Making America: My Campaign Manager Was Roosevelt

Since the appearance of the old lady, the plot has obviously gone downhill, and many scenes have been criticized by people for being similar to the previous local old lady. Extremely obvious homogeneity. They also want to canvass votes from the bottom. The method is to create jobs. If you want to create jobs, you have to cooperate with the chaebols. Then when it seems to be prosperous, the chaebols will inevitably stab them in the back. Then the protagonist will break up with them and fall into a desperate situation. Finally, he will succeed in canvassing votes and temporarily hang himself. Then the above plot will be repeated again.

I felt very passionate after reading this book. It made me realize what it would take to become a mayor from an ordinary person in the United States, and what difficulties I would face. After going through all kinds of hardships, he finally overcame the difficulties and was successfully elected as the mayor. However, it was not all smooth sailing after being elected, and he still faced a steady stream of new troubles. This does not give me a positive feeling, but a very negative emotion that can never be solved. I am constantly faced with difficulties that I cannot solve. It is very painful to read and gives me the feeling that I will get bored if I continue to read it. I don't know how long it will take to overcome difficulties in this way before I can control my own destiny without looking at other people's faces. Although it is very true to write like this, I want to say that whoever reads the novel wants to see the plot of always facing difficulties and seeing no hope, and they all come to enjoy the pleasure of reading novels. Isn't this feeling experienced enough in reality? It feels bad to have to experience it again in a novel😰

The biggest shortcoming of this article is that the contradictions are too close one after another. It does not give the protagonist or the reader a little breathing space. It is very tiring to read

This is my first review. I have been reading this book since it was first released on the shelves. I was filled with joy when I discovered that there were new chapters from the beginning. The subject matter seemed relatively new to me, but the writing and plot were also excellent. Although I wasn't as excited as I was at the beginning, I could follow it and still have expectations for the following plots. Finally, I found that the plot was repetitive and monotonous, and it seemed to me that it was more alchemical, but I still wanted to see what kind of ending Leo could bring, so I started to skip some boring chapters and stopped reading them. I just looked at them when I remembered them. Today is probably the last time I read it. Maybe it's because the author was too boring, or maybe I'm tired of reading it.

This book has always had no timeline, only plot lines, which often made me feel that the plot progressed too abruptly. Just like a short video, one second Leo was dealing with a crisis, the next second he had distributed the profit cake, and then a new crisis was coming. We don't know when the crisis occurred, how long it lasted, or how many days it took to deal with it. We only know that a crisis occurs, the crisis is dealt with, and the crisis comes again. The text is either a description of the place (Pittsburgh, the mayor's office), the environment (cold wind, rust, chimneys), or the specific time of day (early morning, 8 a. M.). So I am speechless. The author can design the plot, but can't he connect the time of different plots? This is impossible, so I can only think that this is intentional by the author. But sometimes I still wonder, am I reading the script of a sitcom or a novel? The reason why I think so is because as a long novel, without a timeline, it lacks immersion. There is really no way for me to put in the perspective of anyone in the article. I can only rely on imagination to make up the situation. As a unit sitcom, that is normal. I am just an audience member who is infected by the situation created in the article. I am not a reader. I need to enter the ideological space of any character to substitute and simulate. In short, when reading other novels, I might be the protagonist in the book, thinking about the situation they are in. In this "novel", I am just an audience watching the textual situation, and I can keep my thoughts flowing freely. This is also where I have been speechless, and I finally summed it up today. I can't say whether it's good or bad, I can only say that this way of writing is very special, or very alternative. I'll leave the rest to everyone to comment.

Don't sleep tonight, author, I still owe six chapters.

If you have money, you can help a business. If you don't have money, you can help a person. Write a nonsense sentence, hoping to increase a little popularity.

There is a problem. The description without the protagonist's family is too empty.

It's well written, with no redundant words. It's all about conflict, and you can see Leo's growth. He doesn't need to be supported by a puppet, he is a fighting man. Everyone is very realistic, even if they are cowards, they will get angry sometimes.

This is a very good book. I have not experienced the era when Internet literature flourished, so I don't know what official literature is like, but this book is very consistent with my imagination of official literature. The intrigues between politicians and the intricate connections of the bureaucracy are very attractive. I rarely speak in the comment area, but I think this book really deserves my one or two hundred words of comment. The protagonist seems to be very immature at the moment, relying entirely on Roosevelt's guidance. When something happens, he immediately thinks of asking Roosevelt. This is normal, because before meeting Roosevelt, he was just a history student with a student loan of hundreds of thousands of dollars. It is very normal for him to be immature and naive in this regard. I think the author will describe some of the protagonist's growth in the future. Similarly, this book can also be regarded as an enlightenment of some social experiences. Just like me, I am already twenty-two years old, but my family still says that I can't speak in public. Of course, I understand all these aspects, but I can't control my mouth and say whatever comes to mind. {"TopicId":"804728532092780544","TopicName":"Book Famine Terminator"}

It's really well written, I have to say it's great

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Just having Roosevelt in your mind is of no use. Roosevelt became president because of family strength and his uncle who had been president. He was able to do Roosevelt's New Deal because his uncle had previously won over millions of veterans. He has an army under his command. If you don't obey, you will be the army. The protagonist has nothing, and there is no conceptual golden finger. At most, you can trade stocks like President Trump. It is basically impossible to achieve anything practical.

Character designs are updated from time to time! The original two-dollar coin OOC belongs to me. Thanks to Coin for not describing Leo's appearance in detail in the article, which allowed me the freedom to imagine my inner Mayor of Pittsburgh. I came here through xhs's tweet about Amway. After reading the excerpts from Amway's post, I felt that the writing style was precise and elegant without being pretentious. The subject matter happened to be what I was interested in, so I quickly downloaded Qidian. It took me two days to follow all the chapters. I was so excited to read it. Why is it so beautiful? Currently I have only scraped some of Leo's characters and thoughts, but in fact I have almost figured out the general image of the protagonist group. I should draw them one after another in the future. Friends who are interested can take a look. I don't know if the coin is open to cross-platform fan creation or cross-platform promotion/amway. I really want to recommend such a beautiful book to others Updated on January 14th: I shoveled the character design of Sara, please see the comment area for details Updated on January 7th : Frank's character design has been shoveled, please see the comment area for details 12.31 Update: Karen Miller's character design has been updated, please see the comments for details January 1st update: Ethan Hawke's character design has been shoveled, please see the comment area for details.

I have a friend who said that he had seen a post on the Internet. An American said that Roosevelt was the sinner of the United States and the biggest devil in the United States. Without his useless or even failed political measures, American capitalists would definitely lead the United States to glory in the world, instead of waiting until the end of World War II. When I heard this sentence, I was stunned. I saw that Roosevelt and the United States were also a pair of fateful mandarin ducks.

The Western University in the novel is so beautiful. Looking back at Western University now, ordinary people are simply living in a hive. You have to work three jobs to feed your family, you sell blood to pay the electricity bill, the subway eats up the living, there are homeless people on the roadside with fortifiers and women standing on the street, children have to work to have enough to eat, veterans have to sell their beloved guns to save their eldest son who has recovered from the coronavirus, gangs and churches have to suck another mouthful of blood from these people, this place is already rotten

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Shen Nong judged it to be a half-step fairy grass. The writing was very interesting, and Roosevelt also wrote very three-dimensionally I remembered that many years ago there was a book on the site about traveling as a golden retriever to run for president. It was originally written for fun, but the reality and the plot actually matched up. The golden retriever really ran for president and really started to build momentum, and then the book was blocked. It is really a pity.

Now that my spiritual vision is better, I feel that the whole book is a bit petty.

With all the majesty and murderous intent, I turned over all my personal income One hundred turned over to ninety-five, you know my methods Don't spend the remaining five dollars, pay me back four and eight dollars tomorrow morning Don't touch the two cents left, maybe I will use them later            - Roosevelt, the Emperor of the United States

After reading thirty chapters, I have one question: This is more like the United States of the last century than modern America. Because several key issues are not covered: race, religion, illegal immigration, drugs, gangs, gender, and sexual orientation. Almost all of them focus on the economic level. It is a unique United States suitable for Chinese babies, but it is not so real.

I'm curious when this book talks about religion. Religion is something that the United States absolutely cannot overcome. We can even boldly say that religion is strongly bound and related to Americans' moral concepts, and their moral concepts cannot be established without religion.

"How did the United States become like this? If the lighthouse of mankind has become decayed and dilapidated, then it will be up to me to rebuild the lighthouse with my own hands." This sentence was the first reaction I had after seeing the introduction to this article. The author chose a very interesting entry point. This is a point that many people have thought about: If I were to be a national leader, what would I make the country look like? If the country is in dire straits, how can I save it? It is the dream of countless men to hold the sky and save the country from fire and water. The concept and core idea of ​​this novel have a very strong sense of attraction and expectation. Using Roosevelt as the protagonist of Goldfinger is also an ingenious design, because Roosevelt not only has an extremely good understanding of American society, but he is also the highest power that has ever truly dominated this country, a three-in-one power that is far more powerful than other presidents. The foreshadowing at the beginning uses speech-like language to describe the current situation of the protagonist and the United States, stimulating emotions and building up momentum for release. The first short plot, starting from the community where the protagonist lives, quickly outlines the prototype of a vivid political small group, clearly describing everyone's crisis, enemies, fighting methods, as well as the fighting process and fighting results. Taking Chapter 20 as a short break point, there are certainly some minor flaws in the content of the first 20 chapters, such as the struggle part, the second negotiation after failure, the process is too short, the lack of response from people such as the mayor, judges, developers, etc., The results are issued too quickly, the entire struggle process is not emotionally consistent, etc... But the flaws do not hide the flaws. The idea of this novel is very good. The core of the idea is clearly written out, and the writing is visibly smooth. In situations including speeches, the words written are contagious. The plot advances without any lag, and the things readers want to see are well written. While the relevant knowledge is highly professional, it can be explained in an easy-to-understand manner. Summary: A unique and brilliant political article, keep it up!

When I saw Chapter 524, it was written in a repetitive way. This problem was solved. Another problem came immediately, and it was written in the same way. It kept deceiving. I was speechless. I was feeding the dog with my money.

I thought the author of this novel was pretty good from the very beginning, and it has become more and more popular recently, but the rhythm lately is just wrong, it's all sadistic. Don't tell me in the comments section that this book is popular because it is true. This book was exciting from the beginning. From a little bitch to a mayor, we thought it was awesome because we couldn't understand American politics. Nowadays, Internet articles are written in much the same way. The content of this book is something I have never read, so I like to read it. But this is still a novel. Internet articles are indispensable for their enjoyment. The author did not say that he cannot accept criticism. Some readers have begun to make gods. Can't they accept the objective evaluation of other readers? This book is really good to read, and it is true that the rhythm has been a little off recently. The key is that the fan base has grown, and people have started to speak out.

I saw the chapter about illegal immigration and abandoned it. How can you, an NT, have the confidence to make a wish to the mayor? Not only do you need a job but also a high salary? The mayor is even more idiotic. He dares to call all illegal immigrants from surrounding cities to gather here without doing research. Regardless of whether he can bear it or not, his city cannot solve the problem. I have never seen such a disgusting Virgin. Illegal immigrants are here and receive high wages, but what about the locals?

Let's just cut it. I've written relevant opinions countless times. The main problem is that you suppress the protagonist too hard. In fact, this is not a problem. I have read countless books that suppress the protagonist, but your suppression has no rhythm. Every time when the reader thinks that it is going to be a little cool, you still choose to suppress it. It makes people feel disgusting. The people who wrote the first 600,000 words make people feel completely different from the people who write now. Take me as an example. At first I watched it for fun, but later I really wanted to see the emergence of characteristic capitalism in the United States. But the rhythm of this book has been completely different since you started to focus on hot topics. Now it is all for the sake of pressure. Do you think you are writing a political article with any depth? In this environment, which reader can say that he understands American politics well? You only need to give readers a politics that they think is appropriate. Just like A, you can't understand this principle? I only read political articles, should I read your book📖? As my title said, do you still have the passion to write now? Your grades are like this, why don't you wake up? Just cut it, use this one as a lesson learned, and open another one. Get back the old Leo, the people's Leo.

Reading 163 chapters in one breath made me tired. It felt like an ancient novel wrapped in a book of certificates. It was always on the road of conflict. Even if a problem was just solved in one chapter, a new big problem suddenly popped up in the next line. It was always in a superposition of what could be solved and what could not be solved. There was no buffer period. These policies brought What impact has come, and what kind of changes have been brought about by these policies to the people below, the author has always mentioned it in one stroke And the characters in the book are very facial-shaped. The first dozens of chapters are a little better, but in the later chapters, it seems that what happened is panic ➡️Find the protagonist ➡️The protagonist is confused and ask Lao Luo ➡️Perfect solution and everyone is happy. Repeating this operation makes me feel that these characters have no use except to shock, and there is absolutely no shining point for people to remember. And there is the protagonist. The author should think of a small character slowly changing his mentality step by step, but I don't know if he wants to highlight Lao Luo. After reading so many chapters, the protagonist reaches the next conflict point and his skill bar seems to have been completely cleared. He was firm one second and confused again the next. It is very dramatic. Sometimes I want to laugh when I see it. Sometimes I feel that the protagonist is like a clown in the author's writing🤡.

At first I thought it was a masterpiece, but now it has dropped from fairy grass to grain. The current protagonist knows how to use one trick to coerce public opinion and threaten the superiors. He can do it once or twice. If he does this every time, won't he get tired of it? Moreover, the writing is long and stinky, and I can't even finish one thing in a week. It's just a medical bill. First, I started with Luigi, and I wrote it for a week. Now I've passed the House of Representatives and moved on to the Senate. Why don't you leave it here to write historical records? Can you have more water? Now that I'm still floating, I've written a side story, do you really think your grades are good enough?

You are writing Internet novels, not real-life novels. Everyone comes here to read novels to find a sense of immersion. Not to mention that you have been criticized by others, and you have repeated the plot more than ten times in the novels with readers' feedback that you are 0 defensive and waiting to be beaten. Now you are also a commentator on current affairs? You are just an author, not a Chinese think tank. It's embarrassing to watch the analysis. Later, Roosevelt is not like Roosevelt. He keeps talking about how much the protagonist has grown. When facing problems, it is still the same as the story in the first chapter: Save me, Mr. Roosevelt! And the protagonist is written like a ruthless political machine, ruthless, loveless, bloodless, and tearless. I also want to talk about the differences in political, cultural and ideological differences between China and the United States. Political lessons can be done in the classroom, in a bar, or in a club. Why do you have to talk about it in a novel? The last thing a creator should do is try to teach the audience. You have reflected on the problem yourself before. Have you changed it? Will you change it? Can you change it?