My Clone Went from Pirate to Heaven

Don't touch Gui Mie, all heavenly beings, no one is watching and it's disgusting.

Sure enough, no matter how awesome the multiverse powerhouse is, if one person comes to him, he will be treated like a dog by Nadu Tong. . . Since you don't dare to violate the ban, why do you think you are writing about this world?

People with telekinesis abilities can also be killed by weapons, which means there is an upper limit to telekinesis ability defense. As long as you have enough strength, you can kill. Also, telekinesis ability is telekinesis ability, and personal physical skills are personal physical skills. The protagonist is actually not weaker than ordinary telekinesis users. After turning on telekinesis, it is not difficult at all to defeat Hisoka.

Even if you write an introduction, there will be typos😅😅😅.

The Eight-door Dunjia is exaggerated. Isn't it just that the pure physical attack is high? It may not be a problem to the ninjas in the local world, but it is trivial to the protagonist. . . This thing is invincible

There is nothing serious about it. The shortcomings are that the writing is average, and the author feels that he is not very familiar with various anime worlds, like a cloud reader.

If you're not a brother, what are you doing? If the new world doesn't go to a high-level world, then forget about your entire story of Heaven and Dragon Slaying? Was the world full of anime before and then went straight to martial arts or low-level martial arts? Don't you feel disconnected when you write it yourself? Your entire Resident Evil virus is stronger than this thing. Can you gain anything in this low-military world? Don't talk about getting some Nine Sun Magic Skills, Tai Chi, or anything else to go back to.

Let's complain, some of the characters written by the protagonist are too subject to the author's subjective factors. Although many authors like to degrade people they don't like, and then write them to death more conveniently. But the plot characters you write like this are really awkward. If you write the kind of gangsters who are completely low-level, it is still possible, but most of the plot characters can be regarded as the best among people. Take Tucker as an example. Let me make it clear that I am not trying to criticize him. This character is really annoying. He can basically be regarded as my childhood shadow. To be honest, it would not be an exaggeration to cut him alive. If the protagonist doesn't like him, just kill him. Today's readers don't have such high moral requirements for the protagonist. But the author's way of dealing with it is to crazily vilify it in the early stage, and then the opponent takes action, leaving the protagonist helpless to fight back. Although Shutak is not a person, he is also shaped by acquired experiences, and in the author's writing, he is like a born scumbag. And the protagonist feels really weird. He just kills him, and he doesn't do it openly, and he has to do something righteous. As a result, I had to vilify this character in the early stage, and then create a character who was forced to fight back. The same goes for Nobu at the back. The original novel didn't like this character very much. He was very annoying when he first appeared, but later on when he saw the enemy, he was frightened and went crazy. But to be honest, if courage really emerged so easily when facing death, then courage would not be praised by the world. And although he doesn't dare to face the enemy head-on, he also dares to help the protagonist from behind. Moreover, he is also a hunter, and to be honest, he is considered a pretty good expert. To write this to the author is like a little gangster.

Recently, the world of Bleach and Naruto feels more and more awkward the more I read it, and the more I write about it, the more it feels wrong.

Chosen in the multi-dimensional world: I suck the hook in Naruto

The protagonist is already very powerful, there is no need to recruit some minions.

Why are there Demon Slayers everywhere? Is this the Clone Legion? If you watch too much, you might feel like vomiting.

No matter how much you look forward to the ability to read, you will be disappointed. There is no auxiliary practice or in-depth development of auxiliary fruit abilities. Make a fusion between the storage ability and the clone. After the fusion, the strength will not become three heads and six arms. You can develop and improve your thinking and calculations better than the three heads and six arms. Sun Wukong's three heads and six arms means that the monkey hair clone of Sun Wukong is not strong enough. If you transform from three combat powers to one, you will have more heads and hands.

If you want to make a living from this, you have to get at least one cover

There are too many dungeons opened at the same time, which makes it very confusing. In chapter 40, there are four dungeon worlds. There are more than 100 dungeons, and 7 or 8 worlds are created. It's so messy. At least you have a choice, and individual dungeons can be ended quickly. Also, the move names are too awkward. Hear the wind roar, hear the fire burn, hear the thunder, it's so embarrassing that I keep writing it.

After becoming the Ghost Queen, get a few more hearts and eat a few more fruits.

To be honest, the writing is not bad. For an old guy like me (30+), the worlds written are quite immersive, and the plot progress and rhythm are also manageable. Pirates, Hunters, Exorcist Boys, and Bleach are all animations that have been around for some time. Especially the exorcist boy and the hunter, which are typical anime that have not been released for decades. There are very few novels that include these two anime.

More than 600 photos. It has not yet reached the national level

Wrong, Wolverine's lover is the White Queen's sister, there are no two diamond ability users

There is too much in the world but not too much, so it is difficult to achieve good results.

Although it is a genre that I like to watch, the details written by the author are a bit poor, as if ☁️he just started writing after reading part of the drama.

It's okay in the early stage, but I can't stand it in the later stage. It's too messy.

Why didn't Navigator accept Nami? Robin and Keya have been accepted, can Bucky's navigator do it?

This book is very nice and interesting. The author is Lv1.

Actually, you do have something at the beginning The more you write, the more confusing it gets.

Demon Slayer is too boring, so I'll give you a 6-month ticket to support it, because I'm afraid you won't be able to afford food.

The last word is determined not to make readers happy. If the former world is well written, the latter world must be rubbish.

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I always skip the boring variety comics and watch them.