People Are in Warhammer, Rangers Are Out!

Puppet of Destiny, eliminating the protagonist directly does not affect the development of the story. No, maybe it can be better. It takes some strength to write such a useless protagonist.

After it was put on the shelves, I pulled the big one and handed it over directly to the body and soul yellow skin to fight...

Extraordinary World Having a sister in soul travel means that you can trigger events anytime and anywhere Having a golden finger that can be exchanged for anything means you can randomly adjust your combat power at any time

It is recommended to change the source of the soldiers to the protagonist himself, otherwise the book will be written to death by yourself in the end.

If you kill 50 zombies, you can add a machine gunner. If you can hit it until someone breaks through the defense, what if you save some money and buy a tank? Even if the tank's machine gun with no CD refresh is not released, Old Man Huang will not have to be possessed to hit the back. Is it really okay to let the Japanese soldiers lock the zombie group and then blow it up with a nuclear bomb? Damn it, get out of my bookshelf now

If it's not on the shelves, you can write whatever you want. If you put it on the shelf and look at it, it will be nothing more than just taking a risk.

It doesn't have much flavor, but is a bit of an AI-generated novel about the morning bully, all kinds of love and bondage, soft and weak. After only reading a dozen chapters, we already have a arrogant agent, a sensible sister, a lolita with animal ears, and a capable female medic, and we can already think of the follow-up story. The story of having to squeeze my fists for a 50-yuan good brother and fighting for love and bond is over. It has been withdrawn.

The protagonist can't do anything (you have to imitate Guilliman at the beginning and go into battle in person, then get killed, and then continue to learn despite repeated admonitions). The commander Nova found by the protagonist can disobey the master's orders and do what he thinks is right. In the end, he has to sacrifice his body to let the emperor come to help. You also want to lose your human body and then rely on your powerful soul to say that I am not a god, right?

After reading Chapter 19, I couldn't help but feel unhappy. 1: Now that there is a command center, can we produce SCVs and still go to work in the factory? Two: Obviously there are only a few good brothers who still need to accumulate food to slow down the stage of becoming king. Forcibly arranging for a mentally retarded upper class in the hive city to be slapped in the face by the protagonist in a psychological and physical sense. Three: You can obviously wait for support, but you have to send them one by one? The heroic unit has gone through so many battles, but is it so weak? A doctor sister and a hell porcupine really think they can do anything? If something goes wrong, he will just cry and call the commander. Four: Will the Emperor's Angels attend a banquet for the upper echelons of the hive city? After seeing such a blasphemous scene, I can only say: Interesting? Hehe

This skill has become completely useless now, and the worst part is that the author still hasn't figured out what the main plot should be. Shouldn't the male protagonist hurry up and make the next plan with his sister and Tychus now? As a result, what I wrote now is a hammer and a stick, and I somehow ended up on a certain planet playing house with a female Krieger. ╮(＾▽＾)╭

The plot and characters are very dull, and the combat power is also biased. If you pay more attention to it, you should know that Warhammer has a lot of crotch. He was defeated by a car and defeated the big demon. He was lame and smashed the armored Custodian Army for dozens of meters. It is not as good as the wooden hard Primarch. Technology deformity and industrial productivity are clichés. In fact, the individual combat power of Warhammer and other big demons and primarchs is ridiculous.

This is the first time I've seen something written not as well as gw's.

Even after being beheaded and killed instantly in the Garden of Nurgle, the chief demon Kor'gas still went back and read a message to resurrect him. After the boss of the week, Angron, was killed, he would be resurrected eight days later unless Khorne was recharged. New chapter There is a great unclean person in the real universe. He can be resurrected in seconds after death. Even Mortarion has this ability. This is Nurgle himself, right?

It looks good. After all, combat power must be balanced. From Star to Warhammer, cheating must be a small advantage in setting combat power. The four evil gods of subspace still need Warhammer methods to solve. There is no standard for the strength of the combat power in the two worlds. The author's current balance looks very good. Come on 🙂.

The protagonist is so out of ammunition that he asks the emperor to remotely control his body to fight for him. It is really difficult to explain, and a good hand of cards is played to a pulp.

The climax of the plot is just mentioned in one stroke, with Old Man Huang possessing him... What on earth do you think...

Can Shen Nong tell me how it works?

I just saw chapter 62. . . . I've read a lot of Warhammer fics recently, and none of them are as useless as this one. . . Still suppressing combat power. . . It's not a small thing to be able to exchange for everything in StarCraft. . . The weakest among the Warhammer fandoms that are still being updated today. . . There is another lengthy description of my sister at the back. . . Cheating some money. . . Living pollution🙂🙂🙂

When you look at Red Alert and StarCraft, you basically look at the suppression of explosive troops. Even with 5,000 points, you can only recruit 100 machine gunners and then your income starts to drop. This is a talent.

The cesspool of subspace is not as big as your book.

To be honest, I suddenly had an idea. Don't the Imperial humans value sacrifice the most? Then why not just commit collective suicide and sacrifice? Then the emperor can get up and happily beat the four vendors, right? ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ

After reading Chapter 60, Zhi Xi did too many things. My poisonous resistance can no longer hold on, bye.

Did you write the front part or the back part? The style has changed directly. If the previous style continues, your book should be in the top 500, just like that survival guide. The following content is the same as the story told by a novice Tomato author, which makes people have no desire to read 😅. Is writing this book to make money or to satisfy myself? Feel free to pretend I didn't say anything

After reading Chapter 18, I personally feel that the author has no social experience

I think Pimba, who agrees and who opposes?

I guess my grades are too bad and I can't continue writing. It's not even fun to write this book even though it's so ugly. There's also an author who doesn't even make any money just to lick the emperor╮(＾▽＾)╭

Will it look like it has been cut? ? ?

It doesn't look good, except for the part I've seen so far where I have to duel with the nobles and I feel stupid.

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