The Reincarnated Holy Lord Was Contracted by the School Beauty to Control the Beast

I couldn't stand watching part of it. The routine was too old. Those who didn't know it thought it was the Urban Dragon King, and the Holy Lord seemed like that fool.

Selling dog meat with a sheep's head is the template of the Holy Lord. It doesn't have the style of the Holy Lord and it doesn't look good.

I have read not only 100 but also 80 novels on reincarnation, rebirth, contract, and summoning. The main points to note are that in combat novels, the positioning and combat power of each character must be clear First of all: the protagonist must be powerful. The current plot has been reminding readers that Si Yao (until Chapter 200 is still not sure whether Si Yao is the male protagonist) is not strong, he is just a special existence, similar to the unlocking mission of a special NPC. (Minus points) Second: The plot has so far been written around Ke Lan (the empress's rebirth is understandable), but the whole process is written around it, and the description of the battle is not exciting, which will lead to readers becoming less and less interested, because I saw the "reincarnated Holy Lord", so the goal of writing obviously has nothing to do with the "Holy Lord" Third: A typical selling sheep's head is a dog-eat-dog, the combat power is too low, and does not qualify as "the strongest fire demon" The title is inconsistent with the content of the previous dozens of chapters. Sometimes cleverness can increase the interest of reading, but every time it is slippery Fourth: Clarify the combat power gap of each character. First of all, the setting of the empress's rebirth has made Si Yao not outstanding. Coupled with the newly added dragon eggs in Chapter 200, Si Yao's position has been further reduced, which further confirms that Si Yao is a supporting role, or even an irrelevant existence. It is completely inconsistent with the title of the novel and even goes off topic. It is also a serious points deduction, and the other points are not visible for the time being Suggestions: 1 Improve Si Yao's strength level, at least he can be worthy of the title "Holy Lord" 2 Add a combat part to the plot, and it must have the majesty of the Holy Lord, otherwise it will be easy to get bored after watching the plot that uses your brain. 3 The ranking of combat power should be in order, at least let readers know who is the strongest and the weakest in the protagonist group

It's just a pity that the male protagonist's combat power is a bit stretched and there are too few combat points. It would be better to write that the empress returns to the top with the system. I hope the combat power can be higher, so that she won't have to be clever every time.

The male protagonist's combat power is too low, and he only has the template of the Holy Master. It's like selling a sheep's head to a dog's meat, looking at the bid rather than the book, and the plot becomes more and more boring the further you go.

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