Douluo Continent

The idea is very good, but the writing style is generally confusing. The most important thing is that the TM protagonist has an invincible psychological activity, and then, an individual can suspend the protagonist's actions. We just want to have some opinions. Where is your spiral power? Use it. In short, in addition to creativity, appraisal is defense.

I understand why you want to use a small account to publish your book. If you publish this kind of divine novel in a large account, you will be in trouble.

Then wouldn't my Taobo be invincible?

At the end of the Qing Dynasty, Santang, an outside disciple of the Hong Sect, was not tolerated by the Hong Sect because he secretly learned the inner martial arts. When he jumped off a cliff to express his ambition, he found that he did not die. Instead, he came to another world with another identity, a world belonging to the Loli soul, called Douluo Continent. There is no magic, no fighting spirit, no martial arts here, but there is the magical soul of Lolita. Everyone here, when they are six years old, will awaken the loli soul in the loli palace. Loli souls have combat systems, healing systems, and weapon training systems. Loli souls can assist people in their daily lives. And some of the particularly outstanding Loli souls can be used to practice and fight. This profession is the most powerful and glorious profession on Douluo Continent - kindergarten teacher! When Hongmen's internal martial arts comes to Douluo Continent, and when the Santang martial soul awakens, can he recreate the glory of Hongmen in this world of martial arts? Can he become the master of this world: God?

666, Far away from people, far away from God, but very close to ghosts

Can I play the game

Why did you suddenly think of Tao Bo?

Then I had to start a book immediately and write a book called "Dancing Universe"

In order to commemorate the protagonist, the Fiji Cup competition is held every year

Author, you must remember that if the protagonist is a god, then he must never look back; if he is a normal person, then he must write well, and don't be stubborn. Today's readers hate mothers-in-law the most.

It's a waste stream, right? One loss and one draw in the debut. The draw was because of the arrival of teammates 🙂

When did the protagonist bully the children with a 53kg spinning top?

It looks a bit like hiding the invincible style in the front, and a bit like hiding the invincible style in the back, and then it looks like a brainless virgin as it is written. I can't see through it, I really can't see through it.

This is not what we, Emperor Ye Tian, ​​are here to do. The elf power takes off.

After reading it, although the top is more magical, it can be written like Yu-Gi-Oh. The problem now is that the protagonist gives the impression that he is invincible at the beginning. He can reach high school with a random toy, and then uses his own spinning top without a name. This is a point of expectation. But the plot becomes more vicious later on. First, it says that the protagonist is afraid of trouble and then lets the top fight by himself. He loses. Then he joins the club and faces the villain. After half the fight, there is no winner or loser. It is said that the top is the other half of the protagonist, but no one can win. This is too much. After a long time, the high school students turned out to be the top players in the country. What about the college students? What about other countries? The protagonist Dark plays the game like this. It feels like he has just graduated from junior high school and entered high school. The characters were too fragmented. I was afraid of trouble but still participated in it. I said I was strong, but in the end the stronger one didn't win. The latest girl's writing is also very abrupt. It was originally well written and I thought the novel was quite interesting, but it was so bad when it came out later.

I thought it was a snail with a big screw, but it turned out to be a top

Is there such a top?

This ink stain, it's been more than ten chapters and the protagonist's spinning top doesn't even know what it is. What's the point of doing this?

Awesome, this idea is invincible, reminds me of Huolishaonianwang

What does it mean to be unkillable by polished films?

Why did you cut such an interesting subject?