Across the Heavens, Beginning in the Republic of China Era of Ghosts and Gods

In the first three chapters, the protagonist's emotions of greed, anger and ignorance are all revealed. He has been complaining about others, about being hunted, about there being nothing new under the sun, and about not having a good person in the Bai family..., One has nothing to do with him, and the other is self-inflicted due to his own reasons. It feels that none of the protagonist's brothers are close to him. What moved the protagonist was that he said that he was not afraid of being chased, and at worst he would have been reincarnated (as for why the protagonist was not afraid of the Maoshan sect with people in the underworld, we don't know). After that, the protagonist said that he was "repaying the kindness" and wanted to repay the favor of saving his life, but in the end he didn't repay you. You are not grateful when someone saves you. You look down on them. He was very reluctant and left with a promise to repay you next time.

A hodgepodge of random stews, various training systems, and the practice of cultivating immortals is not as good as practicing martial arts.

They are all the emperors of the same country, and their cultivation is also at the level of a big boss, but they end up sworn in with a group of thieves. I won't write it if it's divorced from the plot.

Let's change the beginning! Isn't it said later that the protagonist and Zhao Gongming are brothers, then it is estimated that the protagonist is the saint's direct disciple who died due to being a god and then reincarnated. The ancient world talks about cause and effect. Except for the incarnation of the Tongtian leader, can other gods and demons be the protagonist's masters? The author can't mess around just because he likes Maoshan!

This kind of world cultivation system should be replaced immediately. What a rubbish system with all kinds of restrictions.

Grab a copy. The setting is dog S, the protagonist and characters are not well written, and the plot is templated.

There are too many crappy, nondescript and fusion things. It's too messy. If it's better to become an immortal than to practice martial arts, who can cultivate immortality? Isn't that funny?

You can read it, but you can see it all at a glance. Most of the latter parts are either unsatisfactory and cut off or the content is broken and there is nothing interesting. On the one hand, the sewing is too messy, and it is not very harmonious for one person to sew the world view of Jiu Shu. The former clearly does not have heaven, earth, gods, and the latter is dead as long as he is a well-known and upright Taoist priest with some cultivation. Not to mention that you can get a good pregnancy even if you work in the underworld. On the other hand, the protagonist has already died. He thought he was going to start a grassroots counterattack from scratch. Who would have thought that not long after the plot, the protagonist's identity became that of the unknown boss who arranged to be reincarnated in the small world to experience life. Then Zhao Gongming, the God of Wealth, directly fed the resources and took off. How? So, at this point, the protagonist's growth potential is gone. It's unconvincing growth to try to write it out. Even if you have to set up an awesome past life background identity for the protagonist, the author exposed it so early. Even Ye Fan didn't start a little until the middle and late stages of the plot after a long period of time. It is revealed that he may be the reincarnation of someone, and then he has to endure hardships. The protagonist of the urban rebirth novel has to save his first pot of gold step by step after he is reborn, and slowly build up his strength to deal with enemies from all directions. The protagonist has a problem, and he was awesome in his previous life. In this life, he has gods and bosses feeding him resources, and his cultivation level keeps rising. So what else can readers read? Watch him just save some ticket money and then travel across the world to use his cultivation to bully the small ones, or should he ask his immortal friends from his previous life to fight for him? It is passionate to defeat the strong by the weak, and it is refreshing to rise from the grassroots. This is something that most people can take in and gain emotional experience. But the big boss descends to earth and pretends to be a mortal to experience life. This kind of plot is different from playing a game and a high-level player switches to a novice account to fish in a novice-level pool, or even the high-level player shamelessly cheats?

You are not allowed to take revenge if your whole family is killed?

Lin Fengjiao prevents the protagonist from avenging his parents! How does the author deal with this kind of person? Other books are all about gods blocking and killing gods!