The World's Recovery Begins with Worshiping the Great Sage

After thinking about it for a while, it should be that the author has always written fan fiction before and has not changed his ways. This time he wrote something original and broke through. However, because he wrote too many fan fiction, the writing pool was polluted. Not used to dealing with the main line, and at the same time assuming that readers have a consensus, causing the author to have an intellectual disability. The author may want to consider this. The perspective of the reader and the author do not have the same worldview recognition as before, but now the difference between the two perspectives is even greater.

It seems subtle, the setting is very common, and the logic is self-explanatory. But it's just not clear enough. After thinking about it, it may be that there is not enough foreshadowing, and there are no causes and consequences. When reading, it gives people a "strange feeling" when reading from the middle of the story. I can deduce the causes and consequences, but it just feels inexplicable. The writing is exciting but it feels like writing a suspense thriller. The behavior of the protagonist and the supporting characters is logically reasonable on the surface, but for me as a reader, I can guess but not understand. Inexplicably, it's like having a semi-lucid dream, with a main line but a trance. And the protagonist's golden finger is also unclear. Is it because of the special time travel? So Brother Monkey forcefully recognizes the protagonist as his apprentice, and then Brother Monkey gives the protagonist a benefit by asking the protagonist to meet Lao Jun to recognize him, set up a stick (background) for the protagonist, and then let Lao Jun decide whether to give the benefit (plug-in)? And this benefit is suspected to be a scripture, but what is it? I don't know, I just know that as long as the protagonist adds resources, he can improve the protagonist's soul through "weight-bearing knowledge training soul" (shown as understanding improvement and spiritual consciousness cultivation). There may be knowledge in the scriptures but the scope is uncertain. I can understand it but I am speechless. This is a complete black box. Whatever the author says, there is no possibility of the author taking advantage of the settings or patching it. It feels so uncomfortable. I thought it was a problem with my writing skills, but the author didn't seem to be like this before. It's because there is no outline and it doesn't feel like it.

So far, I think it's okay, but it's indeed a bit slow, the main plot is not strong enough, and the plot points are not very coherent, which makes the current daily life seem a bit boring. Maybe it's because the author used to write fan fiction and had a relatively clear and fixed main plot, which made it easier for the author to intersperse additional explosive points and branch plots with the existing main plot. Now that I'm writing an original story, I have to write the main plot myself, so I'm a little uncomfortable with it. I still hope that the author can adjust as soon as possible and earn a lot of money.

They say it's slow to build up, but why do I feel like the plot is moving too fast? It feels like the author started the story he originally wanted to tell and then suddenly ended it quickly.

Guy! I love you so much, Fengxiang people.

Boss, can you go back and write about delicious food to share with fellow prisoners? Anything else is fine too.

The plot is good, but the writing still has room for improvement.

Come on, author, Jiangjiang is here, stick your little head out here

How can I put it this way? It's a weird thing to read. It's kind of… I'll just count it as food. I've read all the previous books except Fengxiangren. Anyway, keep going.

The author is tired of writing fan fiction and is he ready to create something original?

Are you still writing a fanfic of Genshen Bengtie zzz?

Although I haven't read any of the author's Pokémon, Fengxiangren has read it three or four times (although it's not at the starting point, but it's a QQ reading, and it's genuine). Although this book looks awkward due to lack of settings in the front, it's still very comfortable to get through, and it feels familiar to Fengxiangren. Good luck, author! By the way, I suggest the author add a single chapter at the front of the book to systematically introduce the world view, which will make it more comfortable (as long as the settings are explained in advance, the disadvantage of not introducing the settings can be avoided)

So many people, so few comments, it feels like comments have been deleted.

In fact, the plot so far is quite simple and clear. There are two main bright lines. One is the whereabouts of the gods and Buddhas headed by the Great Sage, and the other is why the world was broken into pieces. It is very clear, but these two bright lines can only be released to readers at a very later stage. The arrangement of explosive points and excitement, the dark line is nothing more than an investigation of the evil heretics in human beings, but the reason why the dark line is a dark line is because it is a clumsy line, which will not bring any rapid excitement. Therefore, the current plot gives readers a serious lack of excitement and explosive points. Although the little monkey is indeed invincible among his peers, the genius level of other characters is not portrayed enough and not exciting enough. Moreover, the few small dungeons he has played so far are too calm and there is no sense of pressure at all, as if he is going on an outing. So I think it is best for the author to arrange a more stressful and difficult dungeon for the little monkey in the near future, and to strengthen it with some hearty desperate breakthroughs, otherwise it will be too bland.

You can't go wrong with the writing! Come on

Alas, I suddenly finished this book. It's a bit short. I'll work hard on the next one.