Records of Hundreds of Supernatural Powers

Writing a book is not easy, so stay with me!

As the title says, this novel is really interesting. Although the title of the book seems to have a fantasy flavor, it is a little better than the previous title. 🙂 First of all, I think the most worthwhile aspect of a supernatural novel is the character's supernatural powers. The abilities here can be said to have mechanisms and values. At present, not many of the protagonists' abilities have been shown, but the villains are more interesting than the last. It's not just about controlling water or fire, but it's more like a more complicated rule type? The method of activating superpowers tends to be idealistic. Each ability has a price and a weakness, which controls the upper and lower limits to a certain extent, which is quite interesting. (Fighting is fun, I need fighting to be fun 😡😡😡) The second is the plot. It seems that the main line does not have much presence, and most of the early stages feel like branch lines. Are you holding back your ultimate move, or is the novel itself a weak main plot? It seems that it has always been like this, but the introduction also said that it is slow to warm up. So it is a bit strange, not the type of fast-paced Long Aotian Shuangwen. However, because there are gaps in intelligence information between multiple forces and between people, it feels a bit suspenseful in a battle of wits. Another strange thing is that it is quite counter-conventional. The male protagonist's parents are still alive. I don't think this is very common in men's online articles, right? Usually, either the parents are missing, but the family background of the bloodline is very strong, or there are simply no single parents, grandparents, relatives, adoptive parents, etc. If you live in a city, you usually have a girl and a house. But this one doesn't. Both the male protagonist's parents are living well, and he is still an only child! It's a bit strange. It is worth mentioning that the supporting characters all have interpersonal networks. Kind of true I tell the truth. While the members of the protagonist group made new partners, they did not forget their old friends, which is very consistent with the actual situation of real life. People don't stop interacting with old friends just because they have met new ones. And the existence of old friends here also plays a certain role in promoting the plot. The arrangement is reasonable and okay. In addition, supernatural powers are suddenly awakened, but they are only limited to a very small group of people. The number of superpowers determines the somewhat depressing style in the early stage. It seems like you want to show off these unique abilities, right? After all, it's easy to collapse if you write too much. As mentioned before, superpowers are very interesting. Being able to display all the abilities in detail is a great success. The emotional scenes currently have a family line and a friendship line. I wonder if there will be a love line later? I don't object to some emotional threads being interspersed. But if it's a group portrait, it feels like there will be a knife. 😥 The writing style is indeed very good. It feels like the kind that teachers would select and read aloud to display outstanding compositions in Chinese classes. The atmosphere of the scenes, the appearance of the people, and the display of abilities are all very good. The chapter names are also a bit showy. Because of the multi-threading, multi-perspectives, and the use of narration and flashbacks, it is difficult to read at a glance, otherwise you may get confused accidentally. 😵 Every scene and person feels like a unit drama, but the advantage is naturally that it can explain the causes and consequences of some things super perfectly. His writing skills are relatively solid, and his writing style is sometimes dark and cold, and sometimes lighthearted and funny. Let's be honest, it's a bit more beautiful and magical because of its imaginative powers. Generally speaking, there are advantages and disadvantages, but it depends on personal preferences and highlights. But after all, it is also the first book by a new author. Dare to touch the slow-paced group portrait with multiple perspectives. It's courageous. I'm personally looking forward to it with a wait-and-see attitude. 😅

The writing has a good sense of urban life. Sometimes there is a sense of daily life that is neither busy nor urgent, but it seems that it is because of this that there is no clear sense of urgency for the main task

I thought the title was funny and light-hearted, but I didn't expect it to be funny, but it's quite interesting (the introduction doesn't contain too much information, so the brackets at the end are useful). I think the writing style is okay, and the story is pretty good when I read it. The archiving and reloading, the scheming protagonist of Zhou Mu, has the feeling of a genius club, which really attracted me. It's just that the angle of view feels like a puzzle. To be honest, the dividing lines are not obvious enough. It would be better if they were lengthened. Then the beginning begins with the Riddler telling the story. It feels like there is no traditional main line, and the protagonist's goal is not clear. Is it because of the beginning? This kind of perspective branching into the narrative is okay and quite interesting. However, when more people appear later, it still feels like it is quite confusing. After all, it is a group portrait and there are chat records with online names. It does feel a bit, um, dizzy to read like this. The overall feeling is okay, the story is interesting, please post to support it. 🙂