One Piece: the Warring States Demon of the Beasts Pirates

Whitebeard will not fight Kaido because of Oden. The two have known each other much earlier than Oden. Oden always called him Big Brother Whitebeard when he was young, and they did not separate until the Valley of Gods incident. Kaido killed Oden. Whitebeard's men wanted revenge, but Whitebeard suppressed him. Later, Ace indirectly killed Kaido's Lizard King, who was Runti's father. Kaido also did not take revenge on Whitebeard. During the war, Kaido most likely went to participate in the war. He pursued a grand war, not purely to help Whitebeard, but he did do it.

Finally, someone is writing about this subject. It would be great if it was changed to a mixture of fur and human races. The fur race is also quite strong, with static electricity, moon lions, and animal specialties, but no one has written about it.

Wolves and dogs are two different demon clans in Inuyasha 😅, and they are a bit too open.

The writing is not bad, and the outline is readable, but the details of the plot are handled too poorly. If the writing is logical and smooth, this score would not be achieved. Moreover, if the writing is not dominant, the writing style also has a bit of ancient fantasy, which makes it a bit different. . .

I am invincible at every turn, but enemies will come from the sky soon.

Going back in time? I came to see Yamato.

Oh my God, Inuyasha! Tie Suiya - charge!

You can think of ways to strengthen your body. Isn't the pirate world enough to make you physically stronger?

I think the subject matter is okay, but the sentence segmentation is too uncomfortable, and the reading feels a bit unsmooth.

Great support from the author, Jiangjiang is here, I have read it, and I can't sleep!

So looking at the introduction, is Tie Suiya still the protagonist?

Overall it's okay, come on author, don't be a pigeon

Come on! Write well!