Hogwarts, but King Eldon
霍格沃茨，但是艾尔登之王
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- 115k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 8mo ago
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- Qidian
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The protagonist's performance is not like that of King Elden, a tough guy who has been through blood and fire in the borderland. He is just a childish brat with an immature mind.
What kind of brat is the protagonist that can be threatened by a tiny Dumbledore? Kill the king of the border area, he's more of a magician, and his thoughts can be read by ordinary wizards. It's over.
The plot is blunt, the characters are not vivid enough, and the protagonist seems to have been forcibly inserted into the original plot.
Does your character have the power of a king?
It's another type of fandom that doesn't know the plot or has forgotten the plot. This genre inherently has a big poisonous point (the protagonist gets something that looks shabby, but is awesome, and ends up throwing it away as rubbish. Aren't you trying to discourage readers? Or the protagonist gets something awesome out of nowhere, or knows where it is. Aren't you treating the reader as a fool?) This genre can be considered the most difficult to write among fanfics. I want to ask you which book in this genre has been written?
Fallen leaves bring messages, this is an era of hydrology
Although there is indeed nothing about mental protection in the border area, it is outrageous for a King of Elden to be telepathic by Dumbledore. The characters are all different, and the early stage is quite superficial.
Did the protagonist not know the plot or did it take too long to forget?
The sauce is here, come on, the author, bring Samyang turkey noodles, gold and silver steamed buns, crispy oven-roasted duck, grilled sausages, pancakes and fruits, a small bench in the front row
This illustrates the point that not all themes can be integrated with the Harry Potter series.
In fact, in the final analysis, the problem is that the world view of the Circle of Magic, which is almost all about fighting, is not suitable for HP. After all, the strongest combat power in the HP world is Voldemort. I doubt whether Voldemort can surpass the gatekeeper Malkit.