The Planner Still Hasn't Forgiven the Players

Rather than traveling into a different world, it's more like traveling into an ancient martial arts novel. It's all about communication barriers, misunderstandings, being looked down upon, showing off talent, having accidents, turning the tide, gaining favor, and repeating the above operations on the next map. Other novels have been used for more than 20 or 30 years, but the author is still using it. He does not write good player stories. Instead, he writes the main plot and uses various accidents to advance it. As a result, the entire story system is rushed to the shelves, and new things are used as soon as they are released. It is all a waste of free rice.

Come on, believe in yourself.

Classically, you can receive express delivery without registering an address, and it will be delivered in seconds.

Why can I receive a gaming helmet without filling in the address? Can you try to be more reasonable?

Is it the classic planning flow? Or do you have other jobs?

The clown protagonist wants players to develop, but he hides his skills and waits for them to be discovered, and then he waits for players to reveal them to others. Pure clown, why don't you just disclose the skills? They are given for free in the first place. What a great writer.

I can't understand what the purpose of creating a character called Kid Brother is. Hiding better skills and not letting others use them, huh. I feel like Kid Brother has no purpose other than disgusting readers.

I really hate to complain. In a game novel, the protagonist sets up the stage and can basically stay there. Why does he always show his holiness in front of others?

The other players are still at level 3 or 4. The protagonist directly lets a player advance to level 27. Isn't it fair to you?

Just average, a classic routine, nothing interesting, and the protagonist has very little sense of presence.

There are a few minor vulnerabilities. . . Do you know why the capitalists take a cut instead of taking it all? The fact that you, the protagonist, take everything from the players at every turn is short-sighted and unethical. . . Also, a lot of writing is spent on writing new characters, only to be given away after a few chapters. . . It would look much better if we remove these poison points and add more fun points for the player/protagonist.

It feels pretty good, nothing toxic.

Not bad, it seems pretty smooth so far

Let's see if we can come up with something new later.

，（），（）    （），（） Overall, it looks very good. Although there are flaws, the setting is really good. I highly recommend it.

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Good looking, Chen Shang Sword Journey, a great read!

The author is really too lazy. He doesn't update 10,000 words every day. How on earth can he sleep?

It's not enough to watch just this every day. I still have to save up.

In fact, the writing of this book "The Fourth Natural Disaster" is pretty good, the pacing is pretty good, and it feels good when it should be. There are some flaws that are understandable.

It looks pretty good, thank you to the author

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Brother Hui is here for a visit

The first point is that the protagonist did not tell the players to hide their blood! Although the protagonist wants the player's blood and wants the player to die more! But let's rise first! Let players explore on their own! How long will it take? After leveling up, shouldn't it be better to die? Why die when the level is low? Return the blood! Very few! Might as well upgrade more and die again! The second point is race cloud, why don't you tell the players? If you are a player, the player will die less! Or let the players themselves inspire racial luck! Obviously most of them can win, but they don't know the various problems! He died again inexplicably! I'm really speechless!

Brother Hui is here for a visit

It was quite enjoyable to read it in one sitting. There are no problems with the plot. The protagonist can handle it well but I don't know what to do in the later stages. I look forward to the author's imagination, but it's too short. I will collect it first and keep it for a while.

This theme has not changed for many years. It's not as good as those combined with forced crossing and handing over the country.