American Comics: Transform into Kamen Rider After Meeting Little Spider

Your punishment mechanism is outrageous. You might as well say that because of the appearance of you as Kamen Rider, the Kamen Rider universe is attracted by you, so the Marvel universe you are in and the Kamen Rider universe are integrated with each other. This will lead to a "crossing" situation between the two universes, and then the decade will cross over to find out why chimera occurs.

And the writing is also very strange. You have so many inexplicable psychological descriptions, which are completely unnecessary. It seems a bit too weird, especially the abstract section.

So far it looks okay, but the punishment mechanism is a bit silly

Two Spiders in One World is a bad article.

To sum it up: Marvel is a cesspit. I wanted to see some external power to make the ending better, but the author insisted on bringing Shukara in to make the cesspool even more cesspit and want readers to eat it 😅

I have read several Kamen Rider Marvel movies. Let's talk about one failing: the punishment mechanism is too severe! First of all, there are indeed relatively few events in Marvel movies, but judging from what the author wrote, it is not a movie, it is a hodgepodge, so a pure knight versus hero is enough to write and watch. Secondly, the punishment mechanism is disgusting to readers. The system draws back the bad things, but they still appear out of thin air. The punishment mechanism is too serious. I personally think that your punishment mechanism should be adjusted smaller, such as randomly making Marvel characters gain certain aspects of memory, strengthening certain characters into monsters, and certain items.

I can accept you drawing the card repair organization memory and becoming a villain or something. The punishment mechanism of beating you is too disgusting. Top-level boosts just after you start developing?

1. The characters are Tony brothers. 2. Spider-Man is not the Dutch version. 3. A weirdo with a knight's worldview. These three elements are always inseparable, and there is always one of them.

Since you are going to write Kamen Rider, you must be prepared to become a hero.

The male protagonist's character is too childish. The Marvel plot is not well written and he insists on adding a villain in the world of Kamen Rider. However, it becomes nondescript. I suggest the author go to DC to understand what a hero and the darkness of the world are.

666, I don't see the benefit of the protagonist hiding it from Tony at all.

Both of his parents died when he was born, and the eldest brother is like his father. Tony raised his younger brother, which is both a brother and a father and son.

I asked what it is like to use Satellite Zeya like a voice assistant. It has functions such as learning, calculation, manufacturing, and development knights, but none of them are used. That can calculate the short future, and it doesn't use as much as Jarvis.

When will it be time to try the must-try Christmas Dead Man part of Tokusatsu 😁

It's boring at the beginning, I haven't seen Kamen Rider before

There are a lot of typos and wrong paragraphs. Did you check it after you finished writing?

Chapter 171 Did he transform in public at the racing track?

I want to confirm, does our book have an outline?

I understand chivalry, and I hope to see that the protagonist's chivalry is exclusive to the protagonist, because every knight's chivalry is different, but in summary, it can be said in one sentence: Kamen Rider Kuuga protects everyone's smiles, Yajida protects the possibilities of human beings, 555 protects the dreams of others, W, protects the city where he is, and the old driver protects the citizens, Ai Kesaide is the ultimate rescuer and protects patients. Kamen Rider Soki protects love and peace. Even Wang Xiaoming, who walks in the gray area, has something to protect, which is the world of his girlfriend. In order to protect his girlfriend's world, he will not hesitate to become enemies of all the knights. During the Kamen Rider period, the king protected history. If history runs normally, no one will remember him? Including himself, but once someone interferes with the correct direction of history, the Knight King will appear and correct this mistake. Therefore, every Kamen Rider has chivalry. What is chivalry? It is the belief that you persist in. No matter it is good or bad, as long as you protect you, you are a Kamen Rider. Regardless of whether your guardian is someone else or yourself, chivalry is the only difference between a weirdo and a knight. Knights with chivalry are called masks. Knights without chivalry can only be called weirdos, or alien knights. The reason why alien knights look so ugly is because they use this power to satisfy their own selfish desires and their evil hearts. This kind of appearance comes from the heart. This is a strange knight. Because he has no knight's heart and spirit, that's why his appearance is so ugly. I suggest you find your predecessor, the Mask, Knight, and Rider who lives in the DC world. His name is Ke Wen. Learn from him and develop your own Kamen Rider form. You always use other people's discriminatory forms. When you go to the show in the future, you will meet two identical ones. Wouldn't you feel embarrassed? Therefore, it is best to create a knight form that is exclusive to you. Only this knight form that is exclusive to you can exert 100% of your original power, or even reach 1000%, to exert your strength. Specifically speaking, chivalry means that when you hear the cry for help, you cannot ignore it. When they meet people in trouble, they will lend a helping hand. The Kamen Riders are not gods, they are also human beings, and they will also fail, but for the hope in the children's hearts and the dreams in their hearts, no matter how many times they fail, they will stand up, even if many people in the world are against the Kamen Riders. To have a person, you need a Kamen Rider to call the name of the Kamen Rider, and they will appear, because they are warriors who protect the weak. Children, move forward, believe in the justice in your heart, and we will always protect you, because we are the heroes of the children, Kamen Rider, What is the heart of a knight? Isn't it just idealism? What is idealism? Some people do it for the hope of others, some people do it to protect smiles, some people do it for love and peace, some people do it for the health of patients, some people fulfill their obligations, some people do it for food, some people do it for the community, no matter what they do, knights are a group of lovely guys who have a reason to fight. Just like Xiao Ming said in the last chapter of Master Fa, knights never fight for justice. There is always a reason to fight. The reason why knights are knights is because of their heart. Otherwise, what is the difference between it and supernatural novels? In addition, don't ignore the essence of chivalry. Don't make the protagonist miserable like most knight novels. The essence of chivalry's heart is not that the protagonist wants to protect others no matter how miserable he is, but that he never forgets the heart of protecting others no matter when and where. This is The true appearance of Kamen Rider, the hero of children, I am the most essential form of Kamen Rider. To put it simply, chivalry is to use a mask to hide tears, use anger to crush the darkness, use the fists in your hands to protect the weak, and use this body to create a future for the world. This is the hero of children.

There are some questions that I am curious about and I would like to ask the author 1. Has the weather memory been scrapped and recycled? 2. Does the satellite belt have Humaciya? 3. Will the protagonist use Satellite Zea or Tony to continue developing the Kamen Rider system (or the protagonist will use a developer talent such as War Rabbit to continue development)

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Although this book has a lot of poisonous points, the writing style is average, and even the sentences are not fluent, but at least the protagonist has a certain level of chivalry, team fighting, friendship and bonds, and it is a fake invincible book, so you can still read it.