Under One Person: I Really Don't Know How to View Daluo Cave

It looks pretty good so far. It's not like the conventional Dihua novel that I thought at first. At first I thought the protagonist was simply wearing clothes. Because his surname is Gu, he is considered to be a descendant of Gu Jiating. It turns out that the protagonist has an identity and past experience in the world under one person. It's like he has lived in the world under one person. The relationship between the protagonist and Gu Jiating seems to be a foreshadowing. Overall, it attracts me to watch.

Why did you, the protagonist, get kicked out of Biyou Village Circle?

The angle is good. Nowadays, most fan fiction is about how the protagonist is awesome. He does this today and cuts off that tomorrow, and solves so-and-so's heart knot the next day. There are very few protagonists with a sense of everyday Bambi like Lao Gu. It's quite interesting, but there are two things that can easily go wrong. One is that Mi Er has been drawing for so many years. The plot is actually very slow, and most of the content is memories. Modern stories are easy to write and finish Secondly, the foundation of one person's world view is actually the setting of classic urban novels. We must first have such a world and then supplement the world view. There are actually many contradictions and nonsense at the bottom. Especially when writing modern stories, and from the perspective of a company, there will be many places where Mi Er's setting is a bit nonsense but written like this in the novel. It depends on how the author handles it. I wish the author an early signing 😏

I feel like a native but I know the original plot. There is a system on my body. I feel like I am wearing it, but in fact it is very similar to soul penetration, because I have Qi in the beginning. But if there is a system, everything can be attributed to the system. At the beginning, the protagonist thought that he had traveled to Biyou Village through his soul, but after going down the mountain, he discovered that he had passed through the spirit of an intelligence officer from the Nadotong headquarters who lurked into Biyou Village. How should I put it? It's very strange. This is the content of Chapter 30!

After going down the mountain, I suddenly became a man who knows everything. It was a bit jumpy. I even rowed back to see what was going on.

Are you a time traveler? Looking at the profile, he looks like an aborigine.

I feel like Fu Rong was not handled particularly well. And although it is understandable that the protagonist's identity is suddenly thrown out in order to catch up with the company, the protagonist adapts to his identity too quickly. Dou's handling of the protagonist is also very strange. The contact person can't get the code and doesn't respond. Shouldn't we be suspicious? It was only lowered once and then released immediately. Isn't this treatment a bit light? It might be better to even ask.

After all, compared to when you need the refreshing feeling of a book to comfort your soul when you are sad, it is a good book to read when you have nothing to do. After all, the starting point is Biyou Village, a place that is almost in the middle. After all, I have not finished the original book. Of course, the frustrating moments written in the book are a bit too realistic and hurt my heart. Next time, write more vaguely for me

Not bad, but the quantity is small. I finished reading it in a while. More to come.

I didn't understand it. I just saw a little bit of logic, and then it was messed up. It felt like the plot was being pushed forward and inserted. Then what does the chapter title have to do with the content? It was so high-minded that I was confused.

I have read 48 chapters, which should be quite a few. The overall feeling is very awkward. What the protagonist does does not match his abilities. His performance is limited by others. The golden finger effect and growth curve are not obvious. The combat power is vague. There is no clear goal for the future. I am confused as I read. What role does the protagonist play? However, the character setting is good, especially the dialogue is very interesting. I look forward to the follow-up.

Come on, author, the sauce is here, bubbling here

So what exactly is Daluo Cave Temple like? ? ? ? ? 😡

The writing is very frustrating. For example, with Master Hu, people are coming to fuck you, so you just subdue them and treat them like a soft persimmon?

I'm starting to get confused. At least explain your abilities and background clearly.