From Zhengsheng Elementary School to Pioneer Commune

It was good, but why did you use a plastic bottle for training?

Before the plastic was activated, I thought it was a rebirth novel, but then it suddenly became activated without rebirth or time travel. It's too supernatural. Do you want to write about data-based spiritual energy recovery?

It's pretty good in daily life, but I feel like I have super powers because of how I write it.

It's too inconsistent to have surreal events in real life, right?

The writing is quite good, but there is no sense of immersion. I come from a small place. The protagonist learned piano and computers in elementary school. He only had the opportunity to learn about these in high school.

The protagonist's bottle talk made Lin Qianqian see that people are complex and changeable

I wrote that I was eight years old, but I acted like I was 18.

When it comes to hospitalization, one thing you need to know is that even if the rich man pays the hospitalization fee, it does not mean that he will not have to provide support in the future. Even if he says that he does not want to, it is legally invalid. At least he must be responsible for the tuition and basic living expenses before reaching adulthood.

What role does the activation of plastic bottles play? Puzzled

Other people's covers are attractive, but yours is discouraging. Do you want to insert the radio gymnastics "Youth Dance" into the chapter?

Overall it's good, but there are some poisonous points. The protagonist's bottle is broken inexplicably and it's really abstract. The protagonist's father is too stupid and too facially made Others are okay, right?

It feels like a real elementary school student, and the writing is quite fascinating.

The main line is not clear, you should be a novice

I made 4,000 yuan a year, I'm so awesome 😍😍

I think it's pretty good. Let's write it according to your outline.

This introduction is very interesting, take a look

Ask: How many chapters will the protagonist reach adulthood?

I have been a primary school student, it's boring.