Marrying the Weaver Girl, There Is Something Wrong with My Wife

This book was written according to the previous outline to test the water, but it was a pity that it was eunuch 🙂🙂🙂

A large piece of plagiarism begins with cultivating immortality from marrying the Weaver Girl. It is recommended that it be removed from the shelves

The writing is very good and the graphics are very visual, but I didn't like the second copy. I read two or three chapters of the second copy and didn't continue reading. No matter how exciting the subsequent plot is, I don't like watching dramas where the male protagonist acts as a matchmaker and a love strategist to match up other people's feelings. Love, especially the Xu Xian who brought Xu Xian and Bai Suzhen together, and it was written that Xu Xian went to become a monk. He was so irresponsible, but he and Bai Suzhen were together. Even though Bai Suzhen helped many disasters, most of the disasters also came from Sister Bai Suzhen, even an ordinary person has been scared to death by the white snake body, so although she doesn't like him, she can understand it. It is not very annoying, and it is obviously not a good relationship. The protagonist even teaches Xu Xian how to pick up Bai Suzhen, and is not even willing to tell him Bai Suzhen's identity as a monster first so that he can know the truth about the other person and then decide whether to continue to like him after knowing the consequences of the other person's true body and the shemale falling in love. This kind of behavior is so unpleasant. Personally, I feel that the protagonist is even more annoying than Xu Xian, who is not very lovable in the first place.

The author borrows the red and white collision of "Cowherd and Weaver Girl" and "New Mr. Zombie" and the immortalization method of "Twin Eyes". Complete special conditions to allow ordinary people to embark on the path to immortality. As far as the latest chapter is concerned, the integration is pretty good, and the settings are slowly unfolding. I hope the rhythm of the subsequent plot can be maintained. Combine more classical mythology with supernatural elements. If you are new here, your scalp will definitely feel a little itchy when you first watch it. But I think it is a good book! 🌹 I hope there will be no eunuchs🔪🔪🔪

Speaking of which, there are a lot of old people reincarnated in the starting point.

My mind is very dizzy. To be honest, I didn't even understand who was the elder sister and who was the younger sister in the first dungeon, whether the protagonist was going to marry the elder sister or the younger sister, and whether it was the elder sister or the younger sister who was hanged in the ancestral hall. The names of the elder sister and the younger sister were too similar, and there were too many riddles in it. I was also fascinated by the training system, such as Sangmen Diaoke and Hongluan Tianxi, and I had no knowledge reserve in this area.

If you become a eunuch, remember to return the fifty yuan reward.

It's a mess, don't you think it's a very high level of writing?

Are you playing some internal joke in the group?

You are a newcomer. As an old reader, I have the obligation to remind you that updating 30,000 words per day is the bottom line at the starting point. The average level is about 50,000 words per day. If you want to achieve something, 100,000 words per day is necessary. These are the experiences of old readers. Others will not tell you easily, and they will also lie to you that updating 10,000 words a day is enough . This kind of person is bad and does not want to see you good. I am the only one who sincerely hopes that you can become a rising star, so you must at least reach the bottom line of 30,000 words a day. Come on

From the first three chapters, we know whether this book is 💩

The new dungeon is poorly written, various parts are unreasonable, and the storyline is sparse.

I was shocked after reading two chapters 😰

I signed the contract, and I didn't lie to you to write a remake. It's still the same. I beg you not to keep reading the new book issue. It's quite important to read the new book issue. It will be updated steadily. If you have any comments, you can leave them below the post and I will read them.

Your profile is a bit similar to Immortal to the End

The first simulated world felt okay, but after the second simulated world, the protagonist had the perfect wood attribute and felt less stressed. There is no pressure to die at any time. As a result, there seems to be no sense of suspense. Starting from the second simulation, it feels a bit like a romance novel. I hope it's not a romance novel, but I'm afraid it'll be suspenseful and folklore, and then it will be a romance.

The first copy is 10 points, the second copy is 2 points

If you rewrite it without adding Xuebai, are you worthy of Xinghe?

I have read this at the beginning, which book is it from...

After reading the book reviews, the response to the second copy was not good, and the author also directly changed the subsequent plot. The White Snake chapter is actually a transitional chapter, but it was not written well. Accept the punishment. The next copy has been fully revised, so you can read it with confidence. Finally, I shamelessly ask for a follow-up read. If you don't like reading the White Snake chapter, please read it to the end. It's quite important to follow up on the new book issue. The next dungeon will follow the same path as the first dungeon, so readers please rest assured😭

Fellow Taoists are welcome to read and comment! Come on, author!

I hope you can give me a lot of advice and thank you for your trouble

I don't have enough brain power. I can't see it clearly. I can't figure it out at all. I'll give you a first order. I really can't see it anymore.

Weird book, good-looking but strange You have to keep using your brain, and then give you a new puzzle that overturns all the previous inferences when you still have a little understanding of it and feel that you have touched the puzzle. Weird, looks tired

I always feel like I've seen it somewhere before

Ah, I answered a call and missed it again😭

Suitable for teenagers to read? Female author?

The first copy was confusing and I had to rely on my own forced logic to make up for it. I have been reading for more than ten years and it is difficult to read. If I read a little faster, my brain will be a ball of mush. If I read slower, my brain will still be mush. Anyway, it is difficult to explain. Generally speaking, I can read it. The second copy is very nonsense. The rewards obtained in the first copy and the magical powers that were promoted are not the first time to use the query, but the sudden need to use it later and the query is used with a look of surprise (I can believe that I have been promoted for half a month and I don't know how my magical powers have changed. When I need to use it, I look surprised. Wow, it's so powerful. It's really retarded.) From God's perspective, it's very awkward and goes against normal logic. Then about the heroine and her daughter-in-law, they forcefully disown each other, forcefully turn on the mentally retarded halo, and forcefully explain. It's the same as a piece of shit. I don't know what will happen next. It's so poisonous here that I can't bear it and leave.