I Am a Traveling Doctor, and I Also Know a Little Bit About Funeral Arrangements.

I wrote about the heroine 😰😰 at the beginning. I am so bold. Many authors nowadays cannot handle the heroine well. My personal suggestion is that Nanke's appearance should be changed so that it can resemble Myolie but not the same (the eyes are different from the current description). If you write this way, Nanke will always belong to Myolie's shadow ( When the protagonist sees Nanke, he will also think of Myolie being fucked by her father), plus Myolie has a relationship with the male long-term worker, which greatly affects Nanke's image (I personally suggest changing it, maybe describing it as something like a 7-pointer, otherwise it feels a bit ntr?), And I think the author describes Nanke as having existed for 3000 years or 5000 years? This is too long, the grandmother of A Chinese Ghost Story is only a thousand-year-old tree demon 🙂

It does have flavor, and it's eloquently told. It's a pity that this kind of book is too short of words. I hope I can stick to it.

Unfortunately, the writing is still too bland. I hope there will be another book.