Youbapi: I Can Spell Words Well in the Wasteland

The author, the following is my opinion: From the author's point of view (I have not written a book, the author's point of view may not be accurate) the name and the first four lines of the introduction are not enough, and the main line is clear but too old (currently it is a very classic orphan of the family, with a noble status, upgrading to kill monsters for revenge, and mixed with the resistance to the old world common to cyberpunk, it is old and mysterious) From a reader's perspective (although this account is young, I have a long history of reading, I am a bookworm for ten years, and the entry-level author is Tudou): First of all, the wording style, the character names are Western-style, and the setting wording is sci-fi style. The two go well together. However, the character dialogue does not match the urban style, and does not fit well with the light novel and cyber style. The initial villain's name is also a bit out of place. Another very important point is that many of your writing methods that bring out the characters and the turning points of events are too straightforward and deliberate. This style is not suitable for Qidian readers, and it is necessary to reduce the kind of narration and explanatory third-party words and phrases, which will affect the perception and sense of involvement. Suggestion: Author, you don't need to rush to set up the setting. The first chapter brings the readers in with explosive points and then slowly renders the world environment and polishes the words. This is acceptable to readers of the light novel category. Their main focus is the writing and characters. Just think about the plot and counter-routine. And: the protagonist's life experience is also a setting! Don't use too much ink in the early stages. More importantly, go and change the name to a better one. This title won't attract enough readers. PS (The monthly votes were cast yesterday, and I recommend four tickets)

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