Doomsday Players Invade the Earth

Although the performance of this book is not very good now, its setting is very novel, the emotional line of the female character is a bit unclear, and the plot is generally not cumbersome. I hope the author can improve some subsequent plots in the future, but it is still not exciting enough. It may also be that few people read this kind of subject. I hope the author will have a new climax in the follow-up, let us take a good look 🙂

I haven't read it yet. I only came across this book in the daily guide. I don't know if it's worth reading. The introduction is too abstract and completely dissuades me.

I feel that the biggest attraction of this book is the end of the world, virtual games, players, etc. The title of this book has no relevance except for being a bit curious.

Sorry author, I took a look at the two books you followed, and the settings are flawed 1. The player's wealth and ability do not match. Is the price of resurrection coins high or low? If it is high, it is completely unrealistic. It becomes a game that only those with huge social resources are qualified to play. The player quality does not match; if it is low, it will not be like selling coordinates to buy something like you said in your last book. Your Star Essence or other things are generally equivalent to the people in your setting. They cannot be too scarce and can be exchanged for materials. How huge are the resources contained in a planet or even several galaxies? Even for a planet as big as Vesta, it is more than enough to hire a professional team of 100 people to allocate resources and increase asset value for the resources needed to manage them. The price contradiction is very dramatic and abstract 2. The players are aliens, but the people in your article are all people wearing alien skins. I noticed that you put some emphasis on the forum but not completely. There is no small story about the cause and outcome, and there is no sense of oppression from higher civilization, but there are no ups and downs, just It's a simple and straightforward narrative, and it's even the same old-fashioned intrigues and gag-style communication between people 15 years ago. It feels useless. You can try to express yourself first or express your B character. 3 is a bit cool. It only has changes in the protagonist's numerical values and a decisive way of doing things. It's purely cool but not cool enough.

The end of the world is mixed with the colors of the heavens and online games. The plot and setting are quite good. The description is accurate and the writing is crisp. There are occasional gags. The development of the plot and the sense of enjoyment are top-notch. There are no bad points in the character creation. It is not a pure white novel, but it is quite enjoyable to read. It is a pity that the original version is a bit too high. I hope the author can perform stably.

Is the title of the book really bad? The title of the last book was changed, but the absorption was even worse. Dear readers who have read this book, I would like to ask for your opinions. Currently tentatively decided: "Players Invasion of the Earth", "Doomsday Players Invasion of the Earth", "Stealer Sequence: The Doomsday God Stealer", "Doomsday: The Beginning of Backstabbing the Female CEO". If you have better opinions, please leave a message. Of course, if the reader's book title is used and the readership is still poor, then it must be the author's fault!

It's just that it was discovered too early, hold on tight and don't collapse!

Awesome, really good, but it's a pity that I found out too early and too short. I'm still wondering who to give the monthly tickets to, so I'll give you 5 first.

Having read the previous book "School Girl with a Dead Body", this one is not so amazing. It is just a repetition of similar themes. And after reading a few chapters, I still feel the same power management. In fact, just defeat monsters honestly and upgrade yourself, and use the power of players to improve yourself. It's not that you can't write about power management, but you should write less, otherwise it will fall apart in the middle like the previous book. To be honest, this book and Super Mechanic are essentially the same subject. The author can actually refer to it for reference, such as rebirth, NPCs, using the power of players, using tasks and factions to divide and harvest players.

Write more. I like this type of reading.

As mentioned, if you want to improve the quality of the novel, you can send me all the manuscripts for review.

There are too many settings, and I feel sleepy after listening to books for a while.

It feels good, why is there no one there?

On the second day of the game, there are so many people queuing up. There are enough zombies for the players to kill. They are not here to screw screws on the earth, right?

Strong rhythm, too few subscriptions? ?

Not bad, not bad. I read the first ten chapters and it was very interesting. It is rare to find a good novel. The introduction is still somewhat useful.

I suggest that your woman, especially the first woman you fall in love with, write some emotional and tender scenes appropriately, and don't throw it away like the Fiji Cup.

Is there something wrong with Ma Qingyu? What Lao Ma has been saying is that he has a grandson. If it is a woman, it should be a granddaughter. Is this a foreshadowing?

Finished it. It's really beautiful. The last time I read such a fun Doomsday novel was Doomsday Cockroach. Don't be held back by women, men should crush Doomsday. Come on author

The author's writing style and plot design are quite good. It's just that the setting is a little flawed, but the flaws don't outweigh the flaws. This is a good book. I quite like the protagonist's character. Good luck to the author.

The writing is really good, I stayed up late to read it 😁

I wonder if it will be on his recommended drug testing list in the next issue. Some people may think that the protagonist's appeasement policy is a poisonous point. Or to pursue a sense of pleasure, you should counterattack the aliens and kill them on the first day. I personally think that different novels have different backgrounds and main lines, and the background of this one is also very interesting. And at least the first 280,000 words are well written. If I write, I may write like this. Um.

I think the writing is really good I hope I don't want to be a eunuch

Come on, the writing is very good, but the quantity is too small. Order as needed.

First order 132

I🌿, isn't it? Is this a eunuch? ?

I read the previous book before, and I thought about it and flipped through it, but the new book is still offensive. To be honest, I have a good idea. The previous book