Loan into the Immortal Gate

No one supports my ambition, I borrow money to reach the top of the mountain

I feel that the currency settings and price settings at the beginning are not very reasonable. You can borrow 8,000 spiritual stones in the early stage of Qi training, and a mid-level magic weapon used in the middle stage of Qi training costs 200 spiritual stones. In the world of immortality, a person in the early stage of Qi training should not be worth 40 mid-level magic weapons. Many plot descriptions are very young... For example, the male protagonist goes out. I went shopping and got hungry not long after I got home. Then I wanted to have a good meal and planned to go out. However, when I met a neighbor in the yard, his stomach was thundering, his throat was rolling, and he was swallowing saliva. This scene almost made the male protagonist a kindergarten kid. Since it was almost meal time and I still didn't want to eat Bigu Dan, shouldn't I finish or pack the meal before going home? Now that we have returned home empty-handed and with an empty stomach, we are pressed for time to cultivate immortality. Shouldn't we take Bigu Pill to deal with it first instead of going out and tossing around? Moreover, the male protagonist behaves like he is very hungry. In this case, wouldn't there be everything around him to eat? Can't you use Bigu Pill to deal with it first? Do you have to go out to find a restaurant with severe hunger? Even if you have to go to a restaurant to eat, why can't you go out when you're not too hungry? And an adult, not to mention a cultivator, even an ordinary person should not be so rude in front of strangers of the opposite sex. I feel like a kindergarten child. When I go to a classmate's house for dinner, I can't help but see how delicious the classmate's house is.

What kind of mentality does this Holy Mother have?

When I first read it, I thought it was written by a new author who was a part-time miner. Then when I looked at the author, I was dumbfounded. Why does this writing style deteriorate more and more every time I write it? Author, you don't know how to sell your account, right? It stands to reason that after writing so many books, I should have perfected my writing skills. There are not many problems with the plot of this book, but the main thing is the writing style, which makes people frown while reading it.

Author, let me tell you this, at the beginning you will poop and poop if you want to become an immortal.

I'm already frowning after reading the first chapter. Are you still a time traveler with this mentality? A time traveler for many years? Can you withstand exotic treasures with this mentality?

The protagonist specializes in physical training, and the spiritual power skills are still at the third level of Qi training. There are treasures that increase understanding. However, the protagonist just doesn't like the skills of cultivating immortals. He just doesn't like the spiritual stones to practice, and he doesn't like the protection spells. So far, he doesn't have any attack spells.

I feel that the writing style is a bit childish, modern business writing, a bit like the Virgin, but not the Virgin, it should be positive energy, and it always feels very floating. The author should have written the invincible flow better, I think it is a refreshing article. We didn't encounter any difficulties in the process, and the loan resources were enough. After entering the sect, we designed all kinds of modern things and business articles, and the golden finger was also extraordinary.

This gambling dog has finally subdued his law, so happy

What the hell are you writing? The main character is like a primary school student. It's far-fetched to go to the hotel to lure these people. It's like looking for trouble.

Can you just go to a bank and get a loan? I take it for granted.

It's a bit redundant to sign an equal contract with pandas. The front entry is so fast, and the rear entry is so slow. It's a bit uncomfortable to watch. I'm still a little Karami. When can I build a foundation?

I just finished watching The Family of Green Coriander. Didn't the Three Little Ones write about the ending?

Not very attractive, too watery

The writing is good, but I also write well! Why can't it be popular? 😟 I have reviewed it for fellow Taoists, and it is indeed well written.

Come on＾0＾~

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No one supports me to achieve my goals, so I borrow money to go to the West 😁😁😁

I don't really like novels that use bows and arrows to fight.

As long as you borrow enough money to support the loan, I will be reluctant to kill you. After all, the cost of silence... Is no joke.