Douluo Dalu: A Career Panel, Proving the Dao in Dreams

I kind of know the reasons why some authors throw off their books. If the author doesn't reflect on himself when "I have a great Confucian to argue for me" comes up, then he's not far away from being thrown into the street. I'm still trying to make up for the author's previous mistakes. In the end, Dugu Yan collapsed. Maybe the author thought that it didn't matter if someone was trying to make up for him. As a result, the more he wrote, the less he knew how to reflect and restrain himself, and instead indulged in indulgence. He didn't know that those who were trying to make things up for him might be the last group of people who really liked the subject, so he tolerated what others thought was poisonous and even tried to make things up for him. Are there any stranger readers willing to read it? No one was looking for help for him, they were all talking about poison, and in the end no one saw it and he couldn't make any money. That's not a big deal!

Don't do this thing where there is no heroine but only one heroine! This is fan fiction

Don't mention it, the protagonist's method of obtaining the Xuantian Technique is quite interesting, and it makes more sense than many fans 😂 Those fan protagonists either stole or snatched Tang San's storage soul guide to obtain it (please ask me how could I write it down specifically when I have it all in my mind), or forced Tang San to hand it over (this is even more impossible, they regard the technique as more important than life)

It doesn't look good. It's said to be anti-Tang San, but in fact the actions he performed are similar to Tang San Generally speaking, if fan fiction is anti-Tang San, it is either anti-Tang San's behavior, or it is to portray Tang San as a person And part of it is because he wants to become the God King of Tang, but Tang San, He has occupied the pit, so he chose to rebel against him. Obviously, the protagonist in the author's works is the third party For now, Tang San has not done anything to hurt the protagonist, and has always maintained trust in him. On the contrary, the protagonist took advantage of his trust. Stealing the opponent's lifeblood, defrauding the opponent's growth route, and saying that he must stab him to death when he grows up in the future, it looks really disgusting to people, and he also looks like a retard in his subsequent dealings with others It can only be said that it is an anti-Tang San book. Under the banner of Tang San, he is doing Tang San's things, and will soon become the kind of Tang Shenwang And the personal golden finger looks very powerful, but the protagonist himself uses it like a retard, and even steals other people's lifeblood to make up for himself, but the most outrageous thing is After stealing the Xuantian Technique, my progress rate was extremely slow. My evaluation is that only people who are brainless and anti-Tang San will like to watch it. They don't care at all about what the protagonist does, whether it is more disgusting than Tang San. They are just anti-Tang San. He is the only one who occupies the pit of the God King

Tang San is obviously a hypocrite because of his unnatural operations in the later parts, but the author's style is anti-Tang San. You can either write the protagonist as an upright good person, or write him as a real villain. There is no problem with these. Instead of writing a hypocrite who defeats another hypocrite by relying on intelligence superiority

Before taking the Forgotten River Autumn Water Dew, it was equivalent to the mental power of a level 48 ordinary soul master. After taking it, it increased by three levels, which was equivalent to the mental power of an ordinary first-time soul king. This pressure was too severe. Just to say that the next soul ring of the protagonist can be absorbed for ten thousand years, the effect of the medicine is just stuck at the passing line? I'm speechless, and what's more, the Purple Devil Eye has entered the Mustard Seed Realm, and the Mustard Seed Realm can see through the soul beast's transformation. The spiritual power is at least comparable to Soul Saint or even Soul Douluo! There is also the ice and fire fairy grass in front. Although most of the potion is used to refine the ice and fire body, the excess potency leaked out can at least upgrade the great soul master to three or five levels. In the end, the level has not changed at all? It's really a hard card battle, right?

The spider was written too deliberately. It doesn't mean that there can't be external soul bones, but there is no foreshadowing at all. It is purely a mechanical deity.

1. The protagonist has too much trust in a second-ring master uncle's medicated bath, and a rubbish medicated bath recipe will cause trouble in the front (before modification) 2. The second soul ring hunting is too detailed, and I don't know what the psychology is for giving such a big deal to the soul beast. If there is no transformation process for the protagonist, I even think that this plot can be directly summarized in one chapter or even one paragraph. The death of the mercenary group makes it easier for the protagonist to go to the Ye family? I can't see the meaning at the moment

Seeing that the second hunting ring is starting to release poison, you should get used to it by suppressing the protagonist!

But really don't get a second soul ring, a thousand-year soul ring, after the medicinal bath, otherwise those big forces' medicinal baths will be stupid. I think the plot of the medicinal bath should be used as a transition to the whale gum. When it is relatively weak in the early stage, it is better not to stand out too much and make a fortune in silence In addition, it is better to have a chance to get the 100,000-year-old Blue Silver Emperor soul bone earlier in the early stage. You can be reborn in an instant (it is estimated that there will be one Some people think that the protagonist is suffering in vain. In fact, you can also think that this is paving the way for strength to obtain soul bones and whale glue) The first volume is well written, but it may be because the strength is relatively weak and there are no big highlights. I hope that the plot of improving strength will speed up the progress (personal suggestion)