Martial Arts: After Listening to the Advice and Practicing Swordsmanship, I Became the Best in the World

I haven't read the book yet, and most likely I won't read it, but I still want to tell you, the author, that you are sure not to change the introduction, and the content in the book related to the introduction. I felt so aggrieved when I saw the introduction that I didn't even bother to open it. I tied up the people and asked you to chop off their arms, so you did it. Could it be that you were forced to chop off your little brother and then kill yourself with a knife? Or the villain kidnapped the people and directly threatened Guo Jing and asked him to strip Huang Rong naked on the city wall. Could it be that the author really arranged for this drama to be staged? It's not a problem for the abusive master to suppress the protagonist. There are always people who like this style, but this kind of routine that was bad decades ago, now seems to be a bit out of ideas, to put it mildly, you're welcome!

Are you serious, author? 🤔

The introduction is so stupid! Ahhhhh

The reality is that reading novels is just a way to relax and feel refreshed. The writing is so screwed up that no one will read it except for the author's own pleasure.

In a popular saying: "I was a horse before time travel. After time travel, I am still a horse after I have a system. Didn't I travel in vain?" The protagonist is really born with a worker's body, so you can imagine how many readers will be willing to read it. As for improvement, this requires the author to put more thought into it. Think about whether there are classic templates that can be used for reference. For example, why did Xie Xiaofeng use the pseudonym "Useless Aji" as the Turtle Gong without much disgust, but instead felt a sense of pride in his heart? That's because he was just in trouble for a while, but we readers all know that he is a phoenix. So this is the importance of background setting, and this is what the so-called hero is in trouble. Your background is very ordinary, you are just an ordinary person, you are a good part-time job to upgrade your skills? There is another book that is similar in type to yours, Black and White Datuanzi's book "Zongwu Fishing", which can also be regarded as a system upgrade stream. The results are not bad and can be analyzed.

Why does this introduction make me feel that the protagonist has already torn himself into pieces before he even starts to be awesome?

The introduction makes people feel that there is something wrong with the protagonist's brain

Broken arm for some NPC?

The dead person in the Condor Shooting appears in the divine eagle? ? ? Is Ouyang Ke from the Divine Eagle?

This introduction! Depressing intelligence and sensationalism, abusing the master. After reading your incredible introduction, I would like to comment specifically.

No one will read the abusive main article, and there will be no desire to read the introduction.

I'm sorry to see comments like "not suitable for writing martial arts". The author has written about traditional martial arts. Unfortunately, it is unknown. The works of Jin Yong, Gu Long and other great people are indeed beyond our reach. But can you give me a chance, and can you give this little Chen An a chance? No more, twenty chapters. Take another look at the rivers and lakes and martial arts described by the author. The rivers and lakes are far more than the light and shadow of swords. This martial arts is far more than the use of force to break the law.