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This book "Chen Shang Sword Journey" really made my eyes shine😎The protagonist Lin Mo is not a time-traveling and reborn big boss, nor is he a sect's genius. He is just the son of a humble servant, and he is on the run with unwarranted charges. There is no golden finger to start, and there is no guidance from famous teachers. The only thing he can rely on is his own brain🧠 and the fierceness that refuses to admit defeat😤 The plot has grabbed my throat from the first page👊Escape, pursuit, survival in desperate situations, and business ways to defeat martial arts. Every step is thrilling but reasonable. There are no brainless cheats, only calculations and fights that lick blood on the tip of the knife. I stayed up all night to catch up on the latest chapter, my eyes were bloodshot and I didn't want to stop🌙 The characters are amazing! Lin Mo, the protagonist, is not "Long Aotian" in the traditional sense. He is tolerant, ruthless, and afraid, but every decision carries the weight of blood and tears, and people can't help but clench their fists for him💪The supporting cast is equally wonderful, without tools, everyone Everyone has their own reasons and struggles to live. Even the villains make people hate them but they have to accept them. 😖 What impressed me the most is the setting of "Business + Martial Arts". Using business as a sword, you can travel across the world. I have never seen this kind of path. The author really dares to think and write✨The rhythm is relaxed and relaxed, including the tense and suffocating fights and escapes, but also the touching warmth and helplessness. As a grown man, I actually cried several times while watching it😭 There is no time travel, no rebirth, no There are full-level bosses pretending to be newcomers, and Lin Mo relies on his own wisdom and perseverance to change his destiny step by step. This sense of reality is like a heavy punch in the heart🔥Strongly recommended to all friends who are in the book world, if you don't read it, you will regret it for the rest of your life😭Five-star praise, a must buy😎

Bonus points for rejecting clichéd time travel settings! The collision of business and martial arts brings new ideas, the little guy's counterattack touches people's hearts, and the follow-up direction is completely unpredictable. The more you watch, the more you get confused!

What a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family shed tears after reading it, and Tiancan Tudou sighed after reading it. This must be one of the four great classics, and it is definitely the number one divine book in the 21st century. Shengxu has almost no literary talent in front of it! Doubo has almost no connotation in front of it! Zhu Xian has almost no emotion in front of it! Zhetian has almost no imagination in front of it! Buddha is in front of it. Nearly laid out! A rare classic on the Internet! The greatest literary work of the 21st century! Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Cheng'en, Cao Xueqin, Kong Mo, Lao Zhuang, Li Bai, Du Fu, San Su Xin Qiji, Qin Han, Wu Tang Zong, Song Ancestor, Genghis Khan, Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernia, Aristotle. After reading them, everyone said that the author's books were really well written. The writing style is fluent and the rhetoric is appropriate. It is deeply rooted in the legacy of the Wei and Jin dynasties, and it also carries forward the style of the Tang and Song Dynasties to the core. I can read this book by the author in my lifetime. It is really my blessing in three lifetimes. After reading this book by the author, I actually felt an indescribable feeling of sadness. If I can never read such a good novel in the future, what should I do? What should I do? It wasn't until I put the author's book on the bookshelf without hesitation that the excitement in my heart gradually calmed down. But I immediately thought about such a good novel. If others can't read it, wouldn't it be a waste of the author's efforts? After a painful ideological struggle, I finally made up my mind to live in the small self and dedicate myself to the greater self. I want to take out this book review and dedicate it to the world. I want to push this novel up and up! Until everyone can see it! When I walk between the sky and the earth, the sun is scorching, and the moon is bright in the sky, you have to ask me, is this novel enough to read, but not enough? When I walk on the rivers and lakes, the river Hanhan, the river is rolling, you have to ask me, is this novel enjoyable enough? "Not enough!" When I walk on the top of the mountains, beautiful buildings, jade buildings, and immortals in the sea of clouds, you have to ask me, is this novel updated fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Not enough! Not enough chapters, not enough speed and content! Not enough!

I came here especially to visit Dada. It has been added to the bookshelf. After reading Dada's book, it received good reviews. It's really rare to have a book title based on my own ideas. On the road of writing stories, keep working hard, come on!

The cliché setting is worthy of praise, and the combination of business and martial arts is innovative. However, the escape pace in the early stage is slow, and the plot of being bullied is too many and easily depressing. It is recommended to streamline it appropriately and speed up the advancement of the main plot.

😁Suotian Xuantu is here for a return visit

From the current point of view, there are the following three points: 1. The protagonist has a humble status, has been humiliated, and has experienced the hardships of the world. 2. No time travel, no rebirth, no plug-ins, just grow step by step. 3. There are constant suspense and reversals, and the direction of the story is unpredictable.

The characters are vivid and the plot has ups and downs. Each character is imprinted in my heart and cannot be forgotten. The plot is completely unconventional. Although I only read less than 60 minutes, the experience it gave me in these 60 minutes was endless. It made me understand many truths that I could not understand before. It can be called a masterpiece. It has received five-star reviews. You must watch it. If you don't, you will regret it for the rest of your life. I also came here on the recommendation of a friend. Don't believe what they say. A good book doesn't need much introduction. Just these 60 minutes made me unable to let it go for a long time. Even before going to bed, they would show their splendor in my mind. Now it is an excellent book, really worth reading. This is the first book that made me have such feelings. I want to recommend my feelings to more people. Everyone must read it!

It's okay. There's nothing poisonous about it. It's pretty good. It's better than many signed books. It's just a little bland.

The characters are three-dimensional and vivid, the growth and transformation of the protagonist is moving, and the supporting characters are also flesh and blood, as if they are really living in another world, making people love and hate it. The structure of the story is like a precise clock gear, with thousands of foreshadowings and a gray line. Finally, all the clues converge into a shocking ending, which can be called a model of story planning! The chemical reaction between the characters is wonderful, the opponent scenes sparkle, it is as if you can hear the subtext behind the dialogue, and the character arc is a masterpiece! The plot of this novel has ups and downs, the suspense setting is exquisite, and every turn is unexpected but reasonable. It makes people feel endless aftertaste after reading it in one breath! The author is well aware of the complexity of human nature. There is no absolute good or evil in the characters in the novel. There is struggle and helplessness behind every choice. This sense of reality touches the heart. The rhythm is relaxed and moderate, with both breathtaking moments of tension and delicate and touching emotions. The reading experience is as smooth as a roller coaster "The protagonist of this novel can be called a soul figure, and its charm lies in the multi-faceted shaping - he has the edge of a sword unsheathed, but also has an unknown fragility. The complexity of good and evil is fascinating. The arc of the character runs throughout, from the initial fascination. From the confusion to the final awakening, every decision carries the weight of blood and tears, as if witnessing an ordinary soul being tempered into a hero in the fire. What is even more valuable is that the author gives him a real and tangible emotional context, the struggle of love and hate, the tug of redemption and degradation, which makes readers resonate strongly. He is not only the promoter of the story, but also a mirror that reflects human nature, allowing people to be intoxicated with his style and see his own shadow. "

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The book "Shang Chen's Sword Journey" is a fantasy novel written in the style of martial arts. Features: 1. The protagonist has a humble status, starting as the son of a servant. He is on the run and suffers all kinds of hardships. 2. There is no time travel, no rebirth, no reincarnation, but there are multiple planes. 3. There are suspense, reversals, and the direction is difficult to predict. 4. The combination of business and martial arts, the fusion of business and swordsmanship, is powerful. 5. The female protagonist in this book appears late, shining and dazzling, there is no one male and more than one female. This is the first volume of the Mortal Realm, followed by the second volume of the Cultivation Realm, and the third and fourth volumes of the Immortal Realm and Divine Realm. I hope book friends will criticize!

Your writing style defeats 70% of the authors, and your perseverance defeats 99% of the authors. Being able to persevere is a great thing. To be able to write a novel to this point with zero income is already beyond 99% of writers. Most people, if they can't sign the contract or don't get results, just cut it off. Either it is writing that stays on the lips, talking about how grand and wonderful it is, but becomes eunuch as soon as it is time to write. The author is very good at this point. With such tenacity and perseverance, it is difficult for the author to become popular. Success is only a matter of time. As long as you settle down and accumulate readers, the next book may be your masterpiece. Come on, author. When you succeed, I will dedicate all my money to you. I also hope that the author will be able to pull me ashore by then. Come on✊

"Chen Shang Sword Journey", a different mysterious novel. 1. The son of a humble servant, running away to survive, can command the heroes! 2. There is no time travel, no rebirth, no joining a sect or academy, no inheritance from a master, but you can aspire to the top of martial arts! 3. A man who runs around to fill his stomach, but combines business and martial arts to control the world's wealth! 4. Please follow Lin Mo's footsteps! A trail of constantly surpassing oneself, breaking through realms, and realizing the Tao through business! A long "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

I have been in a state of tension before, but now I finally have to relax. There will be one or two more relaxed chapters below. One by one, I hope you all like it! Thanks!

Your novel is one of the best I've seen in both unsigned and signed work. You've surpassed many platinum writers who can't write novels without cheats and plagiarism templates. I found new hope in your book, a savior in the novel world. It's definitely the biggest loss if they don't sign you. And thank you for always supporting my novels

In fact, the writing is okay, but there are many details that cannot stand up to scrutiny. The most outrageous one is one against five, 4 of the same level, and one level higher than the protagonist. The protagonist is still a servant who has just escaped from home for a few days. He only knows the three sword skills that he practiced by himself, and has not experienced a few life-or-death fights. He is a peerless genius among peerless geniuses.

The plot arrangement is quite satisfactory, but the characters are not. Even if they are indigenous, the indigenous characters shown at the beginning are not pleasing to the eye. It is recommended to study Fang Han in Eternal Life who also started as an indigenous servant. The first sentence you spoke was "... I, Mr. Fang Han, can't possibly be a slave for the rest of my life." As for your character, to put it bluntly, if there were no plot changes, you would probably be a servant for the rest of your life. Not many people like to watch a protagonist with a servant mentality. When writing about an indigenous protagonist in an online article, the character of the protagonist is the most important. To put it bluntly, the advantages must be obvious and sufficient. Otherwise, where is the reader's sense of involvement? If you could write about the protagonist analyzing calmly when he was locked up, and vaguely detecting some truth based on some clues, the appeal would be very different, and it would be reasonable enough (the protagonist is the personal servant of the powerful boss, and has a natural intelligence advantage). And after realizing the truth, you can also have the motivation to become stronger, and the plot also develops. The difference is that one has a weak mentality and the other has a strong mentality. I can understand those who don't want to write a system novel. The key is how to stand up the indigenous characters and how to integrate them into the plot to bring excitement. Here I recommend studying the two books of Shenji's Yang Shen and Yongsheng, both of which are indigenous protagonists.

820,000 Words, 10,000 recommendation votes, brother, you are really awesome 😡

You asked me to review your book, but to be honest, I didn't want to read it after reading Chapter 1. Come, let me tell you why. You used flashback at the beginning. I won't talk about the problems with what you wrote. First, let's take a look at the three effects that flashback can achieve at the beginning. Have you achieved them? 1. The most direct one is to create a sense of fate and make what is happening now heavy. The characters do not start from scratch, but appear with heavy psychological baggage. Example: "One Hundred Years of Solitude", many years later, facing the firing squad, Colonel Aureliano Buendia...; 2. Create suspense by using the first cause and the last cause. You just give a very impactful present first, and then use flashbacks to explain the past. In this way, the whole story is flashbacks, but the sense of suspense is very high. Example: "Great Expectations", my father's surname is Pilip, and my Christian name is Philip...; 3. Establish an emotional connection. Before giving a complex world view, let the readers deeply understand one of the little characters, so that they will empathize with his every move (of course, in online novels, this little character is usually mortal). Example: "Alive", when I was ten years younger than I am now, I got an idle career... Next, let's talk about your questions 1. There is only explanation, no story. We open books to read the story, not to read the instructions. Your story should have three elements: desire, obstacle, and action. The obstacles in your book are quite obvious, but you don't say what the desire is specifically, and you don't mention what the action is at all. 2. There is no time context. This large section of your explanation definitely did not happen at the same time, so you can completely use the protagonist's personal perspective as the description point and directly tell how old everything happened when he was, so that the logic is clear (in fact, it is better to use emotions to connect, rather than using time to connect). 3. A sense of disconnection. Although I haven't read the rest of the story yet, I'm sure that the protagonist's parents may appear in the rest of the story. So what's the purpose of such a long paragraph at the beginning? What is the use of our readers' understanding of the following chapters after reading this? Don't write flashbacks as side stories. 4. The rhythm is slow and does not get to the point. The title of your chapter 1 is Escape from the Lin Family. Look at how many words you have written before you start to behave this way. There should be emotion, suspense, and a clear main line. Don't describe everyone and everything in such detail. His parents could have been sketched out with just one or two strokes. The focus is on the protagonist. When describing the protagonist, mention their parents by the way, rather than introducing the protagonist through his parents. His parents are not very powerful people and will not play much role in the subsequent text. Next is the improvement method 1. Write about the present first at the beginning, and write about his escape from the Lin family, or something more distant, such as how he became a famous warrior. Writing one stroke first, even just one stroke, can arouse enough expectations. Example: Everyone in the world says that Lin Mo (a nickname is better) is the most nostalgic. If you want to say how nostalgic you are, everyone will tell you with a wink that his knife is called Yunlan City. But if you ask why, no one can tell. Only Lin Mo knows that all this can be traced back to the time when he was fifteen years old and still worked as a servant in the Lin family. 2. Incorporate some unimportant characters into the description of the protagonist, for example: As long as Lin Mo can remember, his father and mother have been like the two most inconspicuous shadows in the backyard of Lin Mansion. They work seriously, but they are unknown. If nothing happens, the master will never remember these two people. Even if he remembered, he would probably call that person. (You can insert your conversation with the housekeeper here) When Lin Mo was thirteen years old and became the young master's follower, the young master had specific names for Lin Mo's parents—called Lin Mo his father and Lin Mo his mother. PS: If you really want to write about the love of the protagonist's parents for the protagonist, then continue: The impression of Lin Mo's parents in the Lin family mansion is limited to this, they are just two servants. These two servants spent their entire lives caring for Lin Mo. Mrs. Liu always wakes up very early, and her chapped hands, which have been washed all year round, are always dancing silently in front of the stove. When Lin Mo was eating, he could always see his mother's red and swollen eyes. He couldn't tell whether it was swollen from weaving last night, smoked from burning firewood this morning, or both. Lin Mo was picking up the rice and always found some "unexpected surprises" at the bottom of the bowl. Or a hard-boiled egg, or a few pieces of stewed crispy fat. Whenever Lin Mo wanted to share these "harvests" with his parents, his mother would always scold her with a straight face, "What are you talking about?! If you don't eat these, you will be weak at the feet while doing business in front of the young master. Aren't you bringing shame to our family? If you can't do anything good, how can your parents hold their heads up?" Lin Mo could only eat in silence. Lin Zhong talks less... This is much better than filling in the settings and background. Okay, the above are all suggestions. It's up to you whether you listen to them or not. Don't be unstable because of my suggestions. That's it.

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Well, it was advertised, so I clicked in to take a look. I don't know why the author wrote the novel. Did he just want to write or make money. Let's not mention the characters, stories, conflicts, etc. Of the novel. When I first saw the introduction of this book, did I feel that the outline was sent directly as an introduction? Forget about the age and identity of the protagonist. Things that haven't been written in the story are already spoiled in the introduction. This is very problematic. The introduction should be able to arouse people's interest in reading, but if you just mess with the outline like this, then no matter how much you focus on the content and how exciting the details are, I already know what he will do. As it develops, people's interest in reading will be much reduced. The introduction should highlight certain points of the novel, or the worldview background, or the protagonist himself, or conflicts, or the author's thoughts, but it should not be about the development of the story. For example, you said in your review, is it really impossible for a novel without a time traveler to work? It can be used as an introduction. An introduction is not an outline.

The grievances and grievances between Jianghu and Jianghu are written with great depth, and the emotions of the characters are portrayed very realistically.

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Brother, after reading your book, you have written this word count, which is already great. I am also writing a book, and I know that this process is not easy. Words are the skin of this book, and your persistence is the soul and skeleton of this book. I saw the love for books, the yearning for words and hard work. I am the 21st one to read the new chapter. Unlike other signed books, you have your own style. Not for profit, just for love, I like your perseverance. I can't calm down for a long time. Your persistence is more touching than your articles and stories. Come on👍🏻

It does not cater to the market, which makes me moved, but the author suggests that you should practice a good beginning for your next book, and then write your own stuff after signing the contract. With your persistence, I believe it will definitely succeed!

Sir, can you teach me how to get readers? Can you help me promote "Naruto: Shikamaru's Counterattack and Become a God"? Although there is no plug-in system, I still hope that someone will appreciate the growth process of ordinary people trying to become stronger.

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1. The protagonist has a humble status, starting as the son of a servant. He is falsely accused and bullied. After going through hardships, he finally reaches the top of the world. 2. There is no time travel, no rebirth, no participation in sects or academies, no apprenticeship to learn skills, but with great luck, working hard in the business field, combining business and martial arts, fighting for power in business, and proving the Tao through business in the long business journey. 3. The protagonist relies on the golden finger - a fragment of "Body Tempering Technique" and basic swordsmanship to pass through the levels and continue to rise.