Brothers, Let's Go, Let's Make a Movie!

The first three chapters are bright, but also toxic. There is no need for the scene about the reborn policeman. Let's stand up the protagonist first and highlight it. In fact, the writing is very good. The protagonist has already stood up, but suddenly the reborn policeman comes and everything starts to get messy. It is not your writing that is messy, but the reader's focus is messed up. This mess will affect the feeling and the desire to continue reading will be gone. I hope you will consider it carefully.

Just by looking at the label, I know you are from a female channel, right?

How should I put it? It's beautiful, but it's too much like a stage play made up of various misunderstandings and coincidences. If there is a plot in it, it will collapse. To put it bluntly, it's all up to the author's invisible hands to pull it out. I'm surprised. Didn't the author feel that the plot is empty when he wrote the novel? It's flashy and has no sense of reality. It doesn't look like a real world but feels like writing a game guide. The protagonist's state is too relaxed. Even if the protagonist is in trouble and danger, there is no sense of urgency. Perhaps because of the author's writing style, the sense of urgency on the protagonist is too fake. The protagonist seems to be outside the entire world, exploring the game world from a player's perspective. The unreality brought by this sense of detachment makes it difficult to bring people into this world and into the protagonist. However, the quality of the novel itself is not bad and it is very lively. If you can accept the sense of detachment, this novel is indeed suitable for you.

The monthly living expenses of the rich second generation is 2,000?

It is indeed a bit messy. The protagonist has already received investment, and then just describe what is wrong with the sss man from the actress's point of view. It is a bit too anxious to set up the actress, there is no need to be so anxious. The role of the actress caused the plot to stop flowing between Goldfinger and the protagonist's ruthless man. The protagonist's ruthless man was not seen, the protagonist's own movie was not seen, and the plot was scattered. sss When the ruthless character appears, he directly uses the actress's perspective to describe the ruthless brother, and then uses the supporting characters to describe the ruthless brother's changes, followed by the relationship between the protagonist and his sister, the sister's crisis, etc., And he is too anxious to advance the plot of the female supporting role.

Between blurring reality and making a movie, can you make it clearer and write about it from beginning to end? It's so out of touch, I'm not interested anymore.

The front is the criminal system... I have just finished recruiting the actors and have not started directing yet... The protagonist went to other crews to act in several chapters... There is also a live broadcast session... The focus of the story is a bit confusing 😥

After reading more than 70 chapters, I want to see the next movie. As a result, I didn't even start filming a variety show, and why did I come to do a ring movie by myself for no reason? Don't know what I'm doing

Can the author explain his creative ideas? The writing seems okay, but the story line is a bit confusing. How many time-travelers are there, bro? There is one protagonist, one Qin Zhen, one policeman named Wu, and one member of his team. What else?

By the way, the logic of the first chapter is so confusing and confusing. Is anyone reading it?

The writing is very good. I have been keeping it for a while. I am very happy to read it these days and like it very much! Most of the books I like are awarded platinum gold medals by their authors. Based on my many years of experience in reading books, I think you have a platinum status!

Self-titled article, the logic is messy, several movies are interspersed, either the AI ​​failed to cultivate Gu, or I feel that I am the product of a genius novelist.

Buy someone to kill someone! Because the employer's unreasonable request is to see the client's tragic death The murderer, tortured by the economic crisis, has no choice but to hire a young man with a director's dream to film people! What impressed me the most was the actor of this murderer. He seemed to be trying to take over Star Master's class and filmed a special function series, but it was a pity that it didn't become a hit.

It gets better and better as you go to the back. The problem with the progress in the front may give people the illusion of a cliche movie, but the feeling in the back is very different. So I'm looking forward to it very much, hahaha 😁

Very well written, keep it up, it's beautiful

When will it be put on the shelves? Will it be updated soon? Urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent!

🙂🙂 Take a vacation as soon as possible so that you can study hard

Have you ever been shot in the brain? Just write!