If You Don't Want to Be a Soldier, How Can You Be a Model for the Entire Army?

I feel like my recent writing has become a bit formulaic, repeating nonsense about responsibility, spirit, etc., Almost like reading a press release. Occasionally adding a paragraph to boost morale or reflect the spirit is fine, but it gets boring if it is mentioned constantly. The protagonist is also a bit deified. I always feel that there is a natural distance from other people. There is less pyrotechnics. The creation of other characters is difficult to leave an impression. I still hope that the author can adjust his state and come up with a good follow-up.

It looked okay from the beginning, but suddenly a heroine appeared, and then the protagonist is still a novice, blushing at every turn For this kind of military system text, either you know a lot about this aspect (at least you don't understand it at all), or you simply don't add romance. If the protagonist is like this, I really don't recommend adding a heroine 😅

Have you stopped updating?😥

Awesome, written by AI, I'm sorry for the context. I first wrote that we knew each other in the company. They were in the same class, and later they became acquaintances as second lieutenants. They joined the army two years later, so there is a reason for their poor grades.

It looks good, but it feels like one chapter is written into three chapters, especially when there is a sports meeting.

I've read Chapter 186 so far. The emotional scenes are too embarrassing and a bit toxic. It's best to brush them off in one go.

Ahhhh, desperate counterattack. The best

Is this book written in AI except for the beginning and the end? She just fell in love, and the heroine never appeared in the rest of the book. Later, she performed meritoriously to protect the political commissar, and asked the company commander to apply for third-class merit, but the merit was eaten.

From snow to sea, will the next step be sand?

Such a peaceful life at this moment is really precious