Immortal Lord: Starting from a Hundred Days of Foundation Building

I was embarrassed when I read Chapter 6. Why is the inner monologue so mediocre? The choice of words and sentences and dialogue are also weird, but the rest is okay

Some suggestions and encouragement for the author. I personally like classical fairy novels very much. The representative works are like Dao Zheng Zheng and Xian Ye. Needless to say these classics, the author can refer to them, such as realm setting and world view structure. But you must remember that you must write your own new things such as supernatural powers, magic weapons, fighting skills, and storylines! The name of the book does not need to be changed, but if it must be changed, remember not to use the title of an Internet celebrity! The title of the book must be fairy-like! I like Zhou Tianxingchen's supernatural powers very much. The author can think about it in this aspect! Understand the true meaning of the Big Dipper, get a divine light, and destroy all laws. Comprehend the true meaning of the Six Stars of the South Dou, and gain a divine power to avoid death and calamity, and extend life and increase happiness. We Taoists also have many classics about the stars in the sky, such as "Dan Yuan Zi Bu Tian Ge", "Five Fighters", "Yun Ji Qi Lian" and other Taoist classics. You can read more of these Taoist classics. When writing classical fairy tale novels, you must read more Taoist classics! Nowadays, it is rare to see fairy tale novels on the Internet that use Zhoutian stars as magical powers, so the author can read more Taoist classics. If you write it well, no one else has it like you, and your work has cultural heritage, your book will definitely stand out!

Sorry, I wrote about some family, dynasty, etc. For a long time, but it has nothing to do with the innate Taoist bones and universal knowledge. It implies that in the later period, it will be about developing various families and recruiting apprentices. Ah, this. I originally thought that the protagonist would be a cool story, but I always felt that the plot was messy and not very satisfying.

My inspiration is a little exhausted. Please give me some spells. I originally wanted to write Ten Thousand Magic Styles, but it seems unrealistic. In the future, the protagonist should mainly use thunder magic, as well as big capture, and add some five-element spells. But I have not given up all kinds of strange and endlessly changing spells, so please give me some magic and give me some inspiration (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Alas😮‍💨I deleted two posts, both mine, because I didn't want the comment area to look too thin 🥺

Fellow Taoists are welcome to read and comment! Come on, author!

It's very well written. I like it very much. Come on✪ω✪

As an author and reader who has wanted to write a book countless times but couldn't persist, I hope your book will become a hit.

I want to change the title of my book, what should I change? I thought about changing it while the book was still early🙂🙂

Encouragement

Ask the author when it will be published?

Not enough😒

It's a bit long-winded, and the plot progress is a bit slow.

Do more, not enough 😁

Looking at today's title, I almost thought I was a eunuch. Writing this kind of classical fairy tale requires a lot of experience. You may not get good results at the beginning, but as long as the number of words increases, there will be no shortage of readers in the future! Aren't these books about the struggle between the great avenues and the celestial beings a profound accumulation of knowledge? The author should refer to it a lot, stay calm, and polish his work! Come on!

Is cultivating immortality all for the sake of immortality? Can't it be to create a prosperous age? Can't we achieve a world where everyone is equal?