The Fourth Hokage, Uchiha Kagami, Faces Tobirama Fair and Square

I feel like the plot of this book is weird. First of all, there is the character issue of f4. They are all young at this time. No matter what the three generations say, when they are young, they will not be like the power monsters who cling to power and refuse to let go when they are old. After all, he was once known as a hero of endurance. How could anyone be so lifeless when he first came to power? At least it took until Minato Namikaze's time for him to gradually become corrupted. By the time I came back to power, I had completely turned into a political creature. I feel that the author did not control this point well at all. In short, I am very unfavorable about this book.

What is going on? Author, are you directly assigning the characters that Konoha F4 developed after decades of ups and downs to their youth?

It looks a bit tiring. Can the conversation be more relaxed and natural? It's always a long conversation.

Yes, I think the author can become an internet celebrity.

The characters of the old F4 are imposed on the young F4, and so far, almost all the characters lack shaping. They follow the plot for the sake of plot. The political struggle also lacks depth and is completely routine. Many characters are given a halo of reducing intelligence. In the end, even the integration of jokes failed. It feels like making jokes for the sake of making jokes, which is very unnatural (this shortcoming already existed in the later period of Dou Guang's book, but it is not obvious)

The title of the book needs to be changed from Fourth Generation to Third Generation. Sarutobi Hiruzen being the Third Hokage is a wrong collective memory. The Four are an anti-Konoha group. Isn't the one who succeeds Tobirama the protagonist? 🤫

When to fast forward to "Uzumaki Mito, listen" "I listen"

To be honest, I feel like this book will cut it. 1. It was too laborious to write. The plot of the original Hokage was not used, which meant that most things had to be original. Not to mention the original plot, just thinking of the names and personalities of the supporting characters required a lot of effort. 2. The protagonist's reason for keeping the kaleidoscope secret in Chapter 2 is also speechless. In the current timeline, Konoha F4 can only support 4 jounin. If the third generation has the strength of the late Kage level, will the second generation be used to cut off the queen? The protagonist turned on the kaleidoscope, but he didn't dare to go up and fight a few jounin. At least he could maintain his balance even if he didn't win. In the end, he just found an excuse to be a coward. 3. The problem of Konoha F4. I thought that there would be surprises when I saw the young F4, but I was disappointed. It was still the same old routine, which was to exclude and suspect Uchiha and to be a power monster. It was the same as the plot decades later. I thought, then I might as well write the timeline of the original work, or write a sequel after the previous one. Why bother to do this? According to the plot of the original work, the protagonist is currently in an era where Konoha has only been founded for more than ten years, Ban has only defected for a few years, and has lost the first and second generations. The major families within it do not fully trust it. It is an era of ups and downs. This era background, the first volume The content, shouldn't it be that brothers are of the same mind? The protagonist and Konoha F4 work together to maintain the fragile Konoha, convince the families and other ninja villages, and help Konoha reach the top. You must know that in the original work, the old Konoha F4 will miss Uchiha mirror, and the relationship is definitely not bad when they are young. The content of the second volume is that the brothers turned against each other, the power was divided, and the external world was stabilized. Danzo wanted to make progress and assassinated the third generation, and then the protagonist and Konoha F4 began to fight internally. The third volume is the end of the internal fighting and the beginning of the world competition.

It feels very strange, and I like the subject matter very much. But I feel like my writing skills are very poor. The author has also followed more than half of the last book, and I have always enjoyed reading it, especially in the early stage when I was battling wits with f4. This book feels weird when I read it. To be honest, it doesn't look like it was written by the same person...

This book is probably about: After awakening the Kaleidoscope, I climbed up to the position of Hokage (with astonishing wisdom and a little bit of stone) using an amazing story line (dialogue), frustration and darkness.