Comics: Necromancers Don't Want to Be Heroes

The plot progresses inexplicably. In addition to possessing necromancy, the protagonist is so fragile that he can be killed with one shot, and then he still adheres to the so-called order? Then there were actually policemen in Hell's Kitchen of American Comics, and they even came to threaten a doctor who was performing surgery on a gangster! All I can say is tsk tsk, and then there is the plot behind it. Why do you need to go to the doctor for palladium poisoning? Who do you think you are? What a disgusting plot

After reading Chapter 38, here's a rough summary: 1. The protagonist is a necromancer on the order side, similar to the undead in the dark world view, and believes in the cycle of life and death, so if you want to see undead natural disasters, you can go 2. The combat strength of the main body is supported by bone armor skills, which is not bad, but currently the doctor profession is the main occupation, and the necromantic side is still developing. 3. The article idea is very good, but the writing style is very poor. It looks very dry and can only be used as food. It is recommended that the author improve his writing skills.

The idea is quite good, I can see that I want to create a three-dimensional world, but the writing is too dry. The behavioral logic displayed by the protagonist in many cases is just like the cutting scenes of the New Three Kingdoms. There is no warning and it is crisp. On the surface, there is no problem in adding a setting that self-destructs under stress like a porcupine to a doctor who knows both black and white, but it is too abrupt. The description behind the scenes is even more confusing. There is a feeling of being afraid of being exposed but not caring about it, but also wanting to cover your head and force yourself but being restrained. Especially when the two identities of light and dark are described together, it seems that schizophrenia is coming. Often the first sentence describes how good the protagonist's behavior is to the common people, and the next sentence changes the style and describes how powerful the characters ABC would be if they were made undead. For example, just like I said: "I had a good meal this morning (in reality), and the pile of corpses was too troublesome to deal with (playing games)." The two sentences are correct individually, but they should appear separately in chapters ten chapters apart, and together they look weird. It's a pity. I'll look at it later and decide whether to give up.

There are too many chapters that have been rewritten, so I'm afraid I'm not going to kill myself. It is equivalent to directly killing at least half of those who have been reading it and making it convenient for those who come after.

After the change, it became Guinan. The bomb in the clinic became an anesthetic. I was too anxious to treat the card, and I also kneeled and licked it.

It's not how you changed twenty chapters to let me read it. Re-reading the plot makes it seem specious and inconsistent. If I don't re-read the plot, I still can't follow it. Where is the author? Can you please tell me why you changed it?

After watching the first 10, the rating is: 8/10 It is gradual and step-by-step, without deliberately creating conflicts. The intelligence of the pros and cons is online, and the lack of poisonous points is the biggest attraction. See the latest chapter: 6/10 The reason for the lower score is that the writing is too vernacular, and there are many self-questions and unnecessary psychological descriptions. It is recommended that the author polish it after finishing writing.

It was still readable before the change, but it was a mess after the change. The persona has changed, the motivation has changed. It looked baffling.

If the book scores well, you can come out and tell me where you started to change it, and add chapter names or new chapters. If the book scores poorly, just delete the book and resubmit it. What is the difference between what you are doing now and going to the hospital after drinking pesticides? You are still dragging it out without dying.

59 To 60 is inexplicable, like two books, the preface does not match the follower

I don't know where to start again after you changed it. This is the first time I have encountered this situation.

The power system is not interesting and the life trajectory is too dry. I personally don't like it.

It looks like it's about to be cut, but actually the idea is quite good. It's a common problem of Marvel and DC. As the protagonists become stronger and stronger, it becomes more and more difficult to write interesting follow-ups, because the top bosses in these two are basically backgrounds, and the active main characters, except for a few, have limited combat power. Moreover, the stronger they are, the easier it is to repeat themselves and eat books.

I changed so much at once that I don't know where to start. Is there any change in the plot between the past and the present that will save time?

What do you mean, if the so-called Karma Taj really controls the east and west every day, then the Marvel plot will be less than half

There is no need to change it. It looked good before the change, but it looks weird after the change.

? What do I think about changing so many things at once?

There's something interesting ahead! Once you change it later, the whole thing changes! Brainless and invincible!

Everything was fine in the beginning, at least it was gradual. Until I got to Hydra, I felt that the author didn't know how to advance. He didn't write behind the scenes and couldn't do it before the scenes. In addition, the original writing was very dry and process-oriented. Just like the task master, he had a good impression of the NPC on the left and promoted the main plot with a certain NPC on the right.

Well done to more updates!

It's pretty good at the beginning, but in the back the protagonist talks too much and the author's name is useless, which makes it a bit embarrassing.

Did I miss something? Why are they all changed?😰😰😰