Reading with Your Sister? Then Why Are You Invincible!

There has been no update for a week, byd eunuch?

Author, don't be too tired. My suggestion is: update when you are eating, update when you are sleeping, update when you are reading comments, update when you are watching videos, update when you buy a mobile phone, update when you are reading, update when you are playing with friends, update when you are bored, update when you are happy, update when you are sad, update when you are nervous, and update when you are angry.

The writing style is light and bright, light comedy youth type, mixed with daily life, seemingly dangerous but funny crises, the background of the protagonist that leads to fantasy, the real crisis after the funny villain, ups and downs and finally landing without any surprises Generally speaking, it looks like the comics that were popular around 16 years ago on Tencent Comics The paintings [Ace Censor, Monster Cultivation Manual, My Girlfriend is a Wicked Girl (a comic with the same name, not the one from Undersea Walker), and My Sword Fairy Girlfriend (the protagonist's nickname is Da Yinxiong, I can't quite remember the name of the comic)], students who are familiar with these works should be able to get it quickly. It should be said that they are early youth harem comics. I am a master of the novel collection, but while taking the essence, I also learned some relatively weak-minded slap-in-the-face plots (fighting with Han, being made difficult by the teacher, etc.). I really can't give it a good review, but the flaws are not concealed Overall review: Good Grass +++ ~ Half-step Immortal Grass, if the level is maintained in the future, it will be a proper fairy in the middle and late stages. Damn, I hope the author has an outline and it won't explode ps: There are a lot of typos and sentence errors, maybe one per chapter on average. It's relatively common so it doesn't affect reading, but I didn't mark it out for you, the author, lol, I hid the typos in your book, go find them if you want 😁

Seeing now, I think I can give up. I have not ordered all of them, but so far, I have only two chapters that I have not purchased. The reason why I abandoned it is very simple. First of all, it is a bunch of psychological descriptions, which are just the author's self-pleasure. You say that the other person is awesome. The problem is that this is what you think. Since it was put on the shelf, I feel like I am wasting time every time I read it. I skipped a lot of psychological descriptions directly, because even if it is a psychological description, you just describe it directly without any side description. For example, if I am angry, then the author is, I am angry, I am very angry, I am really angry. ..., Is it necessary? Then there is the plot, good guy, saying that a harem is not a harem, saying that a single female protagonist is not a single female lead, ambiguous, pretentious, and getting more and more uncomfortable.

The writing is pretty good. I'll vote for you. Maybe it's just a bit less popular. Don't cut it.

The plot is very smooth, the writing is witty, and the plot is also very interesting. It is not like some books I have read before that have too much water, but as of the current 88 chapters, the follow-up context is not yet known. Come on, author, look forward to the follow-up plot. By the way, I will give you a monthly pass (ps. My sister is so cute (There is not much left in the monthly pass. I need to reward 200 points to get enough fan value www)

Harem + Daily Life + Young Girl The villain is also relatively young. Sometimes, I will repeatedly describe some very simple, childish villain's psychological activities, a long paragraph! Several chapters in a row. I don't know if the author is being crazy or because there are usually typos in these paragraphs. There is also a "🐢", which is completely incomprehensible (it is not like a man can think of it), and this creature is often interspersed in large sections. The overall style is basically similar to urban and campus daily style. The fantasy combat power system feels like it has collapsed, so you don't need to worry about it. If you like daily life, harem, and don't mind a lot of water (skip the above part), it's still good.

Seeing this, if nothing else, at least there is a beginning of a sub-plot? It's almost 70 chapters. I'll read some new books and enter the main line of regular operations at chapter 80.

Faster, faster and more 😍

I added it to the bookshelf a long time ago and saved it for more than two months. I saw the testimonials today when it was put on the shelf. I was very touched. Mainly because I had made a lot of suggestions before when I read a book by a new author. Later, this guy decided to cut it. Then, he pretended to be stupid and ran away. He told me that he hadn't closed the book yet and was still revising it (actually, quietly) I'm immersed in the sea of books) To get back to the topic, the writing and other aspects of this article are quite normal, but it always seems like I can't tell who is who. Maybe it's because I've been in a bad mood the past two days and read the book too fast. Let's talk about the Dragon Da Long Er in it. I still can't tell what kind of forehead and shape it is. Like, I feel that some of the foreshadowing and foreshadowing may be still being recycled. I haven't seen it yet. If I see it, I will come back and comment. Overall, the characters are online and the plot is a little delayed. However, can ordinary writing be called water? No, that is called strong writing 🙂 To be honest, Lan's portrayal is a bit unflattering and too dull. It can be seen that the author wants to portray a wealthy daughter who is ignorant of the world. However, if the protagonist is always being so emmmy, it will lose its own vitality, and it is still the main task of the article. The more you read, the interest will drop. Qingqiu is cute, but I personally feel that she is a bit like a yandere sister, but it is not a poisonous point, but a bit of a contrast That's it for the characters. There are many other characters, but they have their own characteristics. There is nothing particularly OOC that does not match the character. The plot and world view are explained like There is a bit of lack of preparation, such as the classification of realms (if it is inconvenient in the text, you can add a pin to the chapter description), the big map setting in the book... I speak directly, so don't worry about the author. Finally, I will add a full order to support it. I will read the book slowly, and hope that the more I write, the better it will be 😃

Ask Shen Nong! Is it still worth pursuing after 172?