use. It is best if the golden finger can also protect the male protagonist's soul, so that when searching for secrets, you will not be afraid of the old ghost taking over his body.

Meng Xin: I don't know that people in the world of cultivating immortals are sinister. In the later stage, they are always eager to take pills to achieve breakthroughs. In the early stage, they say to be stable. In the later stage of Qi training, they cause trouble everywhere.

A person who dislikes the protagonist's poor qualifications inexplicably wants to accept the protagonist as his disciple. Baffling.

You're not copying someone else's Soul-Eating Book, right?

I can't stand it anymore after seeing this, the plot is simply sick,

Again, chopping with weapons in hand, the martial arts novel adds a little element of cultivating immortals.

Not bad, not bad, worth pursuing now.

It's all chaos, a small family is in chaos. When cultivating immortals, they first talk about the difference between immortals and mortals. When he goes to a mortal family in the city and his father has a wife, they are all the same, but a mortal dares to look down on the monk. There's nothing backstage. What are you writing? It's trivial.

It shouldn't be, it's unreasonable, in a world like this where mortals flow into the underworld and cultivate immortality, shouldn't the opportunity be like this? Junior, you can't grasp it. You can grab the protagonist and refine it instantly.

There are more than 180 pictures and I haven't transferred the exercises in the introduction. There is no hint of the plot and it is inexplicably embarrassing. The maximum score out of 10 is two points at most.

Huge poison. Forget about the small poison in front. The more you look at it, the more poisonous it becomes. The golden elixir is also divided into fake elixirs, which is ridiculous.

It's okay, why don't you write it down?

Repetitive boring

The physical training here is simply useless, and there is no physical training or magic at all.

The writing is very good, and it feels similar to mine. Why are his works so popular? ? 😰

Why don't you have any descendants? Well written

After reading more than ten chapters, I died of a poisonous attack. I couldn't have written this book without cerebral thrombosis for thirty years.