Douluo: Wuhun Blue Silver Grass, I Am an Alchemist

I've read it, but I don't like it. It's very strange. It's like a human succubus. It gives people the feeling that the women in it are in need of love and the male protagonist.

My humble opinion and rant. Well, Douluo fans personally feel that the protagonist in the early stage has no strength and no background. Then don't provoke Yu Xiaogang and Tang San, they are a big trouble. The protagonist currently has no background and no strength. What is needed is to absorb knowledge smoothly. In this academy, there is no need to quarrel with Tang San and Yu Xiaogang, especially if they are pretending to slap each other in the face. It is no good to be hostile to them and hate Chunchun from the beginning. It is asking for trouble, knowing that Tang San will kill him at every turn. The protagonist currently has no strength. No background. Once a concealed weapon is fired, it will be cool. Moreover, Tang San was followed by a titled Douluo's father. Not to mention Yu Xiaogang, So I can't figure it out. Many fan fictions started in Notting College where Tang San and Yu Xiaogang became enemies. You want to antagonize Gang and abuse San, but you should weigh it first. You are just leaving your life to your opponent. Look at other people's morals. Would he attack a child like you? But that thing is Tang San. The guard made a few mocking remarks and just wanted to scare the person away. Especially many fans. The protagonist is a child in a small village who awakens his martial spirit. No strength, no background. Although Yu Xiaogang's theory of martial arts is summarized, some of it is ridiculous. But he was born into the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Rex family. I have a soul saint friend. The leader of Wuhun Palace is still his ex-girlfriend. Why are you quarreling with him? Why are you mocking him? To embarrass him and make Tang San murderous towards the protagonist? No matter what you think, you shouldn't do this.

At level six, it is no longer Blue Silver Grass, but Blue Silver King. Or the mutated Blue Silver King,

Adding original characters to fan fiction is either very powerful or you just don't have the right control when writing fan fiction. You take it for granted Adding original characters is actually not lovable. Readers have come to read fan fiction. Do you want to read the original characters? Who will analyze the other characters you created? It's a bit superfluous.

You are really powerful at level 6 of Lan Yin Cao. A standard useless martial soul from Lan Yin Cao can already have level 6 soul power, which is enough to beat a lot of mid-level martial souls.

To be honest, I don't want to watch Blue Silver Grass now. If there are no plug-ins, it's not a useless martial spirit. Then why not write a powerful martial spirit from the beginning?

You are absolutely crazy. Author, you are really awesome. You have violated several taboos in writing Douluo fan fiction.

You guys with relatively high poison resistance can continue reading, but I, with relatively low poison resistance, couldn't hold on after Chapter 8. I wish you good luck.

No, are there no beauties left in Love Continent? Still need an original heroine? In my opinion, the original heroine is created because the timeline the protagonist travels through is not at the point where the plot takes place. I don't understand why there is an original heroine?

When Douluo woke up from the Blue Silver Grass, he still turned against Tang San? No, man, what do you think? Don't you know that Tang San's martial spirit is the Blue Silver Emperor? Even if someone's bloodline is not fully awakened, your ordinary Blue Silver Grass martial spirit can't touch porcelain. If the protagonist's martial spirit encounters Tang San's Blue Silver Emperor, I'm afraid it won't only be suppressed. The protagonist's situation is like playing with Huo Yuhao's mental power and ice in Douluo II, and playing with Tang Wulin's bloodline in Douluo III. It's no different than seeking death. When you write like this, I doubt whether you have ever watched Douluo, otherwise it wouldn't be so outrageous that the Blue Silver Grass martial spirit still turned against Tang San.

I saw Tang San's competition. You are an ordinary Blue Silver Grass with lower soul power than him and no soul skills. It turns out that the power is even more powerful than his, so you might as well just design it as the Blue Silver Emperor. It is generally accepted that a useless martial soul is useless and can't do anything. It bends when the wind blows and breaks when strong. The so-called strong vitality is just a taller one among short ones (the only advantage is this.)

I can't stand being called a liar all the time. Shui Bing'er's episode is also amazing. Whoever wants to watch it can watch it.

The interaction between men and women is too toxic to watch. The protagonist is written like an immature child. You can write a female protagonist if you want, but in a world where individuals are powerful, these are just side dishes. The Sigma male character is still very rare to be suitable for the protagonist of a fantasy novel.

I remember reading a novel, Mu Lian: The trunk is grafted and mixed with elixir, the roots absorb the essence, and then the result becomes a pill. (Refer to the ten tails below, which absorb energy and bear chakra fruits) Later, refining high-level elixirs requires the energy of heaven and earth... The current protagonist's Wuhunmu attribute...

I didn't say anything when you were so crazy in front of Tang Hao. I just tolerated the third-rate pretense and slapped you in the face. I couldn't bear to see Emperor Ruishuo and Ditian come out and Bibi Dong's spider monitor.

Looking at more than 20 chapters, it's quite smooth. The part about taking Shui Bing'er is inserted so abruptly, and there is also a stuck point to save someone. The emotional scenes later are too blunt, it's better to just be Li Caiyi.

After reading more than 20 chapters, the moment I saw Di Tian and Rui Beast coming out, I just fucking collapsed. What the hell, it's a mess.

The plot is too forced, the emotional line is flimsy, and the creativity is okay Evaluation, 6 points out of 10

Teddy, stallion, stop looking.

It's okay before you see the charge. It's best not to spend money on the rest. Shennong has already tasted it.

As long as the author writes about female characters, the protagonist will become sentimental, inexplicable, and nosy. However, this book still has multiple female protagonists🙂🙂🙂🙂

There is a reason why there is no monthly pass. If a one-ring soul master fights a group of ten-thousand-year-old soul beasts, why don't you kill the gods?

You are really awesome. A few two-ring kids can fight against a group of thousand-year-old soul beasts, and you can kill the soul beasts. You are really awesome👍👍

After reading it for so long, I still don't know what the main character's first soul skill is 🙂. The author wrote it very well. Farewell.

After reading Chapter 19, I poisoned your father to death This is getting more and more outrageous. Can you believe that after being stuck at level 20 and not getting the soul ring for several years, you have reached level 30? Having not even obtained the second soul ring, the soul power stored in cultivation has reached level 30? According to your logic, if I don't get the next soul ring at each stage, can I break through to the Ultimate Douluo when I am a Titled Douluo?

In society, my sister Dong, is criticized and criticized 😎😎

Tang Hao is so powerful, why would the Haotian Sect still seal the mountain?

The original heroine, at the beginning, forced her presence in front of Yu Xiaogang and Tang San to build hatred. Her two major poisonous points were like dancing on the tip of a knife.

I always feel that the protagonist does not need to be an enemy of Tang San. After all, they are from the same village. He could have said something before Tang San became a disciple of Yu Xiaogang: You actually know that he is a twin martial spirit, so do you know what his second martial spirit is? Of course you don't know, because you are guessing. Tang San's second martial spirit is the Clear Sky Hammer. Since he has innate soul power, his second martial spirit must be very strong. And his surname is Tang. Based on this surname, we can guess that he is from the Clear Sky Sect. He is actually from the Clear Sky Sect, so his second martial soul is the Clear Sky Hammer. After bringing Tang San back in this way, we can grow bigger and stronger together. The protagonist takes the path of life and Tang San takes the path of poison. Then wouldn't they be invincible together