Either a Demon or an Immortal

Anyone? Please give me a recommendation vote

I haven't received a link from the website to sign the book since I published it. It's just gone, and there's no cross-check. I also know that in fact, what I wrote is not attractive enough and needs to be polished. One is that the world view unfolds too quickly and the plot is not substantial enough. One is written like a hammer in the east and a stick in the west, a narrative like a running account, lacking the support of specific events. It was a bit too hasty to publish the book. I have been writing fan fiction for several years, and have been on the road of being an author for more than 2,700 days. This is my third original novel. One of them was sold, one was cut, and this one. Although the current market does not encourage originality, I chose to give it a try. As a novel author, I feel that since I am in this business, I must embark on the original path. Sooner or later, no matter whether it is successful or not, I will continue to polish my works and continue to create new original works.

To be honest, I think the content and literary nature of the author's writing are okay, as are the words and sentences. But how can I put it? The author wants to create a sense of horror, but to be honest, the author's creation of horror is not terrifying. Then, about this book, I feel that it is not his main plot. And this book seems to be a little bit so far. That kind of mysterious and mysterious feeling Now I am waiting for the author to unfold the world view, or tell the story clearly. Well, to be honest, the story of the first 6 chapters is a bit confusing for me. I can only say that the number of times is too small and the information given is too little. And the feeling of mysterious and mysterious is too deep. I feel that this book will not be popular easily!!

The author's writing at the beginning is a bit mysterious and mystical. To be honest, he just mentioned something like the fishman in the beginning. Later, the author wrote that the protagonist came to some bottomless abyss and then wrote about the cultivation system of this world. To be honest, it is very creative, and I think it is quite beautiful!! It's just that the subject matter the author writes about is too niche!! But I think the author's cultivation system is really interesting!!

The name is good and looks good. I support it!

Come on, let's preach together! Welcome to put it back on the bookshelf. We will go a long way slowly and we need each other's support! 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹