Gao Wu: My Cultivation Accelerator Is a Planet

Let me tell you something. Forget it! Let's cool down. Brothers, go to sleep💤

Is it a pacing problem or a plot connection problem? Or is the pacing too slow and not enjoyable? Or is it almost everything? Hun-Hun-hu-hu

Tang Heng Dao (with a short side knife) Mo Dao (also commonly known as the Horse-Zhan Dao in the Tang Dynasty)

You can either write it to 100,000 words and then read it again, or you can change the beginning. The name of your protagonist is also abstract. I thought it was Li Bai? The name you give Bai Ye is like the name of a villain, it feels like the ancient times. Gao Wu, your first three chapters are crisis openings. In fact, this kind of thing is not popular at all. Do you think any Gao Wu on the list has a crisis opening? Don't always start with trivial things, slowly reveal the worldview from small things, and wait until about ten chapters before starting to work hard, that is, to stimulate emotions. It's not Tomato's assembly-line high-level martial arts gimmick writing. Anyone with a normal rhythm will read it.

Don't write about the protagonist's crisis. You just write the best flow of genius. The teacher's respect, the classmates' respect, and the seniors' respect. Written about the sense of reward of this genius style, don't engage in any fighting, it is meaningless, unless you are a loser in the early stage. Otherwise, what's the fun of fighting? Take more than ten chapters to write about the protagonist's transition from a martial arts genius among ordinary people to a warrior. The premise you want to write in this part is to shape the urban environment, family, teachers, martial arts gym or high school, and the protagonist's current dilemma, such as material, identity, or simply for combat power. It would be easier to write some more jokes to get through the beginning of these dozen chapters. These contents may seem plain, but it is necessary to increase the sense of substitution. This is internal strength. If you can't write it well, most high-level martial artists won't be able to do it. It is to first write about the worldview of ordinary people, and then move to the worldview of extraordinary warriors. Use your extraordinary abilities to do things you couldn't do before. This is the fundamental joy of Gao Wu. How can you substitute the extraordinary world view when you first come up? The protagonist is a normal person in the early stage,