Hogwarts: Hermione and I Swap Identities!

This book is so good. Is it true that no one has read it? I really laughed like crazy. It's so fun and it completely avoids the aesthetic fatigue of following the plot. I highly recommend reading it.

I don't quite understand why some fan authors can write some obvious things wrong. Where can I choose courses in the first grade? Alas, once you say it, it's second-guessing it. Why do you think so when writing about fan fiction?

The protagonist has read the original work but is not aware of it at all. At the beginning, the professional wizard himself is called Tom Riddle, but he did not expect Harry Potter. Dumbledore personally came to answer questions about why. It is still like this after meeting Hagrid. How about you change your name to this?

The setting of the original work has been changed randomly, no matter what fanfic you write

Being left alone at the dance, even the male protagonist didn't explain. What a humble female protagonist, but she finally came back and had the nerve to ask others to dance. . . As long as the heroine has any dignity, she should slap the hero and refuse to dance with him. . .

It was good before I went to Hogwarts, but I started messing around when I went to school. Many things are inconsistent with the original work. You can adapt it when you write a fanfic, and you can add settings as long as they are rounded out. But the characters, as well as the fact that magic cannot be practiced in the library, and the problem at the door of the Ravenclaw lounge, cannot be written randomly. Changing the most basic settings is completely disrespectful to the original work. According to what I think, you haven't read the original work carefully, so you just write a fanfic? The most basic thing when writing a fanfic is to respect the original work. Without discussing the original work, just reading from the book, I thought it was a single heroine at first, but now I think it is a multi-heroine. This interpenetration setting is really bad. It is sweet at the beginning, but it is disgusting later. Isn't this pure central air conditioning? This kind of plot, no matter there is a single heroine or multiple heroines, is terrible. If you are a sister, you will always be a sister, and if you are a senior, you will treat others as seniors. If it was for multiple heroines from the beginning, how can you flaunt your good character? How old are these professors? This description makes it seem like the protagonist is smart and everyone else is stupid. The setting is novel and the plot is messy.

The plot before the start of school is well written, and neither the setting nor the progression of the plot will feel inconsistent. Although it does not directly enter Hogwarts to start the plot, the description of the protagonist's influence on Hermione and the original environment of some protagonists will not make people feel boring. On the contrary, it will create expectations. I was very happy to see it. But the plot after school starts ... My friend, the loose setting of details makes people a little uncomfortable, and the pace (personal feeling) is a little too fast. Mainly the interaction between Hermione and the protagonist at the beginning of school. Maybe it should be written in more detail? After all, this was the first time the two of them had been together for a long time after experiencing the body-changing experience. It would be a lot less to mention it in one sentence. As for the setting... It would be harmless to say that Hagrid knew that Voldemort was originally named Tom. Then the first-grade elective courses and the first-grade curse are a bit hard to ignore. Especially combined with the protagonist's full schedule and Hermione's full repair, the time they skipped after the exchange gave me a strong sense of separation. His (protagonist's behavior) is a bit hard for me to understand. It gives people the feeling that he wants to work hard but doesn't want to work hard. Both Harry and other teachers have some plots or reactions of their own that they can write more about. In addition, the encounter between Qiu Zhang at the beginning of Chapters 21 and 22 can be written in detail and skipped quickly. The skipped time at the beginning of Chapter 22 "The Godfather" even made me feel that I had missed a lot of the plot. I felt a little too anxious. Whether it is to write more about the reactions of people around both sides and teachers, or to add more feelings between Snape and the protagonist, the rhythm can be made more stable. I still hope that the author can slightly change the setting that is different from the original work. As for the rhythm... I am just a reader. The author must have a reason for writing this.

I still think she is ugly. More than 90% of them are movies, not many people read the original novel.

They say that the settings are changed randomly. I think the author has not read the original work and relies solely on the books written by the fans that he has read. The specific settings are not very clear... The writing is not bad, maybe it was transferred from other areas.

On Christmas Day, I forced myself to create a conflict to save my sister. At that time, I thought that with a single heroine, I could still take it. Then my sister became unclear and started to feel sick. I am most afraid of multiple heroines in this kind of body change. If I can't write it well, it will be over. I don't dare to watch it anymore.

There is a problem, like when Snape calls Hermione, they will call her Miss Granger instead of Miss Hermione.

No, I saw Chapter 17. The first part is fine, but the second part, did the author change the AI ​​to write it? Why is it so weird 🙂

The character is okay so far. I think Hermione's character is perfectly grasped. However, it's really hard for me to understand "Hermione" when she meets other little wizards while eating out. She is also called Hermione a mudworm. Is it possible that all the wizards who can say this word are in the wizard gathering place... Rather than just wandering around outside?

On the whole, the interaction between the protagonist and Hermione is very interesting But the details are somewhat lacking. I don't know if the author doesn't know enough about HP or the design is intentional. For example: 1. There is actually no gryphon (or hippogriff) in HP 2. The Weasley family's treasury only has one galleons (the twins feel that they can't borrow hundreds of galleons...) 3. In the first year, Hagrid is not yet a professor (he understands magical creatures) But he does not have the title of Master of Magical Beasts) 4. Ravenlock has no password, and he has to answer questions every time he returns to the academy dormitory (only the Lion Court and the Snake Court have a password to open the door) 5. Some individual details in the article need to be paid attention to I think the author can take the time to correct some of the previous parts, because the overall look is really interesting, at least it will make me, a veteran who has read most HP articles, have the patience to read~

Wow, the Ravenclaw door knocker disappeared and became an ordinary password door.

Have you passed each other? Some things are written randomly, and I take it for granted!

Even if you haven't read the original work, you can probably get a rough idea of ​​how it could be so OOC by scanning a few more similar fanfics.

Misha and Shadow are the worst parts of this book. If they were removed, the score would definitely be good.

Don't have too many heroines. . . Don't dare to look at it

🤔What can I say, it would be great if the author writes this novel after watching the movie. Several settings are wrong, such as Voldemort can use the Shadowless Blade, first grade Harry Potter can recognize the Shadowless Blade in the basement, etc.

After reading a few chapters, I feel like my brain is about to explode.

These chapters are not very good, these days

It is of the same genre as the next door "Red Mansion: Daiyu and I Crossed Each Other", and it is very interesting and beautiful to write.

It's not much fun, I want to see Tom and Hermione's ambiguous daily life

Is this an imitation of the one where Daiyu wears each other in Red Mansions?