Mortal: Good Luck! I Am Not Alone!

Get the pots and bowls

Han Li has the natal magic weapon Qingzhufeng Yunjian and Da Geng Sword Formation. The protagonist got out the Four Swords of Zhu Xian and made a Zhu Xian Sword Formation, that's awesome 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍,😁😁😁😁😁😁

Really heavy appetite

Most people now hate waste material flow because it starts with all kinds of bitterness and hatred. It's frustrating and disgusting to read. This book is well written.

I saw the author's apology as soon as I opened it this morning, and then... Nothing happened. I still don't understand the author's reason for ending it like this. Quanqin and revisions should not be a big problem. No one cares about the layout order of 26 and 27, but maybe the difficulty of writing a book is not that readers can understand it. It's just a pity that an excellent mortal work disappeared as soon as the world view was opened, and the protagonist who was about to spread his wings and fly high also stopped at building the foundation.

The five spirit root foundation building is too sin-inducing. It is recommended that the protagonist run away immediately after building the foundation. Anyway, a Qi-training ant. Surely no one cares. Or get it right in one step. Run away directly into the sea of ​​chaos. Just in time to avoid the invasion of demons. Otherwise it would be too eye-catching. It's more eye-catching than a model worker. It will definitely be coveted. You can still survive if you are targeted by Foundation Establishment. But if you are a Golden elixir monk. Even if it means death, there will be no life. Even old ghost Linghu might be moved. After all, the five spirit roots can be established at such a young age. There may be a great opportunity. Mortals are in the world of underworld cultivators. It must be that he would rather kill the wrong person than let him go 🪖

The protagonist must train physically, otherwise his waist will not be strong enough 🙂

It can be seen that the author still has good writing skills, but he does not have enough writing experience and does not know how to control the golden finger. 🤔 Under normal circumstances, there is no need to reveal the reason for time travel. When writing fan fiction, it is meaningless, difficult to bring satisfaction, and easily self-defeating. This is the book. The protagonist was originally supposed to be a higher-level extraterrestrial demon. What he remembered in his memory was some super skill such as the Daozang Sanqing that he had seen in his previous life. Then he turned it into a bottle spirit and told the origin of the protagonist in one sentence. This is a very poisonous point, and it greatly reduces the protagonist's character and the reader's sense of involvement. If the protagonist were to ask about the origin of the purple energy, Ping Ling would say "What purple energy? I don't know?" It would also add a bit of excitement and save the plot. It can only be said that it is a pity. Let's sort out the plot and summarize the experience and make persistent efforts👍

Zhencao, it's so well written. It feels like it's the best one among the mortals I've read so far. What's the author's old book? I don't feel like I'm going to write about a mortal fan, I'm just going to copy it and make it last forever. The setting and direction will be the same, and it will be determined by thousands of people. Give four monthly passes and hope the author will continue to work hard

I basically quit Mortal fandom at first, and came back to read Mortal fandom just because I read your book. Now you don't write anymore, and now that you are gone, I have also left. Now Mortal fandom is boring.

The rare mortal grass jelly, all details are well controlled. I was so poisoned by the strange things that escaped from various mental hospitals that I didn't dare to search for mortals. I read the latest chapter of this book in one go.

As of more than fifty chapters, this book becomes more and more interesting the more I read it. The only drawback is that why did I come so early 😭 I don't have to read it now.

Mei Ning

Finally, a good-looking mortal fanfic is here, it's not easy 😁

The handling of the Sky Palm Bottle is good. The protagonist's golden finger replicates the ability of the Sky Palm Bottle (at a certain cost), which can be regarded as a solution to the dispute among mortals about whether to grab the Sky Palm Bottle 🤓.

This book is really good. It feels like reading about mortals before, but it's not boring.

I see that the character list also includes those from the Mo family. Does the starting point of the protagonist have to be related to those mortal women from the Mo family who are beyond his reach? There are also people like Chen Qiaoqian, who has average talent, not many roles, and not particularly stunning in appearance. The protagonist's golden fingers can't carry this kind of oil bottle, right?

I haven't read it yet, but the introduction to Weilingen made me laugh.

Finally, there is a truly good-looking novel in Mortal Fans. In the past, I used to look for things that I could barely watch. I didn't expect that this high-quality fanfic could come out of this circle. The author is not born in heaven, and the eternity of mortals is like a long night!

I finished reading it in one go, there are a lot of jokes, the plot concept is considered to be excellent among the fans, the supporting characters all have high IQs, the villains are not brainless villains, Lao Ding, Song Mazi, Yan Ling and Han Yunzhi are all very well portrayed. The golden finger is purple energy, which can strengthen the efficacy of elixirs and the spiritual power of talismans. On the surface, it is a waste material with five spiritual roots, but it is actually a genius with IQ. The only shortcoming at present is that it is too short, and even less

This is a waste. In fact, the erotic plot is nothing. The main thing is to write your own things based on your mortal world view.

🙂Have you cut it? The writing is quite good. Why did you cut it? Just write it slowly.

The ghosts in the novel written in Chapter 24 do not look like humans. Explaining time travel so early directly caused the B box to disappear. I will definitely not feel it no matter how I write it later.

Seeing that it is generally confirmed that the author is not just writing a fan for fun, he probably wants to write this book seriously and lay a solid foundation. So far, the author's writing is pretty good. Here are some suggestions for the author for your reference. 1. Taoist couples are not the same as lovers. Taoist companions are more inclusive, including brothers, friends, and husbands and wives. Not only the original novel, but many novels have confused this. 2. I vaguely remember that the monks in the original novel were all called concubines except for "Taoist companions". Strictly speaking, a concubine is a maid, and between the two there are "good concubines." 3. You can accept one or two female partners without any reason, but don't accept them arbitrarily and without reason. Nangong Wan handled it very well, because the problem of the exercises connected the two weakly related people together, so the plot flowed smoothly. Not to mention Xin Ruyin, the formation wizard is of great help to the protagonist. 4. Just shape Han Li normally. The current shape is okay. There is no need to vilify, to highlight the protagonist by putting others down. In a word, just grasp the rhythm and shape it normally. 5. Don't always wear white clothes. You can change them in different periods to reflect the changes of the protagonist. I hope the author writes better and better!

Alas, I read all the way to this point and suddenly saw the cut, which is really sad.

It's so well written, it's such a pity to cut it.

In fact, you can cut off the bad ones and continue writing. It's a shame.

What, cut it? I also voted for two months 🙂

So disappointing, last post. It seems that the world of cultivating immortals does not exist here, it only exists in the fantasy of each of us, haha. Downloaded Seven Points, originally just to read this type of fan fiction, and I read a lot of them, but the good ones didn't have any good results, and each of them is in his later years. I thought this book would grow into a towering tree, but it was cut down, let alone the others.

I originally thought that I shouldn't have mentioned the origin of Goldfinger so early. It's a pity. I hope the author writes more and more books later. If he writes a book, can he write about Wu Dong Qian Kun 😁? I really want to read it. Lin Dong feels like this forever without Zu Shi. Yuan Dan probably