Douluo: Career Panel, Enlightenment in Dreams

It's okay, but it feels very watery from behind.

I kind of know the reasons why some authors throw off their books. If the author doesn't reflect on himself when "I have a great Confucian to argue for me" comes up, then he's not far away from being thrown into the street. I'm still trying to make up for the author's previous mistakes. In the end, Dugu Yan collapsed. Maybe the author thought that it didn't matter if someone was trying to make up for him. As a result, the more he wrote, the less he knew how to reflect and restrain himself, and instead indulged in indulgence. He didn't know that those who were trying to make things up for him might be the last group of people who really liked the subject, so he tolerated what others thought was poisonous and even tried to make things up for him. Are there any stranger readers willing to read it? No one was looking for help for him, they were all talking about poison, and in the end no one saw it and he couldn't make any money. That's not a big deal!

Don't mention it, the protagonist's method of obtaining the Xuantian Technique is quite interesting, and it makes more sense than many fans 😂 Those fan protagonists either stole or snatched Tang San's storage soul guide to obtain it (please ask me how could I write it down specifically when I have it all in my mind), or forced Tang San to hand it over (this is even more impossible, they regard the technique as more important than life)

Don't do this thing where there is no heroine but only one heroine! This is fan fiction

It doesn't look good. It's said to be anti-Tang San, but in fact the actions he performed are similar to Tang San Generally speaking, if fan fiction is anti-Tang San, it is either anti-Tang San's behavior, or it is to portray Tang San as a person And part of it is because he wants to become the God King of Tang, but Tang San, He has occupied the pit, so he chose to rebel against him. Obviously, the protagonist in the author's works is the third party For now, Tang San has not done anything to hurt the protagonist, and has always maintained trust in him. On the contrary, the protagonist took advantage of his trust. Stealing the opponent's lifeblood, defrauding the opponent's growth route, and saying that he must stab him to death when he grows up in the future, it looks really disgusting to people, and he also looks like a retard in his subsequent dealings with others It can only be said that it is an anti-Tang San book. Under the banner of Tang San, he is doing Tang San's things, and will soon become the kind of Tang Shenwang And the personal golden finger looks very powerful, but the protagonist himself uses it like a retard, and even steals other people's lifeblood to make up for himself, but the most outrageous thing is After stealing the Xuantian Technique, my progress rate was extremely slow. My evaluation is that only people who are brainless and anti-Tang San will like to watch it. They don't care at all about what the protagonist does, whether it is more disgusting than Tang San. They are just anti-Tang San. He is the only one who occupies the pit of the God King

Tang San is obviously a hypocrite because of his unnatural operations in the later parts, but the author's style is anti-Tang San. You can either write the protagonist as an upright good person, or write him as a real villain. There is no problem with these. Instead of writing a hypocrite who defeats another hypocrite by relying on intelligence superiority

The spider was written too deliberately. It doesn't mean that there can't be external soul bones, but there is no foreshadowing at all. It is purely a mechanical deity.

Before taking the Forgotten River Autumn Water Dew, it was equivalent to the mental power of a level 48 ordinary soul master. After taking it, it increased by three levels, which was equivalent to the mental power of an ordinary first-time soul king. This pressure was too severe. Just to say that the next soul ring of the protagonist can be absorbed for ten thousand years, the effect of the medicine is just stuck at the passing line? I'm speechless, and what's more, the Purple Devil Eye has entered the Mustard Seed Realm, and the Mustard Seed Realm can see through the soul beast's transformation. The spiritual power is at least comparable to Soul Saint or even Soul Douluo! There is also the ice and fire fairy grass in front. Although most of the potion is used to refine the ice and fire body, the excess potency leaked out can at least upgrade the great soul master to three or five levels. In the end, the level has not changed at all? It's really a hard card battle, right?

1. The protagonist has too much trust in a second-ring master uncle's medicated bath, and a rubbish medicated bath recipe will cause trouble in the front (before modification) 2. The second soul ring hunting is too detailed, and I don't know what the psychology is for giving such a big deal to the soul beast. If there is no transformation process for the protagonist, I even think that this plot can be directly summarized in one chapter or even one paragraph. The death of the mercenary group makes it easier for the protagonist to go to the Ye family? I can't see the meaning at the moment

Seeing that the second hunting ring is starting to release poison, you should get used to it by suppressing the protagonist!

But really don't get a second soul ring, a thousand-year soul ring, after the medicinal bath, otherwise those big forces' medicinal baths will be stupid. I think the plot of the medicinal bath should be used as a transition to the whale gum. When it is relatively weak in the early stage, it is better not to stand out too much and make a fortune in silence In addition, it is better to have a chance to get the 100,000-year-old Blue Silver Emperor soul bone earlier in the early stage. You can be reborn in an instant (it is estimated that there will be one Some people think that the protagonist is suffering in vain. In fact, you can also think that this is paving the way for strength to obtain soul bones and whale glue) The first volume is well written, but it may be because the strength is relatively weak and there are no big highlights. I hope that the plot of improving strength will speed up the progress (personal suggestion)

He is also an old author, can't he understand what the readers want to see? Readers want to see things within the protagonist's control, rather than accidents like this. Do you understand? You can adjust and feel pressure, but you can't lose control. The funniest thing is that in the original text, Tang San and the second spirit ring were directly ignored, but you authors insist on making trouble here. Don't look for things in the plot, you have to create your own plot, you have to find things to be funny. The fate master doesn't even remember what he wrote. You guys are just a treasure. You have to tell the story of the accident. Do you understand the antecedents and effects? The original text is, based on the original text, the original text is not what is being written. You are writing here, and the original text is just one stroke. You are doing all kinds of things here, and there is a comparison with the original text. How do you think you can get favor from others by writing these things?

Whale glue is not needed, what hook should I use for medicated bath? I just put the version of the answer and don't copy it, I have to write it myself, the writing is really a piece of shit.

The description of the attached soul bone is too ridiculous, the ghost-eyed demon spider is finished, and the silver dragon bloodline has to be added 🤫

If I don't write it down all the way, the author will feel that he has a thorn in his heart, and he has to find problems for the protagonist. The so-called growth of the protagonist is not allowed. Whether the protagonist grows or not depends on your writing? Can't you just write it more maturely? You also said that to highlight the setting and establish the character, does it have to have a twist? Does it have to be this kind of uncontrolled thing? There can be a twist, but he must be within the protagonist's control, do you understand? You are an old author. You have written this kind of plot in dozens of books. You must be looking for trouble, right?

The soul ring

First, "What surprised Tang San even more was that under the influence of the cold air, his entire brain seemed to be separated from his body. His mental power that could penetrate his body was generated after taking "Looking Through Begonia". But Tang San didn't know how to use this mental power." (Tang San couldn't use mental power at all before absorbing the soul bone) Second, "The master had taught Tang San how to cultivate his mental power before, but at that time Hou Tangsan's main experience was in the practice of Xuan Tian Gong. In his opinion, mental power was just a illusory thing and might not be of much use. But at this moment, he suddenly figured out that the role of mental power was not small at all. In this sense, it will never be smaller than his own soul power." (Tang San didn't care about mental power at all, he just absorbed purple energy every day) Thirdly, "Tang Hao discovered that the mental power Tang San possessed at this time had actually exceeded his own. It was close to the level of an ordinary Soul Douluo. He understood that this was definitely not something that a piece of spiritually condensed wisdom skull could do. That soul bone could certainly enhance Tang San's spiritual power and allow him to comprehend the mysteries of the spiritual world. In fact, the wisdom skull was more like a key to Tang San. Since he was a child, Tang San had been clearing the door to the spiritual world. Chen Du faces Chaoyang to practice the Purple Demon Eyes. In fact, he doesn't know that it's not just his eyes, it's also training his mental power. But that kind of training has always been hidden in his mind." (Tang San is over 40 levels, and after absorbing the soul bone, his mental power has reached Contra, so how much mental power can be added to one soul bone, you can calculate it yourself) Taking it all together, the author, come and see for yourself how much mental power you think the Seeing Autumn Water Dew can absorb? It depends on how many levels of spiritual power you think a head soul bone can add. How can one soul bone be considered as enough spiritual power for your family for ten years? Then before Tang San absorbed the soul bones, he was at least a Soul Emperor and a Soul Saint-level spiritual power. What else can you say as the author? You said that the readers have not read the original work. Have you read the original work?

I thought that the author never mentioned the justice of the protagonist, nor did he mock the God King Bingqing Yujie from the perspective of the protagonist. The protagonist doesn't get angry when he steals things at the beginning, and he doesn't get angry when he deceives people. However, after dozens of chapters, when the target is Tang San, he starts to get angry. Classically, you are no different from the God King, and it has become a fixed skill. The protagonist never said that it was a just act to mess with Tang San, but because he wanted to become stronger and stole the skills, he thought that the two would become enemies. Some people felt that the other party was standing on the moral high ground after seeing anti-Tang San novels out of pure stress. The author of the problem wrote anti-Tang San in the first sentence of his introduction, insisting on joining as M.

When you don't have a big background in Dou Yi, don't do anything about the second thousand-year ring. In this era when everyone's soul rings are simple and plain, you with the second thousand-year ring will be as conspicuous as a firefly mixed in a group of mosquitoes. Then a random soul king and soul emperor will come and ask you how you did it? You say it depends on talent, let's see if people believe it or not! Some people may even suspect that you have a soul bone in your body and kill you to take the bones. Wouldn't you just explode! There were a lot of people spying on him in the fourth ring of Tang San Thousand Years, but on the surface he was a poisonous Douluo, and behind his back he was protected by Tang Hao, so he was able to survive!

Shen Nong, The first 20 chapters are about food and grass Forget about the rest, no background, no close relationship with Dugu Bo, get the fairy grass and escape (Dugu Yan and Yu Tianheng are lovers, and there is a Yu family behind), lick the Ye family, become a disciple at the time, and get sugar pills

Where is the endless Shennong? How is this book?

Don't say anything anymore, just support me

The previous chapters were pretty good, but the crazy operations started from the Ye family, and the author refused to listen. Does anyone know if this is an escape from the outline or just a complete mess?

In the original work, Tang San spent thousands of years not raising the Poseidon status to God King And the Poseidon status only has the potential to be promoted to God King Poseidon still accumulated nearly a thousand years to reach level 1 god Then he slowly rose to level 100 How long will it take for the protagonist to reach the standard?

Good guy, Tang San is even better than Tang San. If Tang San's character is not good, it's all Dou Er's business, but this protagonist's character is not good from the beginning.

The first part of this book is okay, but the second part is not something I want to read at all.

Will we change the map later or finish the book?

I unknowingly ordered another copy? It seems that the author's writing style is more suitable for me.

Are you planning to see how much you have written? Another eunuch who died halfway?