
Immortality Begins with the Taiyin Immortal Clan
长生从太阴仙族开始
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- Completed
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- 658k Words
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- Cultivation
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- Male
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
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Although the results were average, even miserable. And the author has many problems including the setting, writing style, writing style, plot, and character control. But since the author has written it, he will continue to write it and finish the story in his heart. What the author wants to write most is "Taiyin Sword Immortal". And because there are many reference points in the setting of the cultivation system, and some of the words are difficult to pronounce, which is very unfriendly to readers who have not seen the relevant work, I will make a relevant introduction to the work after the 300,000 words are put on the shelves. (I was busy writing at the time and didn't pay that much attention) I've been too busy at work recently, so by the time of the Chinese New Year, it will almost be on the shelves, and I'll have time to make up for it. Thank you to all the book friends who gave me rewards and voted for me. For you, I will also finish the book. Maybe what I wrote is not very satisfactory, but I will stick to it, Oli 💪
I like the setting very much, but the writing and plot control are a bit lacking.
As title. Tired of watching people struggling to survive, this setting with a good starting background is really attractive to me. But in this case, the subsequent development will further test the author's control of the plot and characters (forget it if the matryoshka doll is real). At least I'm still looking forward to it now, come on
There are too many characters in the beginning and there are no memory points, and most of them are transformed into the Riddler. The author has an outline to know these, but we readers do not. The author is not a great person, so he sets a threshold at the beginning.
Will there be any mysterious appearance? 🤓
Update in the evening. Last night I drank on business until past one o'clock in the morning.
I hope the author can persevere,
Does the realm name come from the Immortal Road Supreme?
Can you tell me about the seniority in this book? I was a bit confused when I read it. Their names are different and I don't know how they are directly related.
The most important thing the author of this book should do now is to correct the improper use of punctuation marks in the previous text. It's better to revise it as soon as possible while the word count is low now. There are too many situations where double quotation marks are not used when it is clearly a dialogue, which makes people's heads hurt. Are you writing a book? This is worse than a typo.
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Is the author a Taoist priest? The names of magic weapons and exercises are not popular at all, and the names of novels are not secular. What's the point? Increase reading difficulty?
The writing is quite good, and the content and settings are very rich. However, some of the orthodoxy and power structures in it only have one noun and no introduction. It looks very abstract and difficult to understand.
Is there a Shennong? After reading the resume, it states that the male protagonist studied swordsmanship under the Taiyin lineage?
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I don't understand the realm, what are the true king, divine elixir, remaining position, and knot?